Comments For A Closer Look
camshazam (Signed) on May 08, 2010 12:16 pm (Prologue)
I've just finished the whole whopper of a story. Kudos to you for completing it and putting it out there for all the world to see. An enjoyable read.
jey (Anonymous) on Nov 21, 2009 02:12 pm (Chapter 57)
logic problem: it was self defense. Even if she said she did it, there is a record of this dude stalking her and such. Why would she get charged for murder? that kinda just ruined it for me. It seems like something forced on the story by you the writer.
cntrygirl09 (Signed) on Jan 25, 2009 02:24 pm (Prologue)
I was hooked on this story as soon as I started reading it! I'd love for there to be a sequel! Hope there is one soon!
MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Dec 12, 2008 10:43 pm (Chapter 10)
i understand kerrigan. i hav a guy im friends w/& i luv him but he has a girlfriend so he doesnt see me as more than a buddy. gr8 fic so far!
Bouncerok (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 01:04 pm (Epilogue)
great story is there going to be more is he really going to ask her you have to let me know
akes88 (Signed) on Feb 06, 2008 01:51 am (Prologue)
Love this story! been a fan for a while and I'm so glad I finally found it.
SJane (Signed) on Jan 03, 2008 02:43 am (Epilogue)
man 70 chapters now thats comitment right there lol. Your writting had me holding on for another and another chapter so it definatley held me there, great job
JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 07:20 am (Epilogue)
Aww damn that was good. U should make a part 2 to this story.
Bridge (Signed) on Jun 15, 2007 09:42 pm (Prologue)
I've read this story before! It was pretty good!
