Comments For Saturday-Sunday
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2011 09:23 pm (Saturday Sunday)
Author's Response: Yeah. It's okay but not my best. I know I can do better than this. I just need to remember to not write after two in the morning. :)
This line made me laugh.. “Dammit Jayce quit acting like my wife!” Yelled Chris who was attempting to extract a foreign object out of the fish tank. The fish of course giving him dirty looks the whole time. LOLZ...this was quite a twist and interesting read, I guess it was okay..
Author's Response: Yeah. It's okay but not my best. I know I can do better than this. I just need to remember to not write after two in the morning. :)
