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Hold My Heart
mollyanna5 (Signed) on Sep 17, 2012 01:10 am (
Chapter 18)
I just read the entire story so far, it would be awesome if you continued it :)
Mack (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2012 12:14 pm (
Chapter 18)
UPDATE PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAASSSEEEE!
Megan (Anonymous) on Jul 07, 2011 03:08 pm (
Chapter 18)
hey...was just checking in to see if you were going to post an update anytime soon? I miss this story!!
browneyedgrl (Anonymous) on Jul 02, 2011 11:11 am (
Chapter 18)
This story is so good! I hope there will be more updates.
Mack (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2011 03:51 pm (
Chapter 18)
Are you going to update again soon? I can't wait!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry it's been a little over a month now. Life just seemed to get a little hectic and my momentum fizzled. (Plus both of my muses were messing with my heart in RL.) Yet, I'll try to get back to it soon. Thanks for asking and being patient. :)
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 17, 2011 04:21 pm (
Chapter 18)
Oh my gosh, I loved this chapter sooo much! Ahhh! I can't believe that Matt and Everly almost went there! I'm glad they didn't go all the way though, I agree with Everly it is abit too soon. And how sweet was it that Everly went to go check on JC? He kissed her on the forehead, awww! Hmmm, Hopefully it will turn into something more!
Megan (Anonymous) on May 15, 2011 11:57 pm (
Chapter 18)
I love this story!!!! It just gets better and better with every update =). Everly is so cute with Matt and I almost feel bad for Matt when Everly stopped their 'session.' Also, poor JC for having his house broken into...that actually happened late last year right? Also, glad that Everly can give JC some needed support. Can't wait for another update =).
Author's Response: It means a lot that you're loving this! Yes, in November his house supposedly got broken into twice and then this Februrary someone got into his car. I'm just sort of throwing all the incidences together as one big one for the sake of the story. Thanks for the review!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 15, 2011 08:52 pm (
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*thud* Im okay..lolz Right now, I also have the sudden urge to hug him and keep him safe..yes anything for you JC.. :) *hugs* Im getting that warm and fuzzy feeling again..HA! Ok from the middle, Matt was totally in the mood, and so was Everly, though she did a good job on putting a stop to it, saying that she wasnt ready for intimacy just yet. At least Matt understood that part..yeah Matt, hold your horses..lolz..Anyway, Im totally loving this story, really am..Great job and thanks for the update! Update soon.. ;) Looking forward to what happens next.. :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for another great review! :)
Emily (Anonymous) on May 15, 2011 09:18 am (
Chapter 18)
Yay! Always happy to see an update! Despite liking Matt, I was really hoping Ev would have a little something with JC at the end. C'mon and console him, Ev! Keep up the great writing, and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Always nice to receive a comment from a new reviewer. Thank you so much and I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 12, 2011 02:20 pm (
Chapter 17)
That dinner with Matt and Everly was really cute! I can't believe Aimee was bold enough to send Everly those text messages while she was with Matt! I can't help it, I do agree with her though! Even though Matt and Everly are cute together, I'm still pulling for JC and Everly as endgame, because Megan is bitch and she doesn't deserve someone as good as JC, Everly does, and JC needs to realize that! They belong together!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 09:07 pm (
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UGH! Aimee was totally ruining the moment that Matt and Everly were having. Seriously, I think they are having a really great relationship. Love the cooking she did for him, chicken picatta sounds good right now, lolz. Anywho, lets go back to the supermarket, JC's girlfriend Megan, sounds a bit..manipulative, hey if JC wants a cookie, let him have the cookie, I'll let him eat whatever he wants, cause he has a low metabolism(like me..lolz) and doesnt gain weight as much, now I know she's a "personal" trainer but still, *stomps foot on floor* And the problem with JC is that he can get easily lost with the girl charm, and he falls back. :P Above all, great job on this chapter..looking forward to the next one.. :) This is getting good..
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 08, 2011 11:53 am (
Chapter 17)
Something about Megan really irks me but I can't put my finger on it. I love how steadily Matt's and Everly's relationship is progressing. Many times I've seen people jump into relationships and they don't seem realisitic but this one is good. Now, Aimee, I kinda want to kill for giving her second thoughts about Matt but it was great drama. Update again soon.
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 04:18 am (
Chapter 17)
like where this is heading. matt and everly are so cute together. i hope he doesn't get his heart broken but i LOVE jc too. wouldn't know what to do if i was in everly's shoes!
Megan (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 02:09 am (
Chapter 17)
Ohhh goodness this story just gets better and better with each update! Haha its weird that Everly just seems to run into JC everywhere. Is it just me or does Megan seem a a little controling and a little bit of a bitch? Hmmm...Matt and Everly are so freakin cute together, but Aimee does have a great point "you have feelings for two men and you know it. A title won't change that." Can't wait for another update =)
Author's Response: And I was afraid that this chapter was all over the place. haha. Glad to see that I'm not disappointing and that you are enjoying each chapter. To comment on JC and Everly bumping into each other... your characters sometimes need coincidences to carry out what you want them to. lol. I also wanted a way for Everly to come face to face with Megan unexpectedly.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 05, 2011 10:57 pm (
Chapter 16)
Yay! It's official! Everly and Matt are now boyfriend and girlfriend! I just love Detective Aimee, she gets all of the juicy info that Everly is too afraid to get. I think we all need an Aimee in our lives! Now, this just leaves me wondering about JC and Everly. Where does it go from here? He has a girlfriend, and now she has a boyfriend. And, I still don't believe that JC has no feelings for Everly, it seems damn near impossible! I can't wait to see what happens next!
P.S.
I hope this doesn't sound bad, but I hope that maybe (just maybe) JC will have slighly jealous feelings towards Everly, once he sees that Everly and Matt are a couple.
