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ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jan 03, 2012 01:36 am (What’s Your Dream? )

Oh jeez....you just HAD to end it with that. Is there more to the story? I really love these two. :)

Now you have me wanting to watch the movie. That I somehow DON'T own even though it's my favorite one.

Have I mentioned that I really like the JC in this story? He's not so...serious and grumpy and closed off. I like it when he's happy! Nicely done, girl!

<3LT

Author's Response: I love when I get reviews on older stories! :D My eyes bugged out when I got the email. THANK YOU!! These two were just too adorable to not bring back. I admit I am a sucker for hopeful new beginnings. I suck at endings. A perfect story to me gives a hint of a happy future. Thanks for reading!

ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jan 03, 2012 12:55 am ( Blast from the Past)

How am I just now seeing that you wrote a sequel??? I hide under a rock, I swear.

I'm SO glad you decided to write more of these two. I was so sad when the first one was over. Especially 'cause you kept quoting my favorite movie.

And now here we are with Part 2! There's a reason I moved to LA and not New York and you hit the nail on the head with how she feels about NYC. The scenery there (all concrete and sparkly towers) doesn't hold a candle to out here. I love my big city with tall buildings and bustling traffic/people but...LA is like the perfect combo of wide open space and cramped city life. Ahem...sorry for the rant. I was basically saying that...I can relate.

Anyway...moving on :)

grishy (Signed) on Aug 16, 2011 11:21 am ( Blast from the Past)

And current I forgot to tell! coz that lines at the end about the breakings were just the right touch.

I wasn't MIA just not in the mood to read something romantic and sexy (you know what I mean), till today hehehe

grishy (Signed) on Aug 16, 2011 11:06 am (What’s Your Dream? )

Definitly enjoy this little piece. Sexy, real, funny and thoughtful.

Waiting for more form you miss (M) hehehe

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to get back into the groove. It's hard when I have All I Wanna Do to live up to. That was my baby for a long time.

grishy (Signed) on Aug 16, 2011 10:15 am (Prestige)

Girl you're great describing places, I felt like I was discovering NYC and missing LA along with Gabby.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I was wondering where you were!

Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Aug 08, 2011 09:49 pm (What’s Your Dream? )

This was very cute and refreshing. I wasn't familiar with the first entry you did, but even remotely reading this, it would make sense. At times I felt like Gabby was so oblivious to JC's little remarks, but I'm glad that she figured out what was best for her and made the moves to make it so. Nice little ongoing theme in this entry. Great job. :]

Author's Response: Thank you SO MUCH for reading it!

Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 08, 2011 01:50 pm ( Blast from the Past)

Loved it! Would love to read part three, too!

(question, is the title suppose to be part two, as in 'deux'?)

Author's Response: I dunno if I have a part three in me... all of their issues have been resolved. And no, it's supposed to be DUH, as in the choice she needs to make is a complete no-brainer and she doesn't see it.

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 07:15 pm (What’s Your Dream? )

HA! I just had tacos for dinner..AWWW! Hooray she did the transfer to LA, and yes JC, her blue Toyota is back..lolz You know that "Welcome to Hollywood" saying was something that Justin once said in an interview, he was stuck in traffic but the way he said it was funny "Hollywood, land of dreams, whats your dream?" Well I already know what my dream is, :P after all, anything can happen..Above all, this was a pretty good story, loved it! :D Thanks for all the updates...

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! So happy you love the story!

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 02:34 pm (Up Against the Wall )

*laughs wildly* WOO! "You know that we dont care at all, let me see you up against the wall" Ok, the thing that Gabby did to him was HOTT! I would SO try to do that to him..*thinks naughty thoughts* Man, I love this, this is good.. :D

Author's Response: LOL This is the only chapter title I knew for sure I had to include.

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 02:25 pm (Prestige)

Im glad that Gabby feels a bit better, and love the outing they are bothe having. I like this line here "You sound like you don’t think that’s possible. People find love everywhere. Anywhere. You never know.” ;) Yeah..if only I can find JC in a park somewhere..lolz and maybe she "should" move back to LA, you know just to get her mind off things.. :)

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 02:07 pm (Scared to Step Backwards & Can’t Move Ahead)

*lightbulb* I think Gabby should go back to LA, I mean NYC is a pretty good place but its so obvious that she wants to go back to LA..hmm..I would like to read the next chapter..yes sirree.. :P

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 01:55 pm (Lightning Strikes Twice )

GUH! I LOVE THIS, looks like sparks flew the second time around..heck yes. *SIGH* Man, this guy is gonna drive me wild..oh wait he already did..HA! I LOVE the way your describing him.. ;P *reads next chapter*

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 01:37 pm (Anticipation)

LOLZ! I love the chemistry b/tween these two. And yeah JC, she still drives that Toyota(I do too, and I love it) lolz and they kissed for the first time in over a year..wow.. *SIGH* This is good, *reads next chapter*

theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 01:15 pm ( Blast from the Past)

I want JC to come visit me.. :( But anywho, OMG! I remember this! Im so happy you made a sequel, woo hoo! So JC, get your butt to NYC pronto and hang out with Gabby.. ;) I love how he reacted when she told him that she lived in Queens..lolz *reads next chapter*

Summalove (Signed) on Aug 07, 2011 12:39 pm ( Blast from the Past)

Yay! i loved it....but I love everything that you write! I love happy ending stories. I especially love the JC stories! It was perfect! Keep the stories coming!

Author's Response:
How sweet! Thank you!! I don't always love happy ending stories, but these two deserve one!

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