Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Aug 08, 2011 02:05 pm (
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AWWWWWWWWW JC!!!!! They have plenty of documented times of all them sharing a bus, I can only imagine the chaos...lol. This was a cute and sweet story. I'm glad he got over not being able to triumph due to him being outnumbered...lol. Good job! :]
Author's Response: Thanks, it was a fun journey into his mind. :-)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 02, 2011 08:46 pm (
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AWWW! What a CUTE story, I LOVED it.. :D Lolz this line here
"We’re gonna have to ride your bus the rest of the way. Do us a favor and try to clean up a little? Clear a space for people to sit that doesn’t have like, chinchilla shit ground in?” LOLZ! Thats right JC likes his clean...
Author's Response: Can you IMAGINE Joey and Lance's bus? I might have nightmares.
creativechaos (Signed) on Aug 02, 2011 07:35 pm (
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Definitely a short but sweet story. I love how you captured JC's frustration at having to share a bus with Lance and Joey, it probably wasn't sunshine being stuck on the tour buses like we want to think. I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 02, 2011 07:07 pm (
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I love the JC perspective. I especially love the "it might rain. that was good sleeping weather." Oh how I miss those boys!
Fantastic short!
Author's Response: Me too! It was so nostalgic!
musicmel (Signed) on Aug 02, 2011 08:52 am (
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AWE! It was so fluffy! Makes my heart all warm and fuzzy. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was quick and dirty, and fun to write.
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Aug 02, 2011 08:06 am (
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Oh to hsve been a fly on the wall of those tour buses. I love it! I can see all this happening too. And you, we all make things worse than they really are until someone opens up our eyes. Good job missy!
Author's Response: Wouldn't that have been fun!?
PopDiva (Signed) on Aug 02, 2011 12:51 am (
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You were right, that was short! Short and sweet. I could feel JC's pain, but loved it when Justin reminded him that they were stuck with him too.
Cracked up when Justin yelled at Lance to put that thing in a cage.
A great read. Looking forward to your next one!
Author's Response: LOL I actually laughed when I heard it in my brain. I can just imagine the state of that other bus... neither of them seem very clean.................
Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 01, 2011 11:24 pm (
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Aww this is so cute! My poor baby, having to lose his peace like that. But, I wouldn't mind being stuck with them. This was so cute. Yay, Awesome August is on a roll! Good stuff :)
Ki
Author's Response: Thank you!!!