"I'm going to show you love baby," he whispered into her ear.

Now THAT is what I'm talking about. I low key melted because I could actually hear his voice saying something like that. I love that you demonstrated the clear difference between love and lust. It's very easily to get the two twisted, and can have you ending up feeling just as, if not more, empty. I really enjoyed reading this. You're very good at descibing what's happening. I felt like I was there. Yes....even in the bathroom, I felt like I was the Chinese kid...lol. Great read. :]

THIS line here "He cupped her face and pressed his lips against hers in a way that made a tingly feeling shoot up and down her spine. No man had that effect on her besides JC, no matter how many guys she fucked or how mad she was at him. He was always the one to remind her, even when he didn't know it, that her heart belonged with him." All I can say is AWWWW! That is sooo sweet! :) Yeah, he also has that effect on me..*daydreams*

Ok..moving on, Justin hmm..I dont think he really showed her love, probably lust, but since she was angry and all with JC, she just needed some action..so that was an interesting twist.. :P

Now, back to JC, Im glad that he was sorry for not paying enough attention to Trish, and I know that sometimes JC can be stuck in the studio for hrs, so I agree on that part..lolz. Above all, woo hoo! New story, nice job, I wanna see how this goes.. :)