Comments For My Best Friend
Mack (Anonymous) on May 14, 2011 09:50 pm (Part Two, Chapter 8: You Don't Have to Be Alone)

Too lazy to login.

Anyway, I loved this chapter the most so far because it captured the girlfriend's insecurities well. I really liked the family dynamic that the Chasezs have. And can I kill Tyson? Please?



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 11, 2011 09:06 pm (Part Two, Chapter 7: Family Portrait)
*gasp* A divorce? Gosh Leah's family IS dysfunctional, I mean we all have our share of family issues(yes my uncles, aunts, cousins are all a bit lost) long story...oh and my grandpa had Alzheimers(or so they say, and he passed away in December) :( Ok..now lets get back to this chapter, Im so glad that Leah moved out when she turned 18, and she chose a different aspect for her life, and she is doing well for herself, its not like the same routine of boring lawyer husbands and fancy cars, its always good to change it up a little.. Good job, looking forward to the next chapter, all about JC..yayy..



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 11, 2011 08:50 pm (Part Two, Chapter 7: Family Portrait)
*GASP* divorce? Alzheimers!? Geeze, I feel so bad for Leah. At least JC will be there for her. Update again soon!



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 03, 2011 02:45 pm (Part Two, Chapter 6: Complicated)

Great song choice, and I loved the "Boy Meets World" reference, once of the best 90s shows on TV. I wanna punch Tyson so badly. Can't wait for the next one.

P.S. Try not to make a whole chapter in bold, it might hurt someone's eyes.




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 30, 2011 08:39 pm (Part Two, Chapter 6: Complicated)
Drugs are bad.. Gosh Tyson, some boyfriend you are, when you are out with your little friends, you are completely a different person, poor Leah, both Leah and her new found friend Jaime had boyfriend troubles, that crazy party was absolutely disgusting, reminds me of an episode of CSI..lolz However, thats nice that Jaime is letting Leah crash at her place..now getting back to JC, its SO obvious that you have feelings for Leah, which is why you cant get your mind off her, now go over to her and tell her how you feel..or call her. Great job on this, Im glad you updated.. :)

Author's Response: LOL at CSI part, never thought of that! Thanks for reading!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2011 08:40 pm (Part Two, Chapter 5: We'll Always Have Italy)
Awwww.. :( *tear. Now Italy sounds nice, great, now I wanna go visit the place and see the sights, lolz and getting back to the beginning of this chapter, always Justin..I laughed at this "No you give your girlfriend flowers, not your friend. Especially when she's a girl!" Typical... nice job on this one though.. ;)
 

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I really do appreciate your support, it means a lot to me!



Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2011 08:12 pm (Part Two, Chapter 5: We'll Always Have Italy)
Awww, the flashback was wonderful. It was filled with simplicity but it was heartfelt as well. Can't wait to read more.



Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2011 08:10 pm (Part Two, Chapter 4: Six Months Later (Truth Is))
Did I not review this? Guess not, I read it thought. Anyway, I loved with the fan, that was very cute. A few times where you have them speak you put a period when it should be a comma, but everything else looks great,

Author's Response: I'll definitely keep that in mine, sometimes I think faster than I type! Thanks so much for reading!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2011 09:14 pm (Part Two, Chapter 4: Six Months Later (Truth Is))
Oooh burn..awww! Poor JC still has feelings for Leah, and Tyson sounds like an interesting guy, going all his way to get Leah, it was funny when he didnt know that his sister had "The Leah James" poster all over her wall..lolz And I also like when both JC and Lean signed Cara's autograph, yeah Cara they are certainly not a "couple" ;) Good job on this chapter, thanks for the update.. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 24, 2011 08:19 pm (Part Two, Chapter 3: All Grown Up and Strictly Platonic)
"Just friends" Yeah JC..sureee.. ;) Woo hoo..you updated! Nice job..looking foward to next chapter..



Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 24, 2011 12:47 pm (Part Two, Chapter 3: All Grown Up and Strictly Platonic)
Hahaha, I can pratically see the trouble brewing all ready!! Update again soon.



Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 23, 2011 08:46 pm (Part One, Chapter 2: Maybe More?)
Are you going to update? I really like this story.

Author's Response: As a matter of fact I just updated!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 28, 2011 07:57 pm (Part One, Chapter 2: Maybe More?)
I haven't done "it" either, so its all good.. lolz :) Im so glad that they forgave eachother..and she went to the BBQ..such a sweet chapter. And this line right here, very true " If you love someone you have to let them go, and if it's meant to be, then they will find their way back to each other.



jcchasezsbabymama2005 (Signed) on Mar 27, 2011 04:12 pm (Part One, Chapter 2: Maybe More?)
ok, I'm going to be honest, you need to fix the typos and spelling mistakes, other than that its a great story so far.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the constructive criticism, I really appreciate it!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 25, 2011 08:59 pm (Part One, Chapter 1: Just Friends)
Ohhh man!  they BOTH had emotions for eachother, but deep in JC's heart it felt like he wasn't ready.. :( Best friends?? Or is it?? ;) Im liking this story, reminds me of summer... :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback!





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