nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 04, 2011 01:21 am (
chapter 18)
soo good! i can't believe we were lucky enough to get the next chapter a day later! I like that the JC you had created in the beginning of this story was so different than the JCs I've read in so many others. I can't describe it but it's almost as though he was really abrasive or hardened, though not entirely a jerk. But you had softer sides of him peeking out throughout this whole story, reminding us that he's still the JC we all know and love.
"He reached up to push against her shoulders gently so that she would lean back again. "You still love him," he reminded, his voice soft, not accusatory. His expression told Caroline that it was something painful to admit. "I know you do." What i LOVE most about this story and this part of the chapter is how you're using Caroline to break down these walls JC has created, changing him from the person he was in beginning to this softer side of him we all know is there. Wonderful writing! Can't wait for more and to see how this will end! and yay!!! they finally kissed!
Author's Response: So I almost never reply to reviews individually but I just had to here - thank you thank you thank you! I love hearing that you've been picking up what I've been trying to lay down, character-wise anyway, in this story. I really wanted to write a different characterization of JC, and I had so much fun doing it...he's definitely an asshole in this story, but he's got his reasons! And I enjoyed being able to bring Caroline's perspective into it, too...as an imperfect person herself, learning how to cope with her imperfections and yet embrace them as she grows closer to JC.
Thank you again for your honest opinions and feedback, it means so much!
Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 03, 2011 03:06 pm (
chapter 17)
O-M-G....this story is getting so ridiculously good that I can hardly stand it! I love the tension between JC and Caroline =). Can't wait for another update!!
Anonymous (Signed) on Aug 03, 2011 12:04 pm (
chapter 17)
Nooo! This story can't end!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 03, 2011 11:21 am (
chapter 17)
Ahhhh! i love this! fantastic job :) i can't wait to see what happens next...
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 02, 2011 09:19 pm (
chapter 17)
Wow, Caroline was drunk and said that she wanted to make out with JC.. LOL! Im glad that didnt happen...yet. ;) Cause maybe she wouldve regretted it..Aww, I like that Tyler is so caring of his brother, I find that cute.. Love the part where they were all in the kitchen eating vegan cookies..and Tyler didnt like them.. HA!
And its sad that Caroline still cares for Brandon deep down. :( Her inboxes were all empty..Anytho This is good, Im glad you updated!
roseinvisible (Signed) on Aug 02, 2011 05:20 pm (
chapter 17)
I definitely still care and can't wait to see what's next.
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 02, 2011 12:52 am (
chapter 17)
yay! i'm so thrilled you updated! you did a wonderful job using tyler to help caroline and jc each define their feelings! can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 10, 2011 08:03 pm (
chapter 16)
I just re-read the whole thing and I still can't wait for the next update! Great Job! :)
Steph (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2011 08:24 pm (
chapter 16)
AMAZING STORy so far. Please email when updated! I LOVED it! Characters were great and of course the chemistry is amazing.
bluexeyesx87x@gmail.com
Thanks so much ; Stephanie
roseinvisible (Signed) on Jun 17, 2011 10:44 pm (
chapter 16)
YAYYYYYYYYYYYY an update! so good <3
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Jun 16, 2011 01:15 am (
chapter 16)
can't wait for the next ch. more more more!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 14, 2011 09:01 pm (
chapter 16)
LOLZ! JC bothering Caroline on the plane ride, then he sleeps like a log..Now, I LOVE the hospitality of JC's parents that they offered to Caroline, its so comforting and warm. It felt like I was at his house.. :) And poor Caroline, still thinking about Brandon, and JC is concerned cause he knows that something is bothering her..above all, thanks for the update..
emme07 (Signed) on Jun 14, 2011 07:33 pm (
chapter 16)
I really love this story!!! Looking forward to more updates!!
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on May 30, 2011 03:40 am (
chapter 15)
thanks for the update! had wished it was longer but excited for where this story is heading. love that it seems so realistic and that caroline and jc haven't fallen for each other immediately. her conflict and inner battle are so real.
Megan (Anonymous) on May 28, 2011 11:41 pm (
chapter 15)
Yay an update...and a very good one too! Feel so bad for Caroline and the way things are with Brandon, he seems like a very jealous type. Hopefully things will work themselves out...otherwise there is always JC =).
