kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 28, 2011 09:44 pm (
Chapter 18- Would You Settle For A Text Message?)
wtf?? talk about a twist....nice job....just get him in a big ol mess....keep up the good work...
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! :)) Glad you're liking it!!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 28, 2011 09:11 pm (
Chapter 18- Would You Settle For A Text Message?)
WHAT THE FREAKIN?! JC wake up! ooooh that Allison is such a UGH!! Ok where do I start? Um..poor Emma, she was only trying to help Liz and JC's relationship, though I think Liz got some senses now that she's calling him, yeah girl, the dude does love you..but now that Allison freak is making it worse, she took advantage of him because he was drunk, but wait..he also had a side of this..UGHH! This is such a dilemma..Ok, on a lighter note, this line here "Shut up," Chris retorted. "At least I haven't been wearing the same size pants since I was sixteen!" LOLZ, you know what, maybe even today he still wears the same size pants.. :P Above all, GREAT job on this, this is really good..thanks for the update..
Author's Response: Ohh i can't wait for you to read the rest! haha :)) Thank you so so much for the review! Really glad you're enjoying it!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 25, 2011 07:55 pm (
Chapter 17- Tell Me What To Do Now, When I Want You Back)
*tear...this is soo sad.. :( Im so glad that Emma was helping JC to get Liz back, JC really loves her, and he doesnt want to hurt her anymore, poor Liz..I know its tough for her, *sigh* And when he was singing his verse of "I Want You Back'" I wouldve cried too..just like Liz did.. Ok..lets get back to the beginning, when Johnny told them about about the title of the song which is the one and only "Bye Bye Bye" and the guys were all like huh?? LOLZ yeah Justin..hahaha..anywho, Im probably gonna have to listen to "IWYB" now, ;) anywho..thanks for the update!
Oh wait..I also like the little speech that Chris told JC earlier, I was like "Go Chris" then he felt bad for being insensitive to him..may I just say awwww.. :)
Author's Response: I always love reading your reviews!! :)) haha After i wrote the IWYB part i had to go listen to his verse too! <3 Let's hope Liz forgives him.. and if she does, let's hope he doesn't hurt her anymore.. :P Haha awww is right!
Thank ya for the read and review!! :))
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Jun 24, 2011 08:40 pm (
Chapter 17- Tell Me What To Do Now, When I Want You Back)
Woot woot! Don't give up on her, JC! A bit more description would be nice. I love how you made Lizzie different by not taking JC back right away. Great job! As always, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Woot! :)) I'll keep the note for description in mind for the next chapter, sorry bout that! Thank you very much! I mean, i know it's JC but i wasn't going to make it so easy after he did what he did. Glad you enjoyed :))
Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 24, 2011 03:40 pm (
Chapter 17- Tell Me What To Do Now, When I Want You Back)
It makes me happy that JC is trying very hard to get back in Liz's life and have her forgive him. Also glad that Emma agreed to help JC out and get in to talk to Liz. Hopefully they can work things out!! Good update =)
Author's Response: Yea, hopefully.. =)) Thank you for the read and review Megan!
sonadora (Signed) on Jun 24, 2011 02:48 am (
Chapter 17- Tell Me What To Do Now, When I Want You Back)
Why haven't I started reading this sooner? I'm reaaaaally liking it! :D
Author's Response: haha thank ya very much! :)) Glad you're liking it!
Mack (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2011 11:23 pm (
Chapter 16- Hangover)
Oooh, he's in the dog house. The entire time I was like "wtf...wtf!...WTF!?" as more and more dramtic things happened then by the end I was like "NOOOOOOOOOOO!" When Emma said she left.
And Justin and his cereal! Classic!
Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: So i relatively accomplished the task of adding drama to the story? :D haha I'm glad to hear what your reactions were! As always, thank you so so much for the read and review!! Will update as soon as i can! :))
Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2011 09:37 pm (
Chapter 16- Hangover)
Oh. My. Gawd. JC is such an asshole! I'm glad that not only is Liz and Emma pissed at him but the guys are pissed at him too. How he is going to fix this now that Liz took the job and is in New York, I don't know. I wish him luck. Great chapter =).
Author's Response: Yes, he is!! I'm wishing him luck too.. ;) hehe thank you very much Megan! I'm glad you're enjoying! :))
Emily (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2011 09:07 pm (
Chapter 1- Why So Glum, Chum?)
Enjoying your story so far! A small suggestion that may help you: May I suggest that you research some late 90s music for this chapter. The chapter seems to be set then, but you reference Usher's OMG, which was put out relatively recently.
Author's Response: Yes, after reading this review i immediately went and changed the song! Thanks for the notice on it! And a very big thank you for your read and review! I'm glad you're enjoying and i hope you read on! :))
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2011 07:01 pm (
Chapter 16- Hangover)
OMG! OOH!...JC is in hot water alright, Man poor Lizzie, she LOVED him so much and she caught him red handed, that is soo hurtful, dangnabbit JC, Im ashamed of you! He deserved that slap that Emma gave him, and now Liz is going to NYC, will JC follow her?? Hmmm...now, getting back to the Allison freak, I just wanna UGHH! Im telling you, drinking can lead to distrastious results, JC dear, you should know better...though I agree, angry JC is hot...grrr. *sigh* On a lighter note, I laughed at this line " I got up to go to the bathroom around three this morning and I heard some weird noises coming from his room.” He shrugged. “Sounded like he was either crying or watching porn or something.” Haha..thats Joey to you, explaining the naughty side of things..and I also like this line..Justin frowned. “But, but… That’s Captain Crunch. My Captain Crunch!” lolz! Above all, GREAT JOB on this, this is like wow! Thanks for updating..
Author's Response: Well whether or not he follows her, we'll just have to keep reading.. :) Ah, yes i dislike Allison very much as well!! haha and i'm glad i was able to bring out some humour in this chapter for ya in between all the drama :) Thank you soo much and i'm very glad you're enjoying! Will update soon!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 12, 2011 08:28 pm (
Chapter 15- You Don't Know That)
ALLISON?! WHAT?? Ooooh! Ok, where do I start? First off JC seriously is having issues because HE was supposed to be supportive of Liz! UGHH! Liz..take the job, I agree with what Emma said, JC doesnt own you, he has a career choice and so does Liz..yes I know you guys both love eachother, and JC should understand that..HMPH! *stomps foot* JC, I need to talk to you..lolz I love fanfics! :D They can make you think..haha! Ooooh! I wonder whats happen next, this is really exciting! Great job and thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Yea he is having issues.. But i'm having a little fun using him as the bad guy.. Angry JC is kinda sexy tho ;) *Ahem* Anyways.. :)) Thank you for the read and review! Soo appreciated! And i will be updating soon ;) Glad you're enjoying it!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 12, 2011 07:49 pm (
Chapter 14- He's Got A Point)
I just got chills cause I remember watching that on TV..I was 11 at the time..it was everywhere..lolz Ok from the top, the Christmas and NYE family togetherness was soo nice. :) Im glad that JC's family likes Liz, and everything is going well.. this line here "Tyler laughed. “Nah, it’s almost ten and usually Heather’s new boyfriend calls around this time so I just lean back against the wall and overhear everything. It’s actually pretty entertaining” That is so funny! *note to self* he was also eavesdropping on JC and Liz as well..pssh. Thats Tyler to ya..haha Oh! And the part where JC said that Liz was his "eleventh girl" and then saying that he was kidding..yeah JC..surreee.. ;) Above all, this is good..*reads next chapter*
Author's Response: Loved that Special <3 :) Hahaha thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it!! :D
Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 12, 2011 03:15 pm (
Chapter 15- You Don't Know That)
WOW! What a couple of chapters...JC is being a huge asshole! Making her leave everything behind for him. Jerk. And now he is falling into bed with Allison? Wow, just wow. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yea, i'm having a little fun making him the bad guy in their situation.. haha!
He's in hot water now isn't he? :P Thank you so much for the read and review! :))
kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 09, 2011 08:18 pm (
Chapter 1- Why So Glum, Chum?)
i gotta say i love this story...very nice job....anything that makes JC a hopeless romantic is good in my book :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)) Glad you're liking it!! hehe Hope you keep reading & reviewing!!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 07, 2011 08:16 pm (
Chapter 13- Happy Birthday)
*squeals* THEY LOVE EACHOTHER! *sigh* Oh how romantic, Im gonna cry, *grabs Kleenex tissues* everything in this chapter is just perfect, simply perfect, aww..she was sad cause she thought JC wasnt coming for her bday, and he showed up, that is THE best bday EVER, now if only he can show up at MY door, that includes the other four guys as well, go ahead invade my fridge, I have plenty of food for all of you.. :D Im getting that warm and fuzzy feeling again, this is a happy moment. :) Ooh! Almost forgot, this line here. “Oh really? A bag of fleas in easier to handle than our dear Chris Kirkpatrick over there” HA! Awesome job on this chapter..Thank you for updating, this is really good! :
Author's Response: *giggles* Yayy!! Haha awww, thank you soo much! Will be updating soon! <3 :))
