Comments For We're Halfway There
Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 20, 2011 07:44 pm (Chapter 2- Anything For A Friend)
I feel really sorry for Liz.....but they should've eaten Italian....its so much better than chinese....lol :P........gr8 chapter tho :)

Author's Response:

Yea, her story is sad.. But i think she'going to get better :P ;) haha JC likes Chinese so i chose that.. thank you!




Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 20, 2011 07:30 pm (Chapter 1- Why So Glum, Chum?)
firstly i LOVE the pic you made for the bk!!!!! very nice :).............this chapter was awsome.........the best part for me was the Do Run Run....it was funny........your writing style is really good and i like the plot......can't wait to see what happens b/ween JC and Liz.... :)...eventhough i'm not really a fan of NSYNC ( no offense to anyone)...you could really make me start to like to like them :D

Author's Response: Thanks, yes i like the cover as well :) JC looked cute ;) Thanks for reading & reviewing! Haha, we wont hate you if you're not an NSYNC fan but if i got a non-NSYNC fan to read and like this a little, then mission accomplished, right? :D Thanks again!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 14, 2011 08:39 pm (Chapter 8- About Damn Time!!)

*giggles* They like eachother! YAY! AWW! This is such the cutest sweetest chapter EVER! *hugs them both*! No, group hug! :D Yeah JC's a nice guy, sure he may have his days, but he would always go back to niceness... :) I love that he, Liz and the rest of the guys are having some ice cream..and one thing's for sure, I drive a Toyota(its actually my mom's car..lolz) :D So..yeah I wish JC was with me in the car then we can get some ice cream together and just have a wonderful evening.. *sigh* One can only dream.. ;) Great job, Im loving every chapter..



Author's Response: hahaha aww i am soo happy you're enjoying this! Yeaa group hug!! You, me, Liz and JC <3 Or how about just JC and us on separate occasions.. we can share!! :D <3 haha yea us fans can only dream.. he is a nice guy :) Thank you for the review and i hope you keep reading! Thanks for all the encouragement! :)



Mack (Anonymous) on May 14, 2011 05:12 pm (Chapter 8- About Damn Time!!)
Yay, they're together! It was kind of a filler but that's ok, because it helped the story continue at a great pace. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve.

Author's Response: Yea, it was a filler but thank you for the review!! And than you for the encouragement also! Always a pleasure to read what you have to say! :)



Megan (Anonymous) on May 14, 2011 12:50 pm (Chapter 8- About Damn Time!!)
Those 2 are just too cute together and YAY! they finally got together...can't wait to see where this relationship leads. =)

Author's Response:

Thank you soo much Megan! :) Glad you're liking this! =)




Megan (Anonymous) on May 12, 2011 12:56 am (Chapter 7- Now What?)
Awww I love these 2 together! JC is so awesome for stepping and getting lol "Mr. Handsy" off of Liz. I'm glad that they are finally admitting that they like each other! Love this story, can't wait for another update =).

Author's Response: hehe JC to the rescue!! lolz thanks very much!! :))



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 11, 2011 08:42 pm (Chapter 7- Now What?)
Hey hey, thanks for the dedication! You didn't have to do that. Made me smile. Anyway, why would she run out on JC like that? I can understand that she's confused but it's always better to talk things out instead of run. *shakes head* although, admittedly, it wouldn't nearly be as interesting if they talked about. I knew they would end up at the same club as soon as Emma suggested it. And hoooray for JC saving her from that drunk guy. I loved that he actually punched the guy! Woohoo! And the ending was perfect. A few missing punctuation marks here and there but it was still great!!

Author's Response: You're welcome :)) I dedicated it to you because you've always been leaving reviews and giving me ways to improve the story! So thank you, to you!! Anyways, to the story.. The running away part, well.. You said the story needed some drama, so i wanted some stuff to get interesting.. LOL Ahh JC is her hero!! haha Thank you :)) Sorry about the punctuation errors :/ But thanks for liking the story and reviewing! :))



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 10, 2011 07:46 pm (Chapter 7- Now What?)
YAY! Ok first off, I would like to say thank you for dedicating this chapter to me..and Mack_Attack22 *cheers* that was nice.. :) And ooh! I knew she felt something when she kissed him, I mean, whats NOT to feel..its JC! *swoon* lolz I like this line “Oh, she does. I’ll bet my ass on that one. haha, JC you are too cute. Now that blonde guy had issues, putting her hands on her and everything, so wrong. However, JC to the rescue! I also like this line as well "She is my business. Now I’m warning you, take your hands off her, or I swear with everything holy in my body I will take you” Woww..now that is what you call a man or a hero for that matter.. ;) I am loving this, great job and thanks for the update. :D

Author's Response:

You're welcome :)) Thanks for reading & reviewing!! Yes, yes JC is the best :D

Keep reading!!




theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 08:08 pm (Chapter 6- Nothing Special)
IM LOVING THIS! Cold shower..yes! Ok, love the funny moments when they were all in the pool, this line right here “And beat this” He stood a couple of feet away from the pool, his back to the water, and did a one handed back flip back plunging down into the 6ft of chlorine. Woooo” Liz and Emma clapped, Justin frowning. "YAY! JC's one handed back flip... *dances* And thats great that Liz is waiting for the right guy(Me too! WOO, *pats back* JC I wish..lolz) And I also like this line here, I laughed so hard at this, “Man, even I’ve had a little action” Justin said, almost to himself“ Yea J, it’s called masturbation” Chris retorted “Shut up man!” Justin said, throwing a chip at him. LMAO! I just love it Chris and Justin tease eachother, I can see him doing that, why? Cause its Chris..HA! Above all, another great chapter, thanks for the update.. :D

Author's Response: haha I LOVE reading your reviews! So thank you soo much for reading and reviewing!! As for Liz waiting for the right guy, so am i.. and like you said, JC I WISH!! haha Justin got burneddd :P There are soo many goofy videos of them where Justin and Chris just continously tease each other, so they by themselves are inspiration.. Exactly!! Just cuz it's Chris!! :D Again, thank you very much! :))



Megan (Anonymous) on May 08, 2011 03:41 pm (Chapter 6- Nothing Special)
Awww these 2 are so cute trying to hide their feelings for each other! Can't wait for another update =)!

Author's Response: Thank you!! =)



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 08, 2011 11:51 am (Chapter 6- Nothing Special)
What a great way to wake up with an e-mail alert to the update of this story. I love these two so much but I want to see some drama. It can't always be this easy getting someone, right? I FEED off of drama, haha. And Justin got BURNED! Haha. Please update again soon.

Author's Response:

haha thank you so very much!! hahaha Justin soo got burned :P He's cute tho! haha Drama will be coming soon, and lots of it!! I'd like to give a spoiler but i think you'll have more fun just reading!! hehe Whatever becomes of those two.. Well, they're in for a ride LOL Thank you for reviewing and keeping up!! =)




Anonymous (Signed) on May 07, 2011 05:32 pm (Chapter 5- It was like...)
This chapter was great. Post more soon

Author's Response: Thank you =) And i will!!



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 05, 2011 03:37 pm (Chapter 5- It was like...)
I absolutely love how shy they are around each other. It makes the tension great. There are a few misplaced punctuation marks here and there but it doesn't mess up the flow of the story. Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you alot for reviewing and reading! I especially love to see what your reviews because i enjoy your tips (and encouragement for more updates) =) Look out for the next one! ;)



Megan (Anonymous) on May 05, 2011 12:48 am (Chapter 5- It was like...)
JC and Liz are just too cute trying to avoid their feelings for each other. Would love to be at that pool/BBQ with all the boys shirtless...=). Can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: Ahhh you and i both!! haha :)) Thank you for reading/reviewing!!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 04, 2011 08:01 pm (Chapter 5- It was like...)
WOOO! Man, I wanna go to the pool party and have a BBQ with those guys, I mean, hello shirtless?? *drool* Ok, Im loving this, even though Liz and JC are trying to forget that "kiss" but hey..the feelings are still there.. ;) Great job on this chapter..Looking foward to the next one.. :D

Author's Response:

Mmmm you've got me fanatsizing when i should go write!! hahaha =) JC and Liz, well you'll have to keep reading :D ;) Thank you!!






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