Comments For Glitter in the Air
TeamChasez (Signed) on Jan 29, 2019 08:45 pm (Rayya)
This is fantastic! I love his perfomance with Matt from London. I wish he'd do it more often.
brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Aug 04, 2011 01:57 am (Rayya)
great story. perfect description. I'm happy Rayya convinced him to take the stage. I think this was the 2nd time I read your writing, I hope its not the last. Great entry.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 03, 2011 08:00 pm (Rayya)
Beautiful, simply beautiful. :) I love that Rayya was there to give JC a little push, he helped her, she helped him. Thats what I would do with JC, I like this line "You're this great songwriter, producer, friend, collegue, man, etcetera, etcetera. But as a fan, I knew you. And you were this incredible performer, great dancer, and a beautiful singer. Every time you left your heart and soul on that stage. Go get that back, don't let fear stop you,” Couldnt have said it better myself, completely agree with you.. :D *note to author* JC really blew the stage with those two songs for that concert! SO EPIC *CHEERS* Ok Im back in my zone now..tee hee..Above all, this was really good, I liked it...
Author's Response: Yes, he is amazing! He belongs on that stage! Rayya is my hero right now :) Thanks for the love hun!
Author's Response: Yes, he is amazing! He belongs on that stage! Rayya is my hero right now :) Thanks for the love hun!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 03, 2011 04:50 pm (Rayya)
I absolutely loved this sotry. I'm not usually a JC girl, although I've been itching to branch out lately, and this story reminded me why. There's depth there, and life, and passion, and you tapped in to all of those so wonderfully. Beautifully done, love. It was a pleasure!
Author's Response: JC is such an intense and multi-fold character. He gives me a freedom that I can't tap into with any of the other guys. You should really give him a try. Thank you so much for the kindness and love!
Author's Response: JC is such an intense and multi-fold character. He gives me a freedom that I can't tap into with any of the other guys. You should really give him a try. Thank you so much for the kindness and love!
Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Aug 03, 2011 03:27 pm (Rayya)
You're such a spot on, wonderfully descriptive writer. I have a secret. Every time I got on here, I would think, where's Jersey_Tenn ( I'm sorry idk your name ), she's been gone for a while. So...I guess that could be construed as me missing you and your writing. This story had me just on the edge, even though I was aware of what was going to happen. Great entry, and welcome back! :]
Author's Response: Aww *blush*! Yes, I have been MIA, and I apologize for that. I'm trying to do better! Thank you for being so kind!
Author's Response: Aww *blush*! Yes, I have been MIA, and I apologize for that. I'm trying to do better! Thank you for being so kind!
sonadora (Signed) on Aug 03, 2011 01:24 pm (Rayya)
Love, love, love it! I really enjoyed it. Such a great read. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the love! I greatly appreciate it!
Author's Response: Thank you for the love! I greatly appreciate it!
MissM (Signed) on Aug 03, 2011 12:21 pm (Rayya)
Author's Response: Your words are too kind. *bows* Thank you! And, thank you for catching those errors. That's what I get for writing it so last minute. His "return" makes me giddy...and warm/fuzzy! Once again, thank you!
My dear, if this is how you write when you're half assing it, your full effort is a force to be reckoned with. LOVE IT and of course I love me some Pink!
A couple of quibbles- rax vocals = raw vocals?
And tapping a spoon till it breaks... did you mean tapping an egg with a spoon till it breaks?
Other than that, Bravo. I'm so happy his "return" to the stage inspired someone!
Author's Response: Your words are too kind. *bows* Thank you! And, thank you for catching those errors. That's what I get for writing it so last minute. His "return" makes me giddy...and warm/fuzzy! Once again, thank you!
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 03, 2011 12:21 pm (Rayya)
I really really liked this.. A great read.. As usual, i had everything playing out in my head like i was watching TV and i can honestly say i enjoyed 'watching' all this happen. I loved the way you got Rayya to talk JC into doing what she knew he missed doing: performing on stage. The part where she asked him about if he was still waiting for the 'let's get together' call and he said 'That call will never happen' was one of my favorite lines in this thing. I could so hear JC saying that bitterly in my head and made me a little sad.. Lol.. A brilliant line (in my opinion) was this one here: It was an out-of-body experience. The music took over time. The lyrics took over feeling. And the adrenaline took over reason. I love it! I enjoyed this entry.. Good job!!! :))
Author's Response: writing jc is fascinating to me. he is such a deep character that things come out on paper that i coudnt write with anyone else. he is a loyal man, and i think the first train passed him because he waited. thank you for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated
Author's Response: writing jc is fascinating to me. he is such a deep character that things come out on paper that i coudnt write with anyone else. he is a loyal man, and i think the first train passed him because he waited. thank you for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated
