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Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 22, 2011 10:16 pm (Sixty Seven)

Abbey's a nerd.  An emotional mess and though I understand why, she still should think about Justin and his feelings.  She had every right to feel how she des about her baby but taing it out on her husband just isn't fair.  She owes him an apology.  Justin's been working way too hard trying to create a life for his family and he deserves some credit for the complete 180 that he's done.    

Although I know Justin's worried about them all, he shouldn't have to do it alone.

 

I fuckin love you! LOL, awesome two chapters mama :)

Ki 



Author's Response: YOu are 100 percent right lol.  I'm mad at Abbey too, and hope she comes to her sense :)  I love you too! I'm working on the next update for you. Thanks for the feedback as always it gives me that extra push! Happy Holiday.



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 22, 2011 07:47 pm (Sixty Seven)
Please dont have them break up. I don't think I can take it lol. I love this couple! No more mean Justin. Loved the Update! :) more please:)

Author's Response: lol thanks...ill have more soon dont worry!



Liz (Anonymous) on Nov 21, 2011 07:59 pm (Sixty Six)
Loving this story! I am hooked! Justin stepping up to the plate to be a family man is great--such growth for his character. I'm interested to see how Austin handles the move. Great work!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working on an update for you right now! More soon!



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 21, 2011 05:23 pm (Sixty Six)
I'm excited about their big move. A little nervous cuz I know something major is going to happen. Can't wait for more! I heart this story!

Author's Response: Thanks! Working on the next chapter now! I appreciate you sticking with it and commenting! Love ya!



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 20, 2011 10:43 pm (Sixty Five)

So...I know I haven't been around in a while and I'm sorry about that.  I've been so busy with work and life that it isn't fair but I knew...I KNEW I had some really good stuff waiting for me.

 

You didn't disappoint!

 

The wedding was epic and beautiful and I'm glad everything with Abbey's family worked out.  I was super excited to find out they were having twins and Victoria and Mason are such cute names!  I hope everything works out between them and Austin because he's afraid and hurt and doesn't want to deal with the inevitable.  These last few chapters have been amazing as usual and it only adds to your brilliance as a writer.

The way you've tied everything together works so well. You already know how I feel about you and this story. I've missed you so much love :) 



Author's Response: OMG I was like I hope Ki is okay! I know how it is girl...I've been really busy with work and stuff too.  Just glad to hear you're doing okay.  I'm really glad you like the direction I've taken with this too...I was sort of afraid that peeps hated it! LOL!  Love you so much and I hope you have a great thanksgiving! We will talk soon I hope :)



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 19, 2011 10:21 pm (Sixty Five)
That was so sweet of justin. I rly like the guy that he has become :). Love it.

Author's Response: yay thank you! more soon!



StarStruck24 (Signed) on Nov 19, 2011 07:16 pm (Sixty Five)
That's so great that Justin helped Mark and Hannah get out there to see Braeden. Can't wait to see how everything goes down once everyone gets to Texas though...

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like where it's going! More soon!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 19, 2011 01:38 am (Sixty Four)
I love this story!  It keeps getting better and better!!  Is this the same Jessica that was friends with Braeden?

Author's Response: Thank you! hmm I don't know... ;)



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 18, 2011 10:32 pm (Sixty Four)
I do not miss those days of every 2 to 3 hour feedings through the night lol. I loved this update. I think something will happen with this new chick Jessica in Texas. I'm worried about poor Austin :( can't wait for more. Great job! :)

Author's Response: aw thank you! more is coming soon!



Tina (Anonymous) on Nov 17, 2011 11:22 pm (Sixty Three)
I don't want this story to end lol. I'm in love. 



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 17, 2011 04:33 pm (Sixty Three)
They just get better and better. Seriously. Im so eager to find out what's going to happen next :)

Author's Response: Yay! I'm working on the next update for ya ;)



alimera (Signed) on Nov 15, 2011 01:04 pm (Sixty Two)
I love how you're not ending this quickly like 1, 2, 3...baby, we're married, we love each other, the end lol. I love the details and how you're wrapping everything together! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Yay so glad you're still loving it! I love details...I'm just trying to go easy beause I don't want to overwrite the story.  There's more coming up! Promise!



Tink (Signed) on Nov 15, 2011 08:05 am (Sixty Two)
Great chapter again. I love this story and don't want it to end

Author's Response: Don't worry there's still a little life left in this ;)



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 15, 2011 07:38 am (Sixty Two)
Aw Justin is so freaking cute! So sweet! I love this couple. :) I think somethings going to happen with mark. Can't wait to read more :) I get on here just to see if youve updated lol.

Author's Response: AW thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! More is coming up soon!



wpoohbear (Signed) on Nov 13, 2011 10:14 pm (Sixty One)
You know what...extend chapters and scenes, change names so you don't get sued....this would be a good book! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm totally considering that lol, but I don't know haha! Thank you for thinking it's worthy of being published though! I'm flattered!





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