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Tink (Signed) on Jun 09, 2011 10:35 am (Seventeen)
Really enjoying this and can't wait to read more. Dying to find out what happens with Abbey's "dead" boyfriend

Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying :) Ah yes, there is more of Braeden to come in a bit!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jun 08, 2011 11:15 pm (Fifteen)
I'm back, I just couldn't seem to stay away from this story, I kept seeing it and wanting know what happened so I came back and I see that you did change Quince and you don't know how that makes me feel. I was already feeling bad after you explained you intentions for his character and it really touched me that you spent time to change his character. thank you for that....

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you came back and decided to give it another chance.  I had no problem changing Quincy.  i know that it was a senstive subject, and I realized my mistake when you pointed out and I thank you for that.  Hopefully I will have another update soon :) Enjoy!



dani86 (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2011 11:20 am (One)
I finally got my fix! lol cant wait for the next chapter love love love this story. Cant wait for that little greedy ass to be dealt with and kinda wondering what happen to abbys ex.

Author's Response: thanks for reading!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Jun 07, 2011 11:12 pm (Sixteen)
GREAT chapter, as usual! Girl we MISSED u like a recovering crack addict misses their pipe! so glad to have you back :-) 

Author's Response: LOL thank you! I know I know...I actually sing and when the warm weather comes it's usually when all the competitions start so I've been running around like a crazy person! Glad you loved the chapter :) Hopefully i'll have the rest of this one done soon.



Keediluv (Signed) on Jun 07, 2011 10:06 am (Sixteen)

Where have you been?!  It's been days and when a story is like crack to you, you can't go that long without a hit, lol. And this...

"It was a picture of you." That whole damn section tore me up!  Like really, that was awesome.  Everytime I think this story is going one way, you loop me a completely different way.  I like what Justin's becoming.  Hope he (and you) allow it to continue.  And deal with Trace please...I want to jump through the damn screen everytime he talks.  Delicious update mama!

Ki 



Author's Response: I'm sorry! I just got really busy, but i'm here now! Lol. I'm trying to get through another chapter for ya if i can! So glad you loved the Austin/Justin scene :) And Trace will be dealt with shortly lol, but it may not be the story line you expect... that's all I'm saying.  bye for now!



SJane (Signed) on Jun 07, 2011 09:57 am (Sixteen)
seriously there is a reason this story is in my favs now

Author's Response: aw thank you I really appreciate it :)



wpoohbear (Signed) on Jun 05, 2011 06:40 am (Fifteen)
Love this story! Read all 15 chapters in one sitting.  I need to know what Justin is going to do to Trace! Update! Lol!

Author's Response: thank you for reading! there is ano ther chapter up for you now :)



Keediluv (Signed) on Jun 02, 2011 09:36 pm (Fifteen)

You better not let him go!  I was waiting on her to admit it to herself and I'm happy that she did.  So now, Justin just has to admit it and confront the bitchassness that is Trace so they can keep it moving.  She's a better woman than I because I promise that little incident in the store wouldn't have went so smoothly with me.  I would have clocked his little ass.  He need to be handled ASAP!  You and these yummy updates...I love it mama!

Ki 



Author's Response: I so needed this feedback from you today lol. I've been feeling completely in the shitter all day long, so thank you for boosting my spirits!  Yeah Abbey is really good at holding back her emotions some of the time, I think I would have bitch slapped Trace myself.  Glad you are loving it, hopefully I will have an update soon.



candigirl23 (Signed) on Jun 02, 2011 02:33 am (One)
I love this story so far!!! But Trace is gettin'on my last nerve!! Can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I know Trace is getting on my nerves too haha...don't worry though things will get better in time :)



JoJo (Signed) on Jun 01, 2011 10:12 pm (Fifteen)
Ugggh Trace just needs to go away! I love this story! You have me hooked and I check everyday to see if you updated! Please don't keep me waiting!

Author's Response: Haha thank you :) I'll try to get another update for you soon :)



mzmillion (Signed) on Jun 01, 2011 09:42 pm (Fifteen)

I didn't read this whole chapter because one, the money that is missing seems to be too low for such a high end investment firm, it should be like 30 million missing...or something, especially for the FBI to be involved.

 Second, I think I hate how Quincy is portrayed in this story. I guess it comes off as his is more dumb than having an accent, especially considering he's the only black person the story and then when he has to say stuff like "boss'll have me hide", it doesn't sound comfortable at all to me. 

 I really like this story too... but I think I have to give it up....unfortunately. It's rubbing me the wrong way. 



Author's Response: It's unfortunate...I did a ton of research on embezzlement scandals, and the FBI has gotten involved in cases for even less than a million.  Secondly, I was trying to portray an accent, I wasn't trying to stereotype a black person...nothing like that.  But, everybody is entitled to their opinions, and maybe I'll go back and try to just write him...without an accent? I really don't know at this point, lol.  Sorry to have offended you, if that is what you feel that I did.



SJane (Signed) on Jun 01, 2011 04:49 pm (Fifteen)
oh lordy i just want to burst with happiness with these two, and justin and austin just lovely.

Tracd can kiss my ass too little punk and i kind of want to smack his leech of a gf lol

Author's Response: thanks for reaaaadddinnggg



Jbear (Signed) on May 30, 2011 06:51 pm (Fourteen)
Finally! I can review. I am so loving this story that I am on here everyday looking to see if you have updated! So first off I love that you did add that twist to the fact that Braden is still alive ( I hope I spelled his name right) that was just awesome. When I started reading it I was like whoa really? Threw me for a loop and I loved that. Next I like how just is trying to be a real man! LOL I like that he is slowly accpeting that he needs to work through his issues and I hope he really talks to Austin and I wanna know what it was that made him leave home cause I have a feeling that he and Austin have that in common. On to the Trace stuff! Seriously I thought Justin was an ass Trace just tops him by 200!! Ok I would like more ASAP thank you very much!! LOL

Author's Response: Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad Braedens story is being accepted so well.  I was nervous about it at first, but now i know that i made the right decision :)  I'll be revealing more about Justin's past in the coming chapters :)  I will try to update ASAP!! You're very welcome!!



Gigi (Signed) on May 30, 2011 12:53 pm (Thirteen)
SOB!!!!!!



dani86 (Anonymous) on May 30, 2011 10:19 am (One)
ugh trace why anyway i hope justin figures it out soon thans for the awesome update

Author's Response: you're welcome :) another update is ready for you!





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