I didn't read this chapter, AHH! Love the Rachel and Cal relationship, Cal sounds so dreamy.. :)
Nice job..
Yay for the Trace and Rachel angst, oooh she's gonna have a baby...*dun dun dun* You updated..glad you did though. Nicely done.. :)
Wow another update? Awesome!
Poor Mack is gonna drive herself crazy if she doesn't just relax! And I think Justin really needed to hear that from the guys. And I really feel sorry for Trace, I hope that he starts living his life for him, and do what he wants to do. I hope he realizes that that's what'll he'll truly make him happy.
I laughed at these lines here " (“I saw a bone!” Chris cried out. “I swear!”) LMAO!
Ok gosh Mack is gonna have a tough time while she is resting her leg, she is freakin out saying that she has to get up and dance, and of course she got distracted, Justin, Trace?? Anyone.. ;)
And Justin FINALLY let his steam out about Britney, so sad. And these lines here, “You can talk to us whenever you want,” Joey said. “We just hope you understand where we’re coming from.” The four of them silently left the room. Aww.... :( I can just imagine, yeah Justin, go talk to them..this was a nice update, I liked it. :)
WHOA, WHOA, WHOA.
I can't even begin to start on this chapter...lol. Number one, I don't want to put spoilers in the reviews, because some people, like myself, glance at reviews before reading...lol. I'm shocked at what's going on, and what I THINK this chapter is alluding to. Has Mack thrown herself into a love....square? Hmm. I mean, a chapter or two back with her and Trace....the whole thing with Justin in the kitchen. [ I KNEW that was going to happen, I felt it. ], and that whole JC sort of stepping in and being the "superhero".
Update soon, Mack. SUPER SOON. =D
Poor Mackie.. :( I'm sure its not broken...just a minor sprain. And ooh minor talk with her and Justin huh?? ;)
But I laughed at this line here “Does that mean Justin gets a donkey?” Chris joked. “Shut up, man! I have my own horse,” Justin said, shoving him. LOL!
And lolz JC is not used to being in the Southern heat, he's so polite. :P
Nice job thanks for the update..
Wow! Now Justin has feelings for Mack! I can't believe he kissed her. I wonder how he's gonna react when he finds out Mack and Trace are a potential couple? And I think JC's culture shock is so funny! He can't get used to the south! By the way, is it just me, or does JC have a thing for Mack as well? Hmmm... And I can't believe Mack hurt herself. I hope nothing's broken.
"Oh, shut up and take me to the hospital," Mack grumbled. True Mack fashion! LOL! Can't wait to read more!
Yea poor Left Eye.. :(
But wow, that was a twist, Mack and Trace..wow. I like how she was like wanting him..hahah. And she's afraid of storms, aww but Trace was there sooo...I liked this chapter, thanks for updating. :)