Half the chapters are missing from each chunk you've posted. The story isn't complete, but if you broke it into chucks of 5 chapters each I bet that would work. Good story from what I've seen..

It still cuts off. It's now the next sentence after where it was before. Maybe the story needs to be broken into smaller sections. I don't know. Sorry!

Ok so I got the chapter errors all fixed or so I'm assuming from what I can see.  But please let me know if you come accross anymore issues.  Thnx!

Well I changed the zoom level and the page looked the same. It's still cutting off in the middle of chapter 4.

Author's Response:

Ok so I found what you're talking about.  I have no clue how that happened, but what I'll have to do is go back in and reupload all of the chapters for that story tonight after work.  Thanks so much for letting me know about this problem.

This is the last thing I see at the end of the first page: "Abby sighed inwardly to herself. She could tell by his tone she wasn’t going to like what he was about to say. She really didn’t need this right now. “Wha " It cuts off there and when I click next it goes right into chapter 11 and it cuts off at the end of the page there too. Maybe it's my computer. Maybe I need to change the zoom level for my screen.

It's a great story but for some reason the chapters get chopped off at the end of each page.

Author's Response:

Oh I'm sorry about that, I looked at the pages and I didn't see where it's cutting off, could you give me an example, like the chapter that's getting chopped off?