Comments For Imperfect Unity
JoJo (Anonymous) on Oct 22, 2007 01:53 am (Chapter 14)
Beth was wrong for telling Trace about the fertility drugs like that...i don't like when they fight. fix them please! great update!
Author's Response: Beth is lost out there at the moment. Trust me, I don't love writing about them fighting anymore than you like reading it.
Author's Response: Beth is lost out there at the moment. Trust me, I don't love writing about them fighting anymore than you like reading it.
JoJo (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2007 02:06 am (Chapter 13)
totally didn't see the fertility drugs coming...you got me on that one! i don't know what to think though...she's overreacting but i still think he should have told her. great update...can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Well that's what I like to hear. Glad I can suprise you :) Beth is overreacting, we'll just have to wait and see how it goes...
Author's Response: Well that's what I like to hear. Glad I can suprise you :) Beth is overreacting, we'll just have to wait and see how it goes...
EllieBeans (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 02:47 pm (Chapter 1)
I am glad that they were just fertility drugs, and I definitely think that Beth is overreacting to the situation. I love this story by the way and Raw Intimacy as well.
alimera (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 02:18 pm (Chapter 13)
oh dear. that is a big discovery. can't wait to read more--update again soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I wanted a slight curve ball there for you guys.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I wanted a slight curve ball there for you guys.
Kissable (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 02:02 pm (Chapter 13)
Okay, that was SO not good. Make it better!
Author's Response: I'll work on it alex lol
Author's Response: I'll work on it alex lol
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 01:44 pm (Chapter 13)
Aww...I don't like when things are bad between the two of them. And the stress is not good for the new baby! make it better, Mags!
Author's Response: It is so not good for a baby. Let's hope that they can get their stuff together!
Author's Response: It is so not good for a baby. Let's hope that they can get their stuff together!
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 12:15 pm (Chapter 13)
Ok WTF? I mean yes, Justin should have told her about his health issues, but they got their baby and all that, so what's the big deal? Maybe her emotions are out of wack because of the baby because I think she's overreacting. Thanks for the update, great job!
Author's Response: He should have, but she is out of it these chapters lol. Updates are coming!
Author's Response: He should have, but she is out of it these chapters lol. Updates are coming!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 04:52 pm (Chapter 12)
Ok what's the mystery with these bags? I'm dying here. lol. And I knew I disliked Lexi for a reason. Uhg. Update soon.
Author's Response: LOL yeah Lexi isn't fun. As for the bag...
Author's Response: LOL yeah Lexi isn't fun. As for the bag...
alimera (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 08:40 am (Chapter 12)
well, i'm glad to see that beth is starting to relax about all this. what bag is justin talking about?? update again soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, finally getting into the swing of things. Updates are coming.
Author's Response: Yeah, finally getting into the swing of things. Updates are coming.
Kissable (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 07:43 am (Chapter 12)
I told you I hated Lexi! Score one for me.
Author's Response: Alex one, Mags one hundred and one. That's right, read it and weep.
Author's Response: Alex one, Mags one hundred and one. That's right, read it and weep.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 07:01 am (Chapter 12)
Author's Response: Yep, it was Lexi. And the bag, well...
Oh snap. So Justin wasn't being an ass, and it was Lexi...hmm...the plot thickens :)
hey...what's in that missing bag?
Author's Response: Yep, it was Lexi. And the bag, well...
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 01:02 am (Chapter 12)
What a bitch! The nerve of her to basically sabatoge Beth's job and then quit. Well I hope Beth gives her a piece of her mind. Great update, thanks!
Author's Response: Yes she did. I have a feeling we haven't heard the end of Lexi. Beth is sure going to try lol
Author's Response: Yes she did. I have a feeling we haven't heard the end of Lexi. Beth is sure going to try lol
what_where (Signed) on Oct 04, 2007 07:27 pm (Chapter 12)
OK i was seriously freaking out reading that whole chapter cause Justin couldn't find that other bag. Now i'm gonna be all nervous until you update again. Loved the chapter as alwayz.
Author's Response: LOL That darm bag huh? Don't worry, more is on the way.
Author's Response: LOL That darm bag huh? Don't worry, more is on the way.
