theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 25, 2011 05:07 pm (
Chapter 15)
Wait Dream?? The all girl pop group? I liked one of their songs, it was um.. "He loves me, he loves you not" Wow..talk about nostalgia..ok anyway..I love that JC's family was so welcoming and warm, that is so nice..though the story of Carly and what she was going through in the past was sad.. :( Im glad that both Kara and Carly found a new perspective, so far..everyones happy.. oh I also like that Carly was arguing with Joey about which sports team is better..LOLZ! And that was so sweet that Kara played some piano for JC, I can play some piano..so thats cute.. :) I liked this, thanks for updating..
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 22, 2011 09:58 pm (
Chapter 16)
Ohhh this was a good read!!! :D Aww Kara totally deserves happiness and it was sad how broken she felt at the beginning. I love how patient and caring JC is with her. He makes her feel like she's 'not alone' and that's really sweet. I look forward to reading about JC meeting her dad so post more soon!
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 16, 2011 10:07 pm (
Chapter 15)
Aww I liked it :)) Loved this line here: JC cupped her face as he said, "I have an idea and I love you too Kara." That was sweet. Looking forward to when he has to meet her family so update soon!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 13, 2011 01:36 pm (
Chapter 14)
*SIGH* YAY for JC loving..LOVE the way JC made Kara relax in that bubble filled tub.. that is OH so romantic..I like this line at the beginning of this chapter " Not the kind that she was used to either. She had earth moving, bone melting, love. Last night there were things said, and parts of her touched that she never thought could be touched. It was by far a night she would never forget.
*dreamy grin* :) And oooh New Jersey, that's where I live.. :D I am loving this, this is good. Thanks for the update..
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 11, 2011 11:43 pm (
Chapter 14)
I smiled when i saw that there was an update to this story so thanks :)) Mmmm JC... *contented sigh* I wonder if JC is as much of a sex God as us JC writers make him out to be.. HAHAHA Probably.. anyways.. I love that he got her to relax and I can't wait to see how everything goes for the both of them in terms of meeting the parents.. Nice job!
Author's Response: Trust me....after i wrote that i needed a cig....i am gald u are enjoying and i want an update on yours missy...keep up the good work :)
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 11, 2011 01:05 am (
Chapter 13)
I really liked how Carly told off Bobbi (haha Bobbi got told off by a teenager) and i loved the little scene where JC went to comfort Kara out by the water fountain. This was cute and i'm liking it! Can't wait to see how the upcoming Chicago trip/Meeting the parents go so please post more soon! :))
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2011 08:37 pm (
Chapter 13)
WOO! You TELL her Carly, that was really great what she told Bobbi. Kudos for her! :D Now, I love how caring JC is with Kara, and telling her that he would never leave her..aww soo sweet. Im so glad you updated right away, cause I thought you were gonna leave it like that..lolz Nice job.. :)
Author's Response: thank you...more will be comming very soon i have started the next chapter already too....i just got bit by the writing bug and have gone off with it.
keep on reading and reviewing
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2011 08:27 pm (
Chapter 12)
OOH! Where did Bobbi come from?! I have a couple of words to say to her but I rather just keep my mouth shut..HMPH! Ok..lets get back to a lighter note, Im so glad that Kara has found such a nice dress, thanks to Kelly..aww. And Im also glad that Carly's interview went well..Woot! Nice job on this chapter..Thanks for the update..
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jul 27, 2011 11:52 pm (
Chapter 11 (really Chapter 10))
Don't worry, this isn't too bad at all! I'm enjoying it!! :)) Looking forward to the upcoming chaps to see how everything turns out with JC & Kara.. Thanks for the update!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 27, 2011 09:41 pm (
Chapter 11 (really Chapter 10))
AWWW! Thats JC to u "She shouldn't be alone at a time like that...whether or not she realizes it she needs to stop being strong and let me be there to catch her when she falls. And I will do just that." :)
Ok, I love that Carly is doing so well with her photoshoot projects, so proud..
Nice job, thanks for the update..
grishy (Signed) on Jul 26, 2011 03:43 pm (
Prolouge)
Starting with this one, looks interesting...
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jul 25, 2011 12:19 pm (
Chapter 10)
Dammit! Morning loving from JC! If you're getting loving like that then Kara, enjoy the feeling while it lasts! lolz I'm liking this alot :)) I love Kara & JC and Carly seems to be doing pretty good too.. Looking forward to the next one!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 25, 2011 11:48 am (
Chapter 10)
Now one night of JC and I feel punch drunk in love. Is it wrong to feel like this?” Of course not Kara, it is the best feeling EVER, JC has that effect on people, I feel the same way.. *SIGH* Alrighty, looks like Kara got some morning loving from JC, that is soo romantic, and naughty too, I like naughty especially when it comes to JC..And looks like Carly is doing pretty well for herself, thats a great job.. :D I also like the friendship that Kelly and Kara have as well...and I must say this fanfics can make your mind go places..oh yes. ;P
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 17, 2011 02:21 pm (
Chapter 9)
WOO HOO! More steamy stuff..That was GREAT! The way you describe in THAT moment was...woww..it felt like I was Kara... :) JC you tease you..tee hee. Nice job on this.. Thanks for the update..
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jul 17, 2011 12:55 pm (
Chapter 9)
I liked this chapter! Things got steamy so of course i like it ;) LOL I'm glad they're no longer just 'JC and Kara'-> just friends.. So they're in love and are lovers now.. That's what i like :) Ohhh great last line. “I promise to never fail you, in anything.” Aww Nice job..
