Comments For Cat, Mouse.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 02, 2011 02:40 pm (8:15, 9:24, 1:18.)
Yes! She finally slept with him! This was definitely the best chapter yet. Really. I love that Justin is turning out to not be such a douche, and I love that Virginia is starting to feel a little something, even if she won't admit it. Love it!
Author's Response: thank you so much! if you liked this chapter i know you'll love the next post... :) seriously, i always look forward to your feedback so thank you, thank you, thank you!
Author's Response: thank you so much! if you liked this chapter i know you'll love the next post... :) seriously, i always look forward to your feedback so thank you, thank you, thank you!
SomethingBlue42 (Anonymous) on Jun 02, 2011 07:50 am (8:15, 9:24, 1:18.)
This totally had me on the edge of my seat and the ending was the best. payoff. ever. I like that you used the animal analogy with the two guys. It kind of shows that her brain works (or is beginning to work) like Justin's in a way, him with the Cat/Mouse and now her with the lion/cheetah. Must. Know. What. Happens. Next. haha Great job!
Author's Response: omg, i never even thought of the lion/cheetah analogy coinciding with cat/mouse but i'm so glad you brought it to my attention bc not only is gin starting to see things that way, so am i! lol. i tried to update quickly but it still kind of took me forever; i'm sorry, i didn't wanna leave you hanging for too long but hopefully what i've posted makes up for the wait. thanks so much for reading :)
Author's Response: omg, i never even thought of the lion/cheetah analogy coinciding with cat/mouse but i'm so glad you brought it to my attention bc not only is gin starting to see things that way, so am i! lol. i tried to update quickly but it still kind of took me forever; i'm sorry, i didn't wanna leave you hanging for too long but hopefully what i've posted makes up for the wait. thanks so much for reading :)
a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 12, 2011 02:06 pm (Tick, tick, boom.)
This was not terrible, lol. I would have punched Justin, too. Using a little girl to get what he wants, sheesh! He's too devious for his own good :)
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
awww thank you for saying it's not terrible. i was really worried that it would be awful but i knew that i had to post soon. you and somethingblue42 are the only ones still reading it seems but i want to keep updating as soon as possible for you guys because i always look forward to your comments. thank you so much for reading! & you have no idea just how devious JT really is... ;)
SomethingBlue42 (Anonymous) on May 12, 2011 08:15 am (Tick, tick, boom.)
HAHAHAHA OMG SHE PUNCHED HIM!!!! I literally laughed out loud at that. This story makes me so giddy I swear! Lovelovelove it! Update soon!
Author's Response: ahahahaha! & i literally laughed out loud at this comment. your comments probably make me giddier than this story makes you giddy (if that makes any sense, lol). honestly i appreciate you reading each and every update, it means so much to me i feel like i can't thank you enough. i'm so glad that you're enjoying the story seeing as though... it is your xmas present; & i already know what's going to happen in the next chapter i just have to write it so an update will definitely be posted soon!
Author's Response: ahahahaha! & i literally laughed out loud at this comment. your comments probably make me giddier than this story makes you giddy (if that makes any sense, lol). honestly i appreciate you reading each and every update, it means so much to me i feel like i can't thank you enough. i'm so glad that you're enjoying the story seeing as though... it is your xmas present; & i already know what's going to happen in the next chapter i just have to write it so an update will definitely be posted soon!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 09, 2011 04:25 pm (Of course, of course, of course.)
I love your main character, Virginia. She's so...fiesty, lol. This is such a great story. I can't wait to get more!
Author's Response: hahaha. i have to say virginia is my fave character that i've created so far and i love that you love her! thank you so much for reading :)
Author's Response: hahaha. i have to say virginia is my fave character that i've created so far and i love that you love her! thank you so much for reading :)
SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on May 09, 2011 08:16 am (Of course, of course, of course.)
I was so freakin excited to see that this was updated!!! Okay “Holla at Ayala.” fucking KILLED ME. So did "Guys like Justin… they’re like super heroes, they always have sidekicks." because really it's kind of is true. GAH there was seriously so much in this chapter that I loved. CanNOT wait for the next one!
Author's Response: see, i really liked this chapter too... finally gin's voice was coming to me w/ all of these perfectly snarky remarks and it just felt so right. ch 4... not so much, but i'm really glad you enjoyed it anyway and i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter as well. thank you so much for reading each update faithfully. it means alot to me :)
Author's Response: see, i really liked this chapter too... finally gin's voice was coming to me w/ all of these perfectly snarky remarks and it just felt so right. ch 4... not so much, but i'm really glad you enjoyed it anyway and i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter as well. thank you so much for reading each update faithfully. it means alot to me :)
mzmillion (Signed) on Apr 30, 2011 08:38 pm (Shit, shit, shit.)
So far I like....
Author's Response: i'm glad; i hope you come back to read more :)
Author's Response: i'm glad; i hope you come back to read more :)
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 30, 2011 01:31 pm (Shit, shit, shit.)
Well that's a cliff-hanger! It's extremely prevy of me to say this, but...let's get it on!! lol. Great update :)
Author's Response: lol. this review makes me so happy. thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: lol. this review makes me so happy. thanks for reading :)
SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Apr 30, 2011 10:30 am (Shit, shit, shit.)
EEP I was so excited when I saw this was updated. Great chapter! And of course, being the perv that I am, the last line killed me. Don't leave us hanging in suspense for TOO long haha.
Author's Response: i hope my update wasn't considered too long, i tried really hard to get it out as soon as possible just for you. thank you so much for reading! & is it bad that i find pleasure in you being tortured by the last line? hahaha. i'm just so glad that you're enjoying the story :)
Author's Response: i hope my update wasn't considered too long, i tried really hard to get it out as soon as possible just for you. thank you so much for reading! & is it bad that i find pleasure in you being tortured by the last line? hahaha. i'm just so glad that you're enjoying the story :)
glowbug917 (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 11:51 am (Yes, yes, yes.)
You know, I love this already and am not afraid to threaten bodily harm if you don't update. I'm scary, you can ask around.
Author's Response: hahaha. i totally believe you! & for that i will be posting ch 2 very soon. it's written, i'm just in search of a computer that i can post on. thanks for reading! i always look forward to your reviews :)
Author's Response: hahaha. i totally believe you! & for that i will be posting ch 2 very soon. it's written, i'm just in search of a computer that i can post on. thanks for reading! i always look forward to your reviews :)
Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 09:49 am (Yes, yes, yes.)
i lyke. ;) Seems like there might be more?!?...
Author's Response: yes, there is definitely more! thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: yes, there is definitely more! thanks for reading :)
SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Apr 24, 2011 07:49 pm (Yes, yes, yes.)
AGH! I'm so glad you ended up posting! You're one of my favorite authors on here and I REALLY like where you're taking my prompt. Hope you have more coming soon! And thank you thank you thank you!
Author's Response: i'm so glad i didn't kill your prompt. i took so long because i really didn't know where i wanted to go with the prompt and because school started along with a new job and a musical that i was in so i was really busy. again, i'm so sorry for taking forever. i'm glad you like what i have so far. more is definitely coming soon, i've already written ch 2 i just need to get to a computer that i can actually upload and post with, along with pictures of the characters. pls don't thank me... i thank you for being so patient and for reading!! love your work as well :)
Author's Response: i'm so glad i didn't kill your prompt. i took so long because i really didn't know where i wanted to go with the prompt and because school started along with a new job and a musical that i was in so i was really busy. again, i'm so sorry for taking forever. i'm glad you like what i have so far. more is definitely coming soon, i've already written ch 2 i just need to get to a computer that i can actually upload and post with, along with pictures of the characters. pls don't thank me... i thank you for being so patient and for reading!! love your work as well :)
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 24, 2011 06:51 pm (Yes, yes, yes.)
OOh, I'm interested. I'm curious to see how things develop between the two of them. Great job!
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm glad i've sparked your interest thank you so much!
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm glad i've sparked your interest thank you so much!
Tink (Signed) on Apr 24, 2011 06:13 pm (Yes, yes, yes.)
REally enjoyed this story, hope you post more soon
Author's Response: most definitely will! ch 2 is ready & on the way... i'm glad you're enjoying it so far :)
Author's Response: most definitely will! ch 2 is ready & on the way... i'm glad you're enjoying it so far :)
