Comments For Barely Breathing
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 01:36 am (chapter 20)
thanks for updating!!!! omg. haha i feel like i can't breathe because i'm so tense from this chapter and waiting to see what will happen. i just want to shake caroline when she's leaving his house and say "you're scared too!! just as scared as he is. can't you see how terrified he is right now!?!"
wonderful writing! really can't wait to see where and how you take this story to its close.
violet (Signed) on Aug 06, 2011 07:55 pm (chapter 19)
GAH! I just read this from start to here and I'm in love! JC can be such an ass but I gather he's that way so he won't get hurt. *pets him* Hope to see an update soon. :) And as a cat owner myself, the last line had me giggling. Great story!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2011 11:46 am (chapter 19)
lolz Seth is funny..hahaa. Awwww I really loved the flashback that Caroline remembered while she was with Brandon..such sweet simple days. But now they broke up, :( I think they had a nice relationship...Now, getting back to JC, he bought different seats for him and Caroline, typical JC..hmm..This is good, but sad now..thanks for the update.. :)
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2011 02:16 am (chapter 19)
eek! at the edge of my seat! update soon!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 05, 2011 04:50 pm (cast)
I really love this story. I would love to say that JC is being a jerk, but I can sort of understand why he is reacting the way he is. He has feelings for her and stands to get hurt and nobody wants to be that rebound person, celebrity or not. If she'd not been drinking when she had kissed him, it may have gone differently because he would've known for sure it was what she DID want and not something she was doing because she'd been drinking and brooding over Brandon. Tyler warned her and she didn't listen. lol Now she is upset with him but she is forgetting up until this weekend, she hasn't exactly acted like he was someone she would want to build something with and jumping in his lap, tempting as it is, while drunk doesn't prove it either.
emme07 (Signed) on Aug 05, 2011 04:09 pm (chapter 19)
All these updates eeeee I'm loving it :) Please update again soon... I have to know what happens here!!
Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 05, 2011 02:55 pm (chapter 19)
Awww sad...not only is JC being a complete asshole but now things are officially over between her and Brandon =(. Hopefully things get better for Caroline.
Ashley (Anonymous) on Aug 05, 2011 01:49 pm (chapter 18)
I love this! I really love how you portray JC. Really good! Can't wait to read more.
StarStruck24 (Signed) on Aug 04, 2011 08:09 pm (chapter 18)
I was glued from beginning to end. I can't wait to see what happens between the two of them - it's about time they admitted feelings for one another, even if one side of it was alcohol-induced. Can't wait for more!
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Aug 04, 2011 06:43 pm (chapter 18)
Ohh this is getting good. I just hope hes not going to be a manslut with her. Caroline needs a good talking to by jc about her drinking. I love it.
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 04, 2011 03:45 pm (chapter 18)
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED this chapter!! OMG I can't wait to read what happens next....=).
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 04, 2011 01:14 pm (chapter 18)
Oh my goodness! Ok, I love that JC was actually a respectful enough to Caroline, and didnt take it further. And it was a kiss, a preheated kiss, nothing more. But then he took a step back, *SIGH* So JC dear, looks like your beginning to fall for your lovely assi, but he's not letting it show..yet. Apparently he thinks that Caroline is still in love with Brandon, which is why she is in pain and wants someone to care for her.. Man, this is good, really good.. Thanks for the update.. :)
