Comments For Give into me
AngelEyes81 (Signed) on Mar 24, 2012 07:41 pm (Chapter 1)
Good story, but you should edit, because it all got jumbled into one big paragraph :D
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 20, 2011 09:09 pm (Chapter 1)
Best bday EVER! It was very wordy though, I got lost in the beginning but in the middle I didnt.. tee hee ;) GREAT job. :D
