Comments For We're Halfway There
Mack (Anonymous) on Jun 07, 2011 07:49 pm (Chapter 13- Happy Birthday)
Awwww. They finally said that they loved each other! Now, though I do like that they're together I want to see some good jaw-dropping, "Oh-my-God"-ing drama! I feel like they're too perfect right now. Loved it! Update again soon please.
Author's Response: Ahhh girl so do i!! They are too perect, but now that they've said 'i love you' i can kick things off.. LOL You see, i've got the whole good jaw dopping "Oh-my-God"-ing drama written out (that i think you'll like ;)) so i'm just trying to get it in so i can start spicing things up! :D Thank you very much for the read, review, and encouragement overall. Will update soon! :)
Author's Response: Ahhh girl so do i!! They are too perect, but now that they've said 'i love you' i can kick things off.. LOL You see, i've got the whole good jaw dopping "Oh-my-God"-ing drama written out (that i think you'll like ;)) so i'm just trying to get it in so i can start spicing things up! :D Thank you very much for the read, review, and encouragement overall. Will update soon! :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 07, 2011 07:30 pm (Chapter 12- Pinky Promise)
YAY! *NSYNC is going on tour! WOOT! *dances* Awww..dont be sad Liz, sure its tough when your travelling on the road, but.. "distance does make the heart grow fonder" tee hee.. Im sure you guys will make it work.. ;) Ok, this line right here "“Get your butt off me you old poodle man” the oldest member muttered" I remember that, it was on SNL, yes the classroom skit..lolz! Great job on this.. *reads next chapter*
Author's Response: Haha i was hoping someone would identify that line from SNL ;) Gotta love Chris.. lolz.. Thank you :))
Author's Response: Haha i was hoping someone would identify that line from SNL ;) Gotta love Chris.. lolz.. Thank you :))
Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 05, 2011 09:41 pm (Chapter 13- Happy Birthday)
Can I get an awwww on this? Awwww =). So glad that they FINALLY admitted they love each other! And JC was super cute suprising Lizzie on her birthday, loved it!
Author's Response: haha awww.. I know right! FINALLY! :P Thank you very much! :))
Author's Response: haha awww.. I know right! FINALLY! :P Thank you very much! :))
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 31, 2011 07:20 pm (Chapter 11- I Needed Company)
Author's Response: haha Thanks alot for the comments!! They are tremendously appreciated! :D Glad you're 'loving' this!! Thank you! :))
Woww..I felt the chills just reading that part.. *sigh* Its a little thing I like to call..love.. :) Ok, my favorite parts are when JC took Liz to the seafood restaurant, Yum..coconut shrimp.. :P The whole date itself was sweet.. awws.. :) And I laughed at this line here "What do you want Chris? Yea we left already. Yea. What, no I didn’t get you anything! Then order pizza, I don’t care. Yea, okay. Fine, can I go now? Bye” LOLZ! I can just hear Chris yapping away saying he wants food, haha, and of course he eventually got it anyway, *note JC's pocket* *giggles* And YAYY! She made it the concert, 10-15 mins left, I wouldnt miss that concert for the world.. *goes watch *NSYNC concert on youtube* and cheers! WOO!! "Here we go!" Great job on this, Im am LOVING this, and thanks for updating! :D
Author's Response: haha Thanks alot for the comments!! They are tremendously appreciated! :D Glad you're 'loving' this!! Thank you! :))
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 31, 2011 06:59 pm (Chapter 10- How Do I Look??)
Woo hoo! Date night! Ohh this is soo exciting, ok..love the part when they were at rehearsals, gotta love the Chris moments..I also like the part that JC is the only designated driver, cause everyone else was tired..Tee hee..this is good, gonna read the next chapter.. :D Thanks for the update. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Megan (Anonymous) on May 31, 2011 03:13 pm (Chapter 11- I Needed Company)
This story is just too cute...I'm glad that Liz made it to the concert to suprise him =). I love the way these 2 interact with each other. Can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Megan! :)) hehe More soon ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Megan! :)) hehe More soon ;)
Megan (Anonymous) on May 23, 2011 11:04 pm (Chapter 9- Tell Me Something I Don't Know)
grrrr just reading the name "lou" makes me wanna just kick the crap out of that man! lol. Anyways, loved the update! It's too cute that Liz has 'Tearin Up My Heart' as her ringtone. And its just too cute that JC is trying hard to make time for Liz even with his schedule!
Author's Response: Argh, i know right! lol!! Thank you very much :))
Author's Response: Argh, i know right! lol!! Thank you very much :))
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 22, 2011 08:30 pm (Chapter 9- Tell Me Something I Don't Know)
Oh by the way..MY ringtone is "Just Dont Tell Me That" by the one and only BEST popgroup EVER.. *grins*
Author's Response: *grins* MY ringtone is "It's Gonna Be Me" by the one and only BEST popgroup EVER.. haha *high five* :D
Author's Response: *grins* MY ringtone is "It's Gonna Be Me" by the one and only BEST popgroup EVER.. haha *high five* :D
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 22, 2011 08:29 pm (Chapter 9- Tell Me Something I Don't Know)
This line "What are the green boxes for?” JC asked, I have no idea why I laughed at that, I think it was when the guys were on SNL, and they were dressed in suits and were in a classroom, JC asked a similar question to the pill lady, he said "what are the red ones for? JC your too adorable for words,.so cute asking questions..tee hee..Now, Im so happy that the guys are going to be performing at Disney World! Woot! Yeah the Backstreet boys cancelled because they think that there "too mature and too old" for Disney, which is why *NSYNC is awesome..and will always be :D lolz Anywho, Im loving this! Thanks for updating.. :)
Author's Response: hahahaha i soo remember when he said that on SNL!! :D Ugh, i think i'm gonna go re-watch that scene now on YouTube just to see him :)) haha we all love NSYNC, and right now i especially love you for loving this story so far :) I had a pretty shitty day today and reading this review totally boosted my mood so thank you! More to come! :))
Author's Response: hahahaha i soo remember when he said that on SNL!! :D Ugh, i think i'm gonna go re-watch that scene now on YouTube just to see him :)) haha we all love NSYNC, and right now i especially love you for loving this story so far :) I had a pretty shitty day today and reading this review totally boosted my mood so thank you! More to come! :))
Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 21, 2011 08:13 pm (Chapter 9- Tell Me Something I Don't Know)
haha.........she had his song as her ringtone........and he almost gave her a heart attack!!!!...lol....that was the funniest...........and i'm sure that your bestoFwendo is extremely extatic that you dedicated this chap to her :).....now hurry up and post!!!!....i really wanna see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :P
Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 21, 2011 07:51 pm (Chapter 8- About Damn Time!!)
they're finally together!!!!!......awsome!!!!!...i cant wait to see how their relationship goes ;).....now i feel for ice-cream :(
Author's Response: Well, i'm very happy that you're all enthusiastic about their relationship.. LOL I'd say more, but then i'd just give away the whole story and we won't want that, right? ;) haha Thank you for reading Fwen :)
Author's Response: Well, i'm very happy that you're all enthusiastic about their relationship.. LOL I'd say more, but then i'd just give away the whole story and we won't want that, right? ;) haha Thank you for reading Fwen :)
Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 21, 2011 07:40 pm (Chapter 7- Now What?)
i understand where Liz was coming from........and i like the name you gave to the andy dude.....Mr. Handsy....lmfao...that was funny.......and he called her a hoe!!!....that was mean :(
Author's Response: Yea, it was mean.. But JC took care of that, don't ya think?? ;) LOL Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Yea, it was mean.. But JC took care of that, don't ya think?? ;) LOL Thanks for the review!
Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 20, 2011 10:22 pm (Chapter 5- It was like...)
i know you said that you wanted constructive critcism so this is what i got from this chap.......and well the previous chaps as well.....i noticed that you switch from Liz's POV to JC's POV and to the author's POV and it kinda confuses me...so mayb if you could write 'Liz's POV' right before your put herr POV that would be helpful...but all in all the story is goin amazing so far :D.....keep the awsome writing.........i have nothing bad to say about your writing style because to me its absolutely great!!!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Mmm okay.. Something for me to work at.. Let's see :D
Personally, i wasn't trying to create a certain POV for the characters and/or the autho because didn't want to have it be saying 'I looked at JC" for Liz's POV and then 'I looked at Liz" for JC's POV.. I was just trying to write the story from what was just going on at that point.. LOL sorry if i'm confusing u with the story and/or this response.. LOL thank you so much for your opinion and being honest and i'll try to keep it in mind for upcoming chapters! Thanks for the criticism and the compliments! I'm glad you're enjoying!
Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 20, 2011 08:14 pm (Chapter 4- What Just Happened?)
i loved this chap....as with all the others...but arent they moving really fast????........
Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying Fwen :) As for the moving fast part, well.. Maybe... But i guess that'll either pay off in the end or result in a very bad decision.. Guess you'll have to keep reading!
Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying Fwen :) As for the moving fast part, well.. Maybe... But i guess that'll either pay off in the end or result in a very bad decision.. Guess you'll have to keep reading!
Fwen-Person (Anonymous) on May 20, 2011 08:03 pm (Chapter 3- See You Then)
you know what would be funny??.....if emma and liz can't cook.....lmao........anywayz awsomely awsome chap
Author's Response: haha then they'd have to live off of take-out or junk food cuz JC really can't cook anything besides a pop tart.. haha thanks!
Author's Response: haha then they'd have to live off of take-out or junk food cuz JC really can't cook anything besides a pop tart.. haha thanks!
