Comments For Barely Breathing
Andrea (Anonymous) on May 03, 2015 08:32 am (epilogue)
I picked this story in hopes that it would help me sleep. Buuutttttt, just my luck, it got good. So good that I could not put my phone down until I finished it. So thank you for this lovely gem of a tale. I loved every moment of it.
heartless (Signed) on Sep 18, 2012 09:21 am (epilogue)
This story was great! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop! lol I can't wait to look at more of your work! Keep it up! :)
Tracy (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2012 10:04 am (cast)
I really really enjoyed reading this story! I love where you went with it and your characterization of both Caroline and JC was so consistent and well thought-out. I also love how JC is a bit of an asshole in this and how Caroline wasn't in love with him from the beginning. The progression of their relationship felt natural and that takes talent to pull off. That being said, I really do think you are a great writer. I would love to read more JC-centric stories from you! I truly love the way you characterize him. Hope to read more soon!
autumn_wednesday (Anonymous) on May 22, 2012 02:25 pm (cast)
im only about 6 chapters in and im hooked, very well written, will defo read more of your stories
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Mar 21, 2012 09:13 pm (epilogue)
Can't believe I didn't review this story sooner... I just wanted to say awesome job! I loved Carolina and JC's relationship and I thoroughly enjoyed reading about those two! Great story and I loved the epilogue too. Baby Chasez!! Eep! Terrific! Anyways, loved the story and great job, girl!
grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 23, 2011 09:09 am (chapter 18)
Im just gonna say GREAt kiss!
grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 22, 2011 09:48 am (chapter 16)
Loved this cozzy chapter, even with Caroline's sadness hanging there.
Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 19, 2011 03:04 pm (epilogue)
awww *sigh* im sad to see this amazing story come to an end but what a great ending!! Maybe a 1 chapter sequel or something to see what life is like for the 2 after that baby is born? Just loved loved loved this story! What an excellent job!
grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 18, 2011 10:31 pm (chapter 11)
I really liked this chapter, so real and honest.
grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 18, 2011 09:01 pm (chapter 9)
The scene with the shirts remains me of a movie from Sndra Bullock and Hugh Grant hahahaha
Keitta (Anonymous) on Aug 17, 2011 12:31 pm (cast)
Just read the whole story these past few days, I loved it from start to finish. I didn't want to stop reading it! Great Job!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 14, 2011 04:26 pm (epilogue)
*squeee* Justin heyy! *gives him a hug* :) AWWWW! Caroline is gonna have a baby...and she's married..AWWW! Im so giddy! YAY! This has been such a nice story, Im so glad that everything turned out well..after all JC and Caroline been through..talk about an interesting ride.. :) Great job! Look at that from asst, to friend, to gf, to wife, and soon to be mother.. Lovely, just lovely..JC, I wanna be your asst.. *raises hand* lolz Thanks for updating.. :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 14, 2011 04:15 pm (chapter 23)
"Like...oh, Cameron took a ballet class when he was in junior high." LMAO! That was funny..alrighty..um poor Caroline she was sooo nervous, she flew all the way to Fla just to see him..and JC was doing the same, without her knowing...oh and I dont mind the cheesy stuff, cause we all know that JC is a dork..a cute dork that is.. LOLZ! I love that JC admitted that he was wrong, both of them actually and they love eachother now, aww! I like how he silenced her with a kiss... ;)*reads next chapter*
nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 14, 2011 12:02 am (epilogue)
*SIGH* huge sigh of relief. i'm so happy that jc turned out to be an asshole that's not an asshole at the end. LOVED that he tried going after her. i actually was hoping caroline would also apologize for the day she left and that they would clear the air more about that day, but i guess you did it with jc's "glad you see things my way." really though, loved the story, loved the ending and i'm actually sad to see it end.
violet (Signed) on Aug 13, 2011 10:00 pm (epilogue)
Oh. Em. GAH!! I love these two so, so so much! When she showed up and he just... He took her in his arms! And he went back FIVE times and chicked out (the little chicken shit)! Seriously, this story has made me laugh and cry and growl at my computer when there were no updates. I adore this. So much. I laughed my ass off at "You didn't sleep with her too, did you?"
And *squee* she's knocked up--er, pregnant! Baby Chasez for the win! I cackled over - "I thought I was an asshole?" "You are, but I love you like that." So awesome.
*flails like Kermit the Frog because it's OVER* *cries*
