So far I think these first 5 chapters are great! :) I'm definetly looking forward to reading all the way to the end of this story. Great job! PLEASE keep these chapter coming often cuz I can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I hope to have another one up soon. 

Ohhhh my goodness, I actually teared up during this. THANK GOD JC had the crap knocked back into him and he realized how much of an asshole he has been. Oh gosh I hope that something can work out between them...at least for the baby's sake.

Author's Response: Awww... thanks for reading!

Pleasant surprise to see you've updated again today! I'm glad JC is starting to straighten things out between him and Beth, and now he's the one being paranoid about her leaving him. Ha. Looking forward to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: It's about time he starts worrying about her.  Thanks!

You tell him Chris! *claps* This line right here made me laugh for some reason, maybe cause I can hear Chris saying it..HA! “That was because he is the lowest form of scum on this earth. He doesn’t deserve to call himself a man. You disgust me.” LOL! Ok, so glad that Chris did a little grocery shopping for her though, he's so nice.. :) NOW, lets get back to JC, see? he didnt close the acct, meaning he never even knew, I have a hunch I KNOW those two witches had something to do with it..UGHH! I wanna squash them like the bugs they are..Great job on this one, looking forward to the next chapter! :D Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: I love your comments!  Thanks for reading. 

Loved this chapter! Looking forward to the next one! Nice job

Author's Response: Thank you - I love your stories!

I love the intensity! I was actually heading out but decided to read while preparing when I saw that you updated. That's how much I've been anticipating for this update. lol. Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much!  I'm glad you like it. 

Chris! *hugs* Tee hee..he makes me smile :) Thats so nice that he's gonna get her some supper, I would LOVE to see how this goes, poor Beth, she needs all the help she can get..Now, Chris aka *Tricky* go have a little chat with Mr. JC, yeah he was supposed to be the responsible.*grumbles* Above all, great job on this, and thanks for the update. :D

Author's Response: Yeah, their "chat" will certainly be a surprise to JC.   Thanks for reading!!

Ohh I lovee Chris <3 Jeez i can't wait to see what happens in this 'little chat' :D Nice job

Author's Response: Thank you!  I think Chris is just the person for the job!

Oh my goodness, this makes me so so sad for Beth that she can't even afford food and heat for the house because of her accounts being cleaned out! Thank god someone stopped by to check on her, hopefully Chris can knock some sense into JC and help him see whats going on!! Hope to see another update soon...=)

Author's Response: I think Chris is just the person to knock some sense into JC- haha!

I am REALLY liking this! I keep checking this site to see if you've updated! lol. No pressure though. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you - lol!!  Pressure away, it inspires me to write faster!

Ooohhh! ok..Susie?? Leah?? That....WITCH! I wanna throw that coffee in her face! Or maybe her clothes..tee hee.. Now..I have a feeling I KNOW who cancelled the acct..and poor Beth is pregnant now and is thinking that JC is the meanest guy ever...UGH! This is getting good, its like watching a soap opera.. :) Im liking this..thanks for updating!  

Author's Response: It is like a soap opera, but I haven't seen one for years and hopefully this will move a little faster!  Thanks!

I'm sooooo liking this!! You have me wondering what in the hell is going to happen next.. ps, i'm really not liking Leah, or Susie.. Call JC Beth!! :O She's pregnant :D JC get some sense and call ur wife! LOL update soon!!

Author's Response: They are both sooooo stubborn! 

Hmmm something really weird is going on! What are Leah and Susie up to? and OMG I can't believe that JC cleared out the bank accounts on her or was it somehow those 2? hmmm. Also, hopefully Beth and JC can work something out for the sake of the baby at least. Nice update...can't wait for another one! I love this story!

Author's Response: Hmmmm...I wonder who emptied those accounts?!  Lol

*GASP* WHAT?! OOOH! WHAT?! Ok..wait *breathes* This line RIGHT here "The fact that she’s better than you have ever been?” JC froze as words he never meant to say escaped his lips.  JC! how could you say that?! Beth is YOUR wife, and that Leah..is a backup dancer?? UGH! This is really good, Looking foward to the next chapter..I MUST know what happens b/tween JC and Beth, and if that freak Leah comes back...and trust has to be earned.. *sigh* Great job! :D

Author's Response: Hmmm..the plot thickens!!!!  Thank you!