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samantha (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 12:33 pm (Forty Three)
Author's Response: Should we have shirts that say Team Justin on them?
PLEASE DON'T LET THEM MARRY...
TEAM JUSTIN!!!
Author's Response: Should we have shirts that say Team Justin on them?
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 12:32 pm (Forty Three)
Doesn't she realize she can't do that?!? It isn't fair to anyone!!!! Ahhhhhhhhh! I'm still holding out hope that Justin shows up and talks some sense into her... or that someone at all talks some sense into her! Great update!!
Author's Response: Lol I know, I'm terrible aren't I? Thank you for reading! Updating soon!
Author's Response: Lol I know, I'm terrible aren't I? Thank you for reading! Updating soon!
SleepyME (Signed) on Oct 20, 2011 11:20 am (Forty Three)
Wow I just read this whole story and I love it. I was really pulling for Justin and her to get back together but now I want them separate. I feel like she didn't love him like he loved her. She always seem to have one foot in and the other out. Great story update soon
Author's Response: Aw, I looked at your profile and noticed your join date. !elcome to the Archive! Thank you so much for checking out my story! I think you are one of the only people on here who are still Team Braeden, lol. Thank you for reading! I'll update soon :)
Author's Response: Aw, I looked at your profile and noticed your join date. !elcome to the Archive! Thank you so much for checking out my story! I think you are one of the only people on here who are still Team Braeden, lol. Thank you for reading! I'll update soon :)
Tanya (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 11:15 am (Forty Three)
BOOOO!!!!!! im team justin! think its time for him to get back in the equation....
Author's Response: It's his fault you know! He's a dope! Just my opinion lol. More soon I promise! Thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: It's his fault you know! He's a dope! Just my opinion lol. More soon I promise! Thanks for reading :)
LisaTn (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 08:54 am (Forty Three)
OMG!!! Abbey can't do that!!!
Author's Response: I guess we need the Team Justin police to intervene...lol. Thanks for reading, more soon :)
Author's Response: I guess we need the Team Justin police to intervene...lol. Thanks for reading, more soon :)
StarStruck24 (Signed) on Oct 20, 2011 08:09 am (Forty Two)
Ugh. What a heartbreaking chapter...poor Austin. I hope Justin comes to his senses soon....
Author's Response: I know :( so sad. More soon!
Author's Response: I know :( so sad. More soon!
dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 07:50 am (One)
NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO no hell no she cant! What is she thinking has she lost her mind? Where is Justin? pla dont leave us haning. She cant marry him she belongs with Justin. Justin come to your sences and save her!
MissM (Signed) on Oct 20, 2011 04:04 am (Forty Three)
Oh, damn....
Author's Response: Things just got a bit more complicated lol
Author's Response: Things just got a bit more complicated lol
candigirl23 (Signed) on Oct 20, 2011 12:45 am (Forty Two)
OMG!! That completely broke my heart :0( Great update can't wait for more!! :0)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! More is coming up!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! More is coming up!
JoJo (Signed) on Oct 20, 2011 12:19 am (Forty Two)
OMG!!! If I thought the last chapter killed me, this chapter just broke my heart. The image of Austin chasing the taxi was completely heartbreaking. Oh my goodness...please tell me you have an update coming real soon! Sad but great update!!
Author's Response: I know :( It was so sad. I do have an update in the works right now! I'm not sure when ill finish it, I think I'm about halfway through. Soon! I promise!
Author's Response: I know :( It was so sad. I do have an update in the works right now! I'm not sure when ill finish it, I think I'm about halfway through. Soon! I promise!
Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 19, 2011 06:18 pm (Forty Two)
Author's Response: LOL! He's 'psychologically bruised'
Justin's an asshole....and that's all I have to say.
Ki
Author's Response: LOL! He's 'psychologically bruised'
Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 19, 2011 06:10 pm (Forty One)
Author's Response:
I know you said not to but I'M GOING TO KILL YOU! I can't even believe it went the way it did. Damnit Justin, why are you doing this to yourself? I can't even begin to relate to you what I feel. It's kinda sad, I feel like I know these fictional people. That's happened to me a few times before and this is no exception. Your writing is ridiculous!
Amazement lady, pure amazement.
Ki
Author's Response:
Hey you! I guess I'm in trouble, Lol. I figured you above all would probably want to kill me. Justin is a dope :( Believe me, I feel like these fictional people are writing the story for me sometimes! Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. You're such an inspiration, Ki. Talk to you soon :)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 19, 2011 04:08 pm (Forty Two)
This chapter broke my heart!! It was a great update, please don't leave us hanging too long! I'm seriously hoping Justin gets his act together soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I promise I'll be working on an update for you tonight! Hopefully Justin becomes less of a dope, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I promise I'll be working on an update for you tonight! Hopefully Justin becomes less of a dope, haha.
MissM (Signed) on Oct 19, 2011 03:45 pm (Forty Two)
This chapter killed me. Those boys.... :( *angryface* at Justin
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
I know :( I love the boys, and I'm angry at Justin...
This can't be healthy.
alimera (Signed) on Oct 19, 2011 02:41 pm (Forty Two)
AAAAAAAAAAGH fix it!! Abbey and Justin belong together...Braeden was pretty much gone and okayfine Abbey needed to see him again for closure, but now Justin is being an ass and...ugh I can't even talk about it anymore lol. JUST FIX IT! Plz? lol Love it, update again soon!
Author's Response: So I'm guessing you're team Justin? Lol. I'll see what I can do for you! No promises though! It's up to Abbey and Justin they're allilvvveeeeee. Lol, Updating soon I promise :)
Author's Response: So I'm guessing you're team Justin? Lol. I'll see what I can do for you! No promises though! It's up to Abbey and Justin they're allilvvveeeeee. Lol, Updating soon I promise :)
