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Hold My Heart
Megan (Anonymous) on May 04, 2011 02:49 am (
CHARACTER PHOTO PAGE!)
Thanks for the mention on the character page! I love it...Everly is gorgeous! Matt is so adorable. The picture of JC with the beer and Grey Goose is fantastic, he looks so sneaky and proud of his Goose. The picture of Matt and JC together as Waldo and Gene Simmons is HILARIOUS...love it =). And the ABDC photo shot is great too...Lil Mama in her Pinklicious and JC with his Frankenstein boots. lol.
Megan (Anonymous) on May 04, 2011 02:42 am (
Chapter 16)
Haha Aimee makes things interesting...but in a good way. She is too funny going through Matt's drawers looking for condoms. Matt and Everly are just adorable together! Also, love the character page! Its nice to put a face with the characters...that picture of JC with the beer and Grey Goose is adorable and AMAZING =).
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on May 03, 2011 10:09 pm (
CHARACTER PHOTO PAGE!)
ah! where did you get the photo of jc with the bottle of grey goose? i love that one!
Author's Response: Honestly, I don't know where the actual photo came from. I just know it was posted somewhere online and another fan shared it with some of us superfans. I love it too! Thanks for commenting. I hope you're reading as well.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 03, 2011 09:18 pm (
Chapter 16)
Hmm..ribbed for extra pleasure or magnum man?? Well thats easy.. ;) Lets go with the magnum man...HAHAHH! Ok..I laughed at this line “I see how it is…when the cat’s away..the mice play.” Aimee is soo crazy and funny, she was invading Matt's bathroom..lolz And YAY! Everly and Matt are officially girlfriend and boyfriend..how sweet, looking forward to the next chapter, this is getting good.. Thanks for updating.. :)
babymomo79 (Anonymous) on May 03, 2011 05:49 pm (
Chapter 16)
I cannot decide who I want her to be with - JC or Matt? I have a feeling that Aimee is going to keep pushing the issue of her having two guys in her life.
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 03, 2011 02:54 pm (
Chapter 16)
Aimee is a piece of work, but I love her. Great job as always, I like how their relationship is progressing slowly.
Anonymous (Signed) on May 03, 2011 01:37 pm (
Chapter 16)
I am absolutely in love with Everly and Matt. Don't break 'em up, I don't want her with JC now. Hahaha. Please update as soon as you can.
Author's Response: It's really nice to know that people have been open to Matt being apart of the story. I wasn't sure how it would be received and have been pleasantly surprised by all the positive reviews. I find myself wishing she could just have both now. haha. I just hope that no matter what transpires everyone will still be happy with the outcome. Thanks for your review! Hoping to get another update out soon!
Megan (Anonymous) on May 02, 2011 02:12 am (
Chapter 15)
Argh! How can JC not have feelings for Everly with the way he was sooo flirting with her!! The meeting between Aimee and Matt should be entertaining.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 30, 2011 10:38 pm (
Chapter 15)
Come on now. You mean to tell me that JC doesn't have any feelings for Everly? Really? So out of all of his friends, he just happens to call Everly to go out for lunch? Mmmhmm! He reached for her hand and he helped her to stand up. It may seem like a polite gesture, but from anyone watching it could look like they were a couple! Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens when Matt and Aimee meet!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 30, 2011 09:44 pm (
Chapter 15)
YAY! Ok..the lunch break b/tween JC and Everly was nice, yes that is very sweet that JC invited her as well, since his girlfriend Megan cancelled on him.. ;) Anywho, if I was in Everly's shoes, I would be one happy girl, this line right here "That car was slick and sexy, just like the man who drove it. YES! I totally agree with you! *sigh* Now, lets get back to Matt, ooh two Monroe sisters hanging out at the his house?? Interesting, hmm..what might happen?? :D Great job, and Im glad you updated..
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 28, 2011 05:57 pm (
Chapter 14)
I'm really liking Everly and Matt together. When you first wrote that JC wanted to set them up, I gotta admit that I wasn't so sure, but now I love the two of them together. The only thing that would be better than Matt and Everly is JC and Everly! What I also like is Aimee! She is sooo awesome for checking for JC's size! She actually reminds me of one of my friends, she is very bold!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 08:03 pm (
Chapter 14)
*giggles* Magnum?? Heck yeah! Way to go JC, *fans herself* Is it hot in here or is just me?? lolz Ok, let me start from the top, I think thats real cute that Everly and Matt slept together, without intimacy of course, just shared a couple of cute morning kisses, things are going good for them... :) And Everly's sister Aimee, is so crazy, but she's a fun-loving kinda crazy, I can tell that Aimee is gonna be the one getting the juicy gossips, ;) she should hang out with Nathaniel! :D Anywho, Im loving every chapter so far, thanks for the update..
babymomo79 (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 05:27 pm (
Chapter 14)
Ha ha...I can already tell having Aimee around is going to make things interesting.
Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 02:04 pm (
Chapter 14)
Haha Everly's sister is funny getting all excited about Magnum size condoms! Cute chapter with Matt and Everly! Update soon...please =).
Author's Response: I'm trying to update as soon/fast as I can. I don't like it when too much time goes by. lol.
Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2011 07:50 am (
Chapter 14)
Everyly and Matt are so cute together. And I love her sister as well, the whole condom scene had me busting a gut laughing. I saw one spacing mistaking that got me a bit confused on who was talking, but otherwise the chapter was amazing. Update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad the condom scene had you laughing. Thanks for your review!
