theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 22, 2012 07:30 pm (
Chapter 23)
OOoooh! That email, hmm..
Now I like how comforting JC was with Kara earlier in this chapter, awws. :) And lolz Carly.
Its been a while since you updated, had to refresh my memory a bit. Nice job.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 23, 2011 03:11 pm (
Chapter 22)
*grabs Kleenex tissues* That was beautiful. I'm so happy that JC is gonna be the adoptive father of Carly... *happy sigh* She had the best bday ever..yayy! :D I really like that little wedding "talk" b/tween JC and Kara earlier in this chapter..yep yep. Nice job, I liked this.
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Nov 22, 2011 09:23 pm (
Chapter 22)
Eeeepp JC's gonna be Kara's dad! :O :)) And he and Kara want kids! I got excited when I saw an update from this story and I'm really enjoying! I liked the chapter so don't worry too much. It was pretty good. A couple grammatical errors here and there but above all, I enjoyed it. Update sooooon please!! :))
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Oct 21, 2011 05:31 pm (
Chapter 21)
This was a nice chapter! I loved when she was checking things off and was mentioned Chris' pixie sticks. haha that made me laugh! And I loved the way she was introduced onto the stage, so all the fans knew that this was JC's future wife. Oh and I lovedd the last couple lines when they were on the bed. ;) Nice job!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 21, 2011 01:27 pm (
Chapter 21)
*happy sigh* I LOVE THIS. Its so sweet and just :) And "Music of My heart" is one of my favorite songs ever, so happy that she was able to sing with the guys, and I like that idea of hers, she can just make one album and it doesn't have to be like over-the-top".. :) This is so nice, good job, and thanks for updating.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 12, 2011 06:30 pm (
Chapter 20)
Sing it Kara! Go for it! :D
I like this, ok I love that JC was getting turned on by Kara, by JUST wearing pajamas. Well JC, Im wearing pajamas now..tee hee.. :P I like that scene, and I liked how Kara took control when they were making love..love it. Great job on this chapter..thanks for updating..
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Oct 12, 2011 05:19 pm (
Chapter 20)
Ohh this was good! The engagement and JC fitting in well with Kara's family was really sweet. And the sex scene in the midst of it turned up the heat on the chapter so I liked that. hehe Looking forward to how the song and performance goes in the next chapter! Nice job!
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Oct 05, 2011 08:45 pm (
Chapter 19)
Eeeppp I loved this chapter!!! Everything was great and sweet and ahh... Had a smile on my face the whole time. Update soon please! Really enjoying this!
Author's Response: oh i will...keep looking you never know ;)...glad you are enjoying the story...please keep looking :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2011 08:11 pm (
Chapter 19)
She said YES! WOO HOO! *does happy dance* Oh my goodness, dont be afraid Kara, I know that you have never been this happy when you were with Nate and whatnot, but give JC a chance..he's so wonderful. And I like the song "Hey", yes JC co-wrote the song, so Im happy about that, and that is such a sweet surprise that he gave her as well. Pretty nice chapter, thanks for updating... :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2011 08:04 pm (
Chapter 19)
She said YES! WOO HOO! *does happy dance* Oh my goodness, dont be afraid Kara, I know that you have never been this happy when you were with Nate and whatnot, but give JC a chance..he's so wonderful. And I like the song "Hey", yes JC co-wrote the song, so Im happy about that, and that is such a sweet surprise that he gave her as well. Pretty nice chapter, thanks for updating... :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 21, 2011 08:48 pm (
Chapter 18)
Oh that was sooo touching, the letters that Kara and Carly read, oh..*grabs Kleenex tissues* And when they were at the cementary, and Kara was talking to Nate, wow..nice chapter, sad but nice. Thanks for updating.. :)
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 20, 2011 08:15 pm (
Chapter 18)
Soo I loved that you started this off with them waking up in bed :D It's one of my favorite ways to read someone opening up a scene. Ahh it's all cute and hot. haha Ahem.. okay. Aww it was soo nice when Kara was saying that 'If Carly falls' and JC interuppted and said that he'd be there to catch her... the BOTH of them... He's great in all of this. Kara's so lucky. This has a similar scene that I have in my story as well but this one was sad! :( Made me tear up a little. At least the future is promising for Kara and Carly and they've got JC to lean on, who is wonderful. Great job! :)) I want more!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 15, 2011 07:36 pm (
Chapter 17)
Oh wow! That was SOOOO beautiful! *grabs Kleenex tissues* They should make a collabo! What Chris said.. lolz this line here "“Screw her voice...the two of them together.” Chris said in total shock. LOL! This was great, :) I love that her family gets along with JC and everything, so yay! :D And oooh whats the next chapter, *waits patiently for next update* Good job though..
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 15, 2011 06:28 pm (
Chapter 17)
Ohhh such a sweet chapter! Argh about time you updated! LOL :P I love that David has taken an immediate liking to JC. I'm glad he can see that JC's a good guy for Kara and can support her and love her. The singing between the two of them was nice. I laughed at this line that Chris said: "Screw her voice... The two of them together!" I loved that line. And the ending when Kara threw that picture of her and Nate into the fireplace, I was like 'Go Kara!' :)) It's a step of moving forward and I like that. I was actually a little mad when you ended the chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: lmao....haven't you heard....always leave them wanting more...thanks for the review and i will be updating really soon
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2011 10:09 pm (
Chapter 16)
Awww.. :) Nice to meet you Margaret..ok, I like the little part where JC was talking to Kara..this line here " I will hold your hand or just stay back but know this if you are going to fall. I will help you back up." You know, JC actually said something similar like this in an interview, it was when he was talking about Paris Hilton?? Um..he said "Good things happen to good ppl, we all g2 trip and fall, but if you are a good person, you can pick yourself back up" It was something like that..lolz :) Pretty good job though, thanks for updating..