Comments For Here Comes Goodbye
ChiChi (Anonymous) on May 23, 2011 01:38 am (Epilogue)
such a great bittersweet story. Definitely bought tears to my eyes. one of the best i have read lately.
Author's Response: Awe thank you. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the reviews.
Author's Response: Awe thank you. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the reviews.
ChiChi (Anonymous) on May 23, 2011 01:08 am (Prologue)
sure enough, that warning was right. awesome start.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 05, 2011 08:48 pm (Epilogue)
Oh my goodness! That was SUCH a bittersweet/sad story, thank you for the warning about the Kleenex tissues, I needed them.. *tear.. Above all, great job on this...
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much! Especially for reviewing each chapter. :) I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much! Especially for reviewing each chapter. :) I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 05, 2011 08:38 pm (Chapter 4)
Open them Justin, :( *tear *grabs Kleenex tissues*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 05, 2011 08:30 pm (Chapter 3)
*tear :( So Lindsay already explained it to Justin, this line right here is sad but true "And I'll always be right in here," she places her hand over my heart, "for whenever you need me. And I'm watching over you and will be waiting for you to be with me again."
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 05, 2011 08:24 pm (Chapter 2)
Justin is in an inner world, Im thinking that he's in an unconscious state of mind, and is having recurring dreams.. woww...this is very interesting, *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 05, 2011 08:18 pm (Chapter 1)
*gasp* Its not?? OOooooh..
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 05, 2011 08:14 pm (Prologue)
NO! *grabs Kleenex tissues* Good intro though *reads next chapter*
musicmel (Signed) on May 05, 2011 08:54 am (Epilogue)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Wow. You did a great job of telling the story from his ‘dream’ state to real life. Great job!
So sad. It makes me wonder if he really moved on, or did he just tell her what she wanted to hear.Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
jersey_tenn (Signed) on May 04, 2011 11:55 pm (Epilogue)
this was soooo good. i loved it. the interwebbing of his reality and his subconscious was genius. great job. congrats dear.
Author's Response: Thank you, for reading and reviewing. I was very pleasently surprised with how smoothly this flowed and was to write. I'm very glad you like it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, for reading and reviewing. I was very pleasently surprised with how smoothly this flowed and was to write. I'm very glad you like it. :)
