Comments For Barely Breathing
babymomo79 (Anonymous) on Apr 22, 2011 07:26 pm (chapter 9)
Aw...It breaks my heart that JC is so hard on himself about the status of his career, but at least Caroline is there trying to be his cheerleader.
Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 22, 2011 12:05 am (chapter 9)
JC is so frustrating! It seems that there is a lot of tension between him and Caroline...i dont know maybe its just me. Good update, hope for another one soon!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 20, 2011 08:51 pm (chapter 8)
Dun dun dun...Ok first off, that is sad that Jive wants to drop JC, I mean he's SUPER talented but SO underrated, he needs a hug.. :( and I agree that Justin has a bit of an ego issue, and kinda overshadows JC, hmm...you know, this is fanfic but this chapter has some truth in it..its pretty good.. :) Thanks for the update..
roseinvisible (Signed) on Apr 20, 2011 04:24 pm (chapter 8)
Mad cool points for the Cheers reference bb.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 17, 2011 07:34 pm (chapter 7)
LMAO! This chapter had me laughing! JC hyper is always a plus, hahaha FOUR cups of coffee and a diet coke, I can just SEE him driving the streets of LA with Caroline, and Caroline ready to freak out, too funny..that was a nice touch that they both arrived safely an ate bowls of soup.. :) Makes me smile, and oh JC, Caroline DOES need a raise for all she does for you, dont come with that "I have to save because yes" thing, cause that wont work..LOLZ Great job, and thanks for updating.. :)
babymomo79 (Anonymous) on Apr 17, 2011 07:07 pm (chapter 7)
She definitely deserves a raise. At least he came back from vacation less crabby. How long will that last, though?!
roseinvisible (Signed) on Apr 17, 2011 06:50 pm (chapter 7)
Are we going to find out why JC had to take off like that?
lovelovelove!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 16, 2011 07:16 pm (chapter 6)
Wow...talk about a two weeks notice. That was nice that Caroline dropped him off at the airport, even though JC was going berserk, lolz I hope everything is okay with his family and everything..Nice job though.. :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 15, 2011 09:32 pm (chapter 5)
I LOVED THIS! Ok where do I start? Cause there were so many moments here..um oh! when Caroline arrived at JC's house and found Tyler..HA! And when JC took her apple..this line right here "Mariella's not here today. JC, where did you get that apple? JC replied, "I found it."
Where did you find it?" In your lunch bag." LMAO! He's such an adorkable guy, and I also liked when they were both at the supermarket, and when JC was giving her lectures about not eating meat..LOLZ! Now the last thing, was when HIS car broke down, and Caroline saying "she broke it" HAHA! You know..off topic, that happened to MY car, and I have a Tercel(old I know..but its a great little thing..lolz) Above all, GREAT job on this chapter, *bravo* :D
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 12, 2011 08:46 pm (chapter 4)
Hahah..Brandon is so funny, and yes the band Inkubus, I like one song from them, but I forgot the title of it..lolz.. and the ABDC party, Caroline didnt really fit in, but she met Mario Lopez(super cheesy smile..lolz) and JC didnt fit in at Brandon's party.....(of course, wearing that fancy suit people staring at him..) totally awkward moment.. I like this chapter..good job. Thanks for the update.. :)
Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 11, 2011 12:48 am (chapter 3)
Wow JC is kind of an asshole...sexy asshole though =). Great chapter, can't wait for another update!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 10, 2011 09:17 pm (chapter 3)
JC is such a perfectionist(even though he tries not too) lolz, man she has to miss Brandon's music gig because JC wants her at the ABDC promo party, she is totally getting herself booked..howver loving this, great job, and looking forward to the next chapter.. ;)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 10, 2011 09:01 pm (chapter 2)
Aww..love the relationship Brandon and Caroline, he keeps her in check, now getting back to JC and his tough orders about scheduling and what not, that is SO like him, Im sure she can work it out, and the way JC's house was described was woww..I can see it now, :) Makes me wanna go inside his house and hang out..lolz Good job on this chapter..
Anonymous (Signed) on Apr 10, 2011 06:55 pm (chapter 3)
Hahaha. I love the tension at the end. Great job!
