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jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 30, 2011 07:44 am (Seventy Five)
Ok chapter 74. Justin is so amazing! Seriously! Why can't guys rly be like that? Lol. Abbey and her dad when he woke up made me cry. My heart broke. Poor girl. :( I never want to imagine.

Chapter 75. Bray and Jess are so freaking cute!! I love this update. Love how his father is making an attempt. Even if his mom made him. It's a start. So sweet. So awesome :)

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much for your feedback! Only two chapters left! So sad!


Tink (Signed) on Nov 28, 2011 03:17 am (Seventy Three)
Great chapter, still loving this story and don't want it to end

Author's Response: As always...thank you so much!


candigirl23 (Signed) on Nov 28, 2011 12:00 am (Seventy Three)
OMG!! Love this story!! Cant wait for more!!! 

Author's Response: Yay! More soon!


Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 27, 2011 10:02 pm (Seventy Three)

If you kill her daddy.....

You should already know what I'm going to follow that with!

You know I love you but there better be a method to this madness!

Ki

P.S-Jessica and Braeden are so freakin cute!  



Author's Response: LOL I knew you were gonna say that.  Don't worry I have this planned in my brain, and i thought and thought about it adn couldn't come up with a better solution.  I know! I love Jess and Bray ahhh. love ya!


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 27, 2011 09:34 pm (Seventy Three)
Omg poor Abbey! :( that's terrible! Just when everything was going so great. Oh man. Can't wait for mre!

Author's Response: I knowww lol I promise if there was another way around this I think I would have taken it.  More soon :)


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 27, 2011 02:13 pm (Seventy Two)
I am so glad that bray is getting better seriousy. He needs that. Too sweet. I love Justin even more. Oh yes. Lol so sad it's coming to an end :( but it will always be a favorite of mine

Author's Response: aw one of your faves? that means so much! thanks!


StarStruck24 (Signed) on Nov 27, 2011 12:57 pm (Seventy Two)
I'm so sad this is winding down...but I'm glad that Abbey saw Braeden and that things will be OK between them. Can't wait to see how things play out with Braeden and Jess though - he definitely deserves to be happy.

Author's Response: Congrats on being the number 300 feedback! I'm sad it's ending too :( Glad you liked the chapter though! More soon!


Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 25, 2011 08:40 pm (Seventy)

Ain't this some shit!  I knew this would all tie together some kinda way but I wasn't expecting this.  Good shit! :)

Ki 



Author's Response: Thanks Ki! It means a lot that you like where I've taken it...I'll ahve more for you soon...love ya!


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 25, 2011 07:12 pm (Seventy One)
I can't Imagine how she was feeling. So awkward. Lol. But awesome update. Love it. :)

Author's Response: Lol I know right? Glad you're loving it...more soon :)


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 24, 2011 09:03 pm (Seventy)
"...but at the same time she's my damn wife now an he's gotta drop it..." haha absolutely love that quote!! Omg excited for the drama that is about to ensue with braedrn and Abby and Justin and Jessica haha woo that was a mouth full. :D

Author's Response: Lol glad i could entertain ya! More is coming soon! thank you!


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 24, 2011 07:21 am (Sixty Nine)
Aw Austin! Quit being so stubborn! You have it made kid!! Poor Justin only getting a few hours of sleep and dealing with all that stress of Austin and the move :( loved the update can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: I know it's sad! Glad you liked it! There's an update waiting for ya!


JoJo (Signed) on Nov 24, 2011 01:48 am (Sixty Nine)

Ok so Austin needs to stop acting like a child!! He seems really ungrateful right now. They do everything to provide and love him and he acts like this.

I was laughing when he was getting sick cuz I don't think he is going to want to drink again...EVER!!! Totally been there!!

Great update! I really hope him and Abbey can have a good talk and figure out what's going on. Maybe he really does need space. But it would be so hard to let your 15 yr old son go!!



Author's Response: Yeah I hope Austin comes to his senses soon.  Hopefully somebody will be able to inspire him enough to wake the hell up and see the goodness in his life! Thanks for the comments! I'm flattered! More soon!


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 23, 2011 12:13 am (Sixty Eight)
You're so amazing with your updates! :). I can't believe how Austin acted! Come on kid grow up. Sheesh. But you have the 15 year old attitude down to a T haha. Yay this was awesome.

Author's Response: aww thank you! I'll have more soon!


Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 22, 2011 11:25 pm (Sixty Eight)

I'm sorry to whomever this offends but Justin need to beat Austin's ass!  I mean really, he is too damn much and calling Abbey out of her name was the last damn straw.  I would talk to him, because it's not all his fault...I know he's hurting but he's old enough to understand that being disrespectful is just not okay.  It has to happen, he need to get his mind right before he gets himself into something really fucked up.  Maybe he needs it to get him back to his old self...damn, Austin.

Ki 



Author's Response: Ugh i know. Austin is being a little ass at the moment, but you know how those horomones are.  I'll have more for you soon! Love you!


JoJo (Signed) on Nov 22, 2011 11:21 pm (Sixty Eight)
So I haven't had time to review the other chapters but I have been reading!! I'm loving it too!! Keep updating...I can never get tired of this story!

Author's Response: thank you! that's nice to hear! I'm working on an update for ya!




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