Comments For Hold My Heart
Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2011 11:37 pm (Chapter 13)
Cute chapter! Matthew and Everly are so cute together! And good for Everly for accepting that JC is happy with that girl. Also, 'Pinklicious' for Lil' Mama is totally perfect! And yes I would like to see a character photo page...would be nice to put a 'face' with the characters in this story =).
Author's Response: What I love is how you comment on Matt and Everly, while everyone else focuses on JC. It's nice to know that another male character doesn't disappoint. Thanks for your reviews and I'm still considering the character page. So maybe you'll see one soon.
Author's Response: What I love is how you comment on Matt and Everly, while everyone else focuses on JC. It's nice to know that another male character doesn't disappoint. Thanks for your reviews and I'm still considering the character page. So maybe you'll see one soon.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 09:54 pm (Chapter 13)
Wow, I can't believe that JC was late! Oh my gosh, I love Randy Jackson, and his lingo, and pinklicious totally sounds like Lil Mama! But most importantly, I wanna see how this all plays out. I think Matt is a great guy, and a great distraction for Everly, but at the same time there's JC, but JC's got a girl now! This is so crazy. I wonder if JC had the same feelings for Everly!? I mean c'mon, how can he not!!!
Author's Response: Yeah...this definitely is a doozy. I find myself becoming attached Matt and his role was suppose to be a minor one. So much for that. I feel bad that she won't get to pick both in the end, despite this being fiction. haha.
Author's Response: Yeah...this definitely is a doozy. I find myself becoming attached Matt and his role was suppose to be a minor one. So much for that. I feel bad that she won't get to pick both in the end, despite this being fiction. haha.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2011 07:53 pm (Chapter 13)
"Pinkalicious" Lolz Only Lil Mama would come out with those colorful outfits, totally suits her..and yes and I quote "JC is always late, but he's worth the wait" ;) I wonder whats gonna happen next, I hope the "mystery brunette" treats him right, tee hee..and looks like everything is going smoothly b/tween Everly and Matt, ooh his place?? :D Interesting..good job, looking forward to next chapter.. :)
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 06:24 pm (Chapter 13)
I like that she's with Matthew but I really want to see how she (eventually) gets with JC. Get that myster girl out of the way. But I guess there wouldn't be a plot without their others, eh? Update soon!
Author's Response: Haha I'm not even entirely sure yet myself...there's so many scenarios swirling around in my head. Thanks for reading and hope you'll continue!
Author's Response: Haha I'm not even entirely sure yet myself...there's so many scenarios swirling around in my head. Thanks for reading and hope you'll continue!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Apr 24, 2011 08:54 am (Chapter 12)
This story gets better and better with each chapter. I can never wait to read more! Can she pick both guys in the end lol!
Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 24, 2011 12:34 am (Chapter 12)
Whew that was a good chapter. Love the emotion and everything in the begining to let us see into Everly's perspective on JC. Good for her for trying to move past JC not feeling the same for her. Love Nathaniel's humor...=). And a suprise visit by Matt, always fun!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 23, 2011 09:46 pm (Chapter 12)
WOW...the way that JC was described was beautifully written, I couldnt have said it better myself, *tear...all that is VERY true, I feel the same way for him.. :) Anyway, that was nice that Matt showed up at Everly's job, sharing some kissies..lolz and always Nathaniel to light up the mood..so far, her day is getting a little bit brighter, and look JC called her as well, yep..things are looking up.. Great job.. :D
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 23, 2011 02:19 am (Chapter 12)
Oh my gosh. Poor Everly. Trust me, I know from experience what it's like to crush on a guy, who's not crushing back! It hurts, but you gotta move on. It's a good thing she has Matt, and Matt's a really great guy! Everly just has to let fate take it's course. Besides, there's no better pick-me-up than a makeout session with a hot guy!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 22, 2011 08:33 pm (Chapter 11)
*thud* Yes THOSE pics, *sigh* I dont have a problem with them but you know....if he's happy, Im happy.. :D anyways in the pic that girl looks like me from the back(pssh, but how I wish it WAS me kissing him) AHH! Ok..let me stop..um..OMG! Trevor is a BEAST, he's so rude, and just UGH! And his chick Monica is a freak too. So nice that Matt said that nice little speech to Trevor, that wouldve kept his mouth shut, and now Everly has feelings for Matt, and also feelings for JC?? Hmmm...this is really good, looking forward to the next chapter.. Thanks for the update!
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 21, 2011 04:51 am (Chapter 11)
Oh my gosh! Trevor is an asshole! He is just one big, huge, giant ass! Ugghh! Anyways, poor Evers, I wonder how this is all gonna play out. I understand her feelings for JC, but at the same time Matt is great too. Oh, and by the way, about the drunken kiss, Everly may believe that JC's kiss didn't mean anything, but remember; A drunk mind, speaks a sober heart!
Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 21, 2011 01:54 am (Chapter 11)
Oh goodness this story is getting so good! I feel bad for Everly for having feelings for Matt but still having those feelings for JC and then seeing those pictures...bummer. I'm so hooked on this story, hope another update soon! =)
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 20, 2011 01:31 am (Chapter 10)
Yay! I'm so happy that Everly got the ABDC job! This was a really cute chapter, and I hope that JC comes around!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 19, 2011 08:34 pm (Chapter 10)
Yay! She got the ABDC job.. Congrats! *bravo* Ok first off, I couldnt help but smile as well when JC texted Evers that cute little smiley, he's so sweet.. :) And to have a kiss from JC is nearly every girl's dream(well fans of his..lolz) *sigh* Oh, and I liked the part where Evers was talking to Nathaniel about JC and Matt, lolz he loves the gossip I can tell..Above all, great job and thanks for the update..
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 15, 2011 08:33 pm (Chapter 9)
Dont worry I dont hate you *pats head* lolz Ok first off, JC is SUPER cute being all lovey dovey, I would seriously cherish those moments, even though he sent the wrong text..pssh, but good points for Everly for not going any further, and she got a cute little kiss from him as well, that was nice gift..lolz Even though HE wont remember anything after he gets some "summer loving" from the mystery chick..LOL! Great job..thanks for the update.. :)
babymomo79 (Anonymous) on Apr 15, 2011 07:11 pm (Chapter 9)
I am not liking JC right now. Kissing Everly and then letting that other girl into his house. What is going on with that man?!
