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SJane (Signed) on Jun 22, 2011 02:06 am (Twenty)
oh dont even think about running from abbey and her love ya little fucker lol ill smack him if he does

Author's Response: lol thank you for reading.



brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 22, 2011 12:59 am (Twenty)

First, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!

 I think the whole thing with Sydney is some type of act. She had to know that Trace was stealing moVey from Justin, heck she probaly put him up to it since he did it before. IF she really wanted to provide for Kristy she'd take any job - and slapping her daughter just because she wanted to stay and play - that's uncalled for. I forgot about the cocaine... *gasp* Abbey could be on to something, WHAT IF Sydney WAS somehow using Trace to steal money from Justin - nah that could't be what's going on. So Abbey finally said those 3 words -- hope it doesnt scare Justin away.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, Justin needs to man up with the love thing...and the whole Sydney thing is drammaaaa.  I will have an update tonight or tomorrow.



Keediluv (Signed) on Jun 21, 2011 11:01 pm (Twenty)

Happy Birthday Love!  I hope you enjoyed yourself today and thank you for thinking of others (us) on your most special day; that was really thoughtful of you.

These last couple chapters have been a rollercoaster of drama but you were right, it didn't go the way I thought it would have.  And I had the sneaking suspicion that there was more to this whole Trace stealing thing than I originally thought.  That damn Sydney!  I hope she gets it (like really gets it).  I'm glad that Abbey admitted that she loves him and I know he loves her, he wouldn't be so terrified of her leaving if he didn't.  Just admit it and move on dude. LOL!

Sorry I haven't been around much lately, going through a personal tragedy right now but we're hanging in there.  To see you've been updating regularly has been a real treat for me.  These chapters are awesome and you're amazing as usual.

Ki 



Author's Response: Thanks for the birthday wishes! I"m so sorry to hear about your personal tragedy, I hope everything clears up soon, I will keep you and your family in my thoughts.  I know, drama drama, and Sydney is a bitch! Lol.  Hope to get another chapter out for you soon to brighten your day :)



dani86 (Anonymous) on Jun 21, 2011 10:14 pm (One)
First off HAPPY BIRTHDAY and 2nd great chapter but justin really man love isnt that important come on man. Third cant wait to see if he visits Trace and once again thanks for the update

Author's Response: Thank you for the birthday wishes! And yeah that Justin is so stubborn lol.  Hopefully an update soon :)



Tina (Anonymous) on Jun 21, 2011 07:19 pm (Twenty)
Happy Birthday! I love your updates like always.

Author's Response: Thank you!!



dani86 (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 05:14 pm (One)
ok so now you have me wondering if trace is setup as well. You said we were in for a twist. Well great chapter love they Austin scored his goal not so happy about justins ideas for the boys. Anyway love these last to chapetrs and cant wait for the update thanks for posting 2 back to back

Author's Response:  :) You'll find out soon, I promise! Thanks for your input!



brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 12:52 pm (Nineteen)

oooh! Quick update =) I hate that Trace used Justin only to get ahead. Its as if there whole friendship was based on a lie. The conversation between Abbey and Justin seemed like it would turn sour. I'm glad Austin's team won the game. I could just imagine how that would turn out if his team didn't win. Dang paparazzi - that's all I can really say about them. I'm glad Abbey trusts Justin but I wish she would open up to him, then again he hasn't opened up to her all the way either.



Author's Response: Glad you're still loving it :) More soon!



Nikki (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 12:34 pm (One)
I agree, I (for some reason) think that he's being set up and I think it has something to do with his girlfriend. After Abbey caught her doing drugs in the bathroom, I've been pondering that there might be something deeper going on her and it has to do with her. Am I on to something here?

Author's Response:

If I told you'd I'd have to kill you....

 

No seriously lol, it won't be too much longer til you guys find out whats going on! Thanks for reading!




Tina (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 07:22 am (Nineteen)
Loving the story. Keep the updates coming :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working as hard as i can for ya ;)



brightbrowneyes83 (Anonymous) on Jun 19, 2011 03:10 am (Eighteen)
I can't believe Trace took more money over the weekend while he was staying in the hamptons with Justin.  How did he even manage that? And what makes me even more upset is that he had the nerve to claim "not guilty" Im so happy Justin thought to go home and ended up making it just in time for Austin's game.

Author's Response: Haha thanks for reading.  I know, it's a messed up situation.  HOpefully I'll have more for you soon :)



Gigi (Signed) on Jun 18, 2011 08:11 pm (Eighteen)
I'm beginning to think maybe Trace was set up! I know it's crazy but that's what I think.

Author's Response: Hmmm...I guess you'll have to wait and see!



brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 11, 2011 04:32 am (Seventeen)

Goodness, I wasn't expecting Abbey's "dead" boyfriend to be alive. I liked what was going on with her and Justin. Now if Braeden gets out alive - i hope he dosen't come in between Justin and Abbey because he wanted her to be happy and she seems like she can be happy with Justin and his brothers.

 I was shocked to find out that Trace was involved in some shady business, although I knew there was a reason I didn't like him. (That reason grew even more when he threatened Abbey at the rest stop.)

Oh!! My mouth dropped and then a huge grin spread across my face when I read that Justin kissed abbey in front of everyone before their roadtrip.

The line Austin said about their mom always having justin [picture] with her choked me up.

I love that justin is bonding with his brothers and i hope it continues. and the breakthrough between abbey and justin? I loved it!!! It's got to be my favorite part so far.

 I can't wait for the next  update!!



Author's Response: SO glad you are loving this! I'll try to update for you ASAP. It means a lot that you are such a fan :) Thank you thank you!



Tina (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2011 04:03 am (Seventeen)
They're so hot and cute. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!! Hopefully there will be more soon.



brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 11, 2011 01:45 am (Ten)

i started reading this story 2 or 3 nights ago. (not exactly sure how many days but it was earlier this week) At first I was angry with Justin and only read 1 chapter. The next night I knew i wanted to continue even though I was angry with him - i wanted to see what happens. I'm so glad I didn't give up on this story. I'm definitely hooked. I love how Abbey is so good with the boys and has an affect on Justin. I was surprised, to say the least, when Justin kissed Abbey. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: So glad you stuck with it :)



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2011 01:32 pm (Seventeen)
ahhh...i absolutely loved this chapter.  i'm so glad that justin and abbey are finally breaking down their walls.  i can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I'll have another chapter for you shortly :)





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