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Nikki (Anonymous) on May 24, 2011 06:14 pm (One)
Great product, thus far. Justin, Abbey, his brothers, the whole concept. However, I'm starting to rethink Trace---that was quite selfish of him. He has his happy but doesn't want the same for his best friend? Need more soon.
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
I think Trace can get really caught up in something if it's his project more so than Justin's. He's also not used to Justin being emotionally close with anybody, and as I'm starting to bring out, Trace is kind of a snob in this. But keep reading :) Thank you!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 24, 2011 05:59 am (Eight)
I read the whole eight chapters. Cool concept, I like it. Looking forward to the updates.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a shot! Much appreciated :)
Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a shot! Much appreciated :)
Tina (Anonymous) on May 23, 2011 08:23 pm (Eight)
I'm really really loving this story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you are enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you are enjoying it!
Keediluv (Signed) on May 22, 2011 09:01 am (Six)
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it so far!
This story is all kinds of awesome. Abbey is wonderful and her internal battles are funny and seems famaliar lol. Justin leaves a horrible taste in my mouth so I hope that turns around at least a little bit. The kids do need him so he needs to get it together. I love it so far ama, good stuff!
Ki
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it so far!
Tina (Anonymous) on May 21, 2011 12:57 pm (Six)
I love love Abbey.
Author's Response: Thanks haha i love her too!
Author's Response: Thanks haha i love her too!
Lady T (Anonymous) on May 18, 2011 07:47 am (Four)
ok it's official...i'm totally obsessed w/ this story and the characters. i can't get enough of abbey's sassy self putting justin in his place!
Author's Response: yay! sometimes obsession can be good! thanks for reading!
Author's Response: yay! sometimes obsession can be good! thanks for reading!
avalyne (Signed) on May 18, 2011 02:28 am (Four)
aww! i think my heart just melted.
Author's Response: haah thanks! i'm glad i made your heart melt lol.
Author's Response: haah thanks! i'm glad i made your heart melt lol.
Tina (Anonymous) on May 18, 2011 02:03 am (Four)
It's a start, alright.
Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reading :)
Tina (Anonymous) on May 14, 2011 04:24 pm (Three)
OMG he's a HUGE asshole in this. The story just keeps getting better. LOVE IT.
Author's Response: Haha yes he is. I"m glad you love it!! Thank you!
Author's Response: Haha yes he is. I"m glad you love it!! Thank you!
Lady T (Anonymous) on May 14, 2011 02:14 pm (Three)
I am in LOVE witht this story! It just keeps getting better and better!
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you so much! haha.
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you so much! haha.
jersey_tenn (Signed) on May 14, 2011 01:52 pm (Three)
i like abbey. no, i love abbey
Author's Response: I've been reading your stories for a bit, and I'm flattered that you are liking my new story as well. It's much appreciated :)
Author's Response: I've been reading your stories for a bit, and I'm flattered that you are liking my new story as well. It's much appreciated :)
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 14, 2011 10:54 am (Three)
I love love LOVED this chapter! Man, he's such a dick but you write in a way that I love it. Great job, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you are liking where the story is going :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you are liking where the story is going :)
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 14, 2011 10:53 am (Two)
This chapter was great. I love asshole!Justin although I'm kind of mad at him for uprooting them but it's all right, should make for good drama, haha.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah it was a pretty extreme move but i'm all about the drama lol.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah it was a pretty extreme move but i'm all about the drama lol.
