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Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 09:04 pm (Fifty)

I'm reading and absolutely loving what I'm reading until...

 

YOU MADE HIM HIT HER?!?!?!?!

 

Didn't I tell you if you made him hit her, I was going to hurt you?!  Girl, thank GOD for Justin because I was beyond afraid of what might happen.  If he doesn't realize that he needs help now, I don't know what will. The old Braeden wouldn't have EVER put his hands on her or said anything ill towards her at all.

 

Team Justin baby!  Woohoo!!! :)

 

Ki 



Author's Response: LOL I didn't do it! It's all Bray's fault...really!! Justin to the rescue of course...but there's still more to come. Glad you liked it! You're the best...and I hope to have the next chapter up tonight :)

Author's Response: LOL I didn't do it! It's all Bray's fault...really!! Justin to the rescue of course...but there's still more to come. Glad you liked it! You're the best...and I hope to have the next chapter up tonight :)



avalyne (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 07:30 pm (Fifty)
these last two chapters rocked my socks off. i'm so happy to see justin fighting for abbey!

Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now so...more soon!



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 07:07 pm (One)
WHAT THE HELL poor Abby but go Justin so glad that he was there to save her. Now please let her leave the jerk for good great chapter please post soon thanks.

Author's Response:

Working on it as we speak! Thanks for reading haha I'll post soon!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 05:08 pm (Fifty)
whatttt??????????? crazy!! i knew a blow out was coming but i definitely didn't see that coming!!!! great job! i can't wait for more!!!! :)

Author's Response: I know, wasn't it nuts? I'm working on the next chapter for ya! More soon! Thanks for reading!



MissM (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 04:35 pm (Fifty)
SNAP is right! 

Author's Response: LOL



wpoohbear (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 04:25 pm (Fifty)
Abbey getting hit = bad but hero Justin = great!
Loved this chapter!!! So glad they talked things out. Hope she's on the next plane back to New York.

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it! More soon!



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 12:35 pm (Forty Nine)
YAY!!! please let this work!!!!  great job once again!! Now it looks like it's all on Abbey. Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! More soon I promise!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 12:19 pm (Forty Nine)
oh, thank goodness!!!! i hope their lunch goes well! He better not chicken out and revert to being a cold-hearted jerk!!! i hope braeden also realizes if he loves abbey at all, he'll now he needs to let her go so she can be happy. Great update!!!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I have a nother chapter in the works and I hope to get it up today!



Tanya (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 10:58 am (Forty Nine)
its about damn time! Braedens gonna find out and throw a huge fit huh?? Never really liked his character since he got home anyways...

Author's Response: LOL. My lips are sealed! You'll have to read and see what happens! Thanks for reading! More soon!



SJane (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 06:02 am (Forty Nine)
yeah u go get ur girl back justin...austin you are seriously my hero for running to abbey and starting this

Author's Response: thanks for reading! I'm working on the next chapter now!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 05:15 am (Forty Nine)
YES!!!!!! A reunion FINALLY!!! Yay!!! This just made me smile :-)

Author's Response: YAYYYY! Glad it made you smile lol. More soon!



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 12:34 am (Forty Nine)

Thank you for finally revealing how Trace really felt about Abbey.  It helps to understand him better you know? Anywho, I know you know how excited I am about them having some alone time together.  I don't know what that wonderful mind has planned but they can't lie to each other about what they're feeling.  Even if they don't get back together (which would be a total downer for me) if they can be honest with each other, at least they'll know where they stand.

Ki

P.S-Bump everything I said about the whole not getting back together shit...fix them! :) 



Author's Response: Naturally I fell asleep on our convo last night...again. It's been a long long week.  I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Hopefully you'll like what comes next :) More soon, girl.  I promise! Love ya!



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 12:09 am (Forty Nine)

I'm really glad we got to hear what Trace really thought! And I'm really glad Justin is gonna go for it! Cant wait to see how this lunch thing is gonna go!

Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it! Working on the next part now :)



Lady T (Anonymous) on Oct 28, 2011 08:15 am (Forty Eight)
UGH! Can't Brayden just go be w/ the other girl. He's so IRKY. Justin and Abbey need to get married and have babies. LOL!! I was so crushed when Justin told Abbey that she ripped his heart out :-)

Author's Response: Irky haha that's a new one! I will have an update soon! Don't worry :)



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 28, 2011 01:25 am (Forty Eight)

Ok so she started going on the right line of thinking. Duh Abbey! Yes you of all people know that Justin would shut down if he felt that  he would be slightly hurt and NO you shouldn't have just left when he told you too. But still at the end she thinks she needs to stick it out with Braeden! She's gonna be miserable and she's already got herself in too deep...he's gonna be hurt no matter what!!

More soon please! This little reunion is not the way I wanted it to go. But I trust you and your awesomeness!!



Author's Response: I know you guys wanted me to have them kiss and make up and live happily ever after lol. Unfortunately my mind works in sick and twisted ways! I will have more for you soon, don't worry :)





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