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His Baby Girl
theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 03, 2011 07:20 pm (
Chapter 6)
This is soo cute! :D I like how Dana describes JC's previous girlfriends "Dana blushed "well, yeah I guess. I mean come on, seeing all the bimbo's you have been with?" she raised an eye brow. LMAO! :P
And I like how JC was talking about Dana's hair..lolz Nice job.. :) Thanks for the update..
Author's Response: I know hehe the hair bit is funny. Thanks for the review.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Oct 03, 2011 03:15 pm (
Chapter 6)
Aww! I'm so glad that JC and Dana are growing closer. You can tell that JC really loves Dana, and Dana loves JC too! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Of course he loves her, she's his daughter.
Megan (Anonymous) on Oct 03, 2011 12:36 am (
Chapter 6)
Oh goodness...I don't know how I have been missing out on this story for so long! I love it! Such a great story so far, love the relationship that JC and Dana are developing. Good grief...who wouldn't want JC as their secret father lol. :)
Author's Response: Well thank you, don't worry I've read stories that have been up for ages and realize that they are awesome. I'm glad you like this one.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 07, 2011 10:39 pm (
Chapter 5)
Wow, another update already? You're spoiling me! You're right, this chapter was a real tear jerker. It's horrible that Val's parents kicked her out. I feel so bad for JC and Dana. I can't believe that Val just stopped loving JC like that, and that she would abandon her own daughter. The line where JC said; "as soon you were born she would move out without you." Has to hurt. Then there was this part; "I swore I would never hurt you, I would do anything to keep you safe, and I would love you more than life itself." This was the part that brought tears to my eyes. I do think that it was best that JC gave Dana to Ted and Jo, so that she could have both a mother and a father, and be raised in a stable environment.
Author's Response: I completely agree. It makes no sense as to why she stopped loving him. I'm glad you are loving this. I think that this story is going to be a long one. Which I'm sure you will love.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 07, 2011 07:51 pm (
Chapter 5)
*tear :( Oh that was such a sad chapter, man Val's parents kicked her out? Jeez..that's terrible..this line here "I swore I would never hurt you, I would do anything to keep you safe, and I would love you more than life itself." That is soo touching..thanks for the update..
Author's Response: Aww thank you. I was about to cry writing that. Im glad you loved it.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 06, 2011 10:49 pm (
Chapter 4)
Dana nodded her head as the two traveled in relative quiet until Dana spoke "do you miss her? My mother I mean?"
JC nodded his head "everytime Jo and Ted send a picture of you, I wonder what she would think or how she would react. When she left us, I was hurt and angry. Heck I even write a song about how bitter I was." he chuckled at the memory. "do you know the song Selfish from the Celebrity record?"
Dana nodded "wait that was about her?"
Nodding his head JC grinned "not only that it was about you too."
Dana slapped her hand to her forehead "no wonder why I love that song."
This part made me get a bit teary-eyed! You can tell that JC really loves Dana, and did what he thought was best for his daughter. He seems very protective of her. I loved this update, and can't wait for more! I'm so hooked on this story!
P.S.
"Selfish" is one of my most favorite songs ever! It's so hard to choose a favorite *Nsync song, but Selfish is most definitely top three. I just love the lyrics, and JC's voice is filled with so much passion and emotion! I get chills when I listen to it!
Author's Response: I love that song as well, JC is a great father, to do that for his baby girl. (pun intended hehe)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 06, 2011 07:51 pm (
Chapter 4)
JC rubbed his eyes "get in." He said as he started the car.
I don't know why but I like the sound of that, I would like to get inside JC's car.. LOL and I love the fact that he was getting looney that Dana was dating someone, hahah..he was flipping to Daddy mode..lolz this was a cute chapter, thanks for the update.. :)
Author's Response: Welcome. I am in the process of getting the next chapter. Hope all is well.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 27, 2011 01:01 pm (
Chapter 3)
These couple of lines here "Feeling anger boiling in him JC slammed his hands on the table "Dana Leigh Walker, don't you dare say that about them. They gave you everything that I couldn't, They gave you a stable home, I will not let you tear them down." His eyes narrowed as his voice echoed throughout the house. Pointing to the chair in front of him "sit down." he said in an even tone" Wowww..I can totally hear him saying that, though angry JC is hott.. :P Great update, so far, so good..
Author's Response: That was my favorite part to work on. I can see how Dana's reaction to her parents could make JC snap. I'm glad you are loving this. I'll update as soon as I can.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 27, 2011 12:50 pm (
Chapter 2)
Lolz! Dana is nervous of meeting her dad for the first time in 17 years, wow..heck I'll be nervous too if I found out that my dad was that handsome dude by the name of JC.. ;P Nice job on this one.. *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 27, 2011 12:46 pm (
Chapter 1)
WOOT! So Dana is the daughter of JC?? Interesting..this would be a nice surprise for Dana..tee hee..
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2011 10:53 pm (
Prologue)
I love their songs, something about JC just calms me. Its as if he was singing directly to me." I totally agree, I feel the same way.. :) Hmm..I think this is okay, not a bad start..like the nickname "Mr. Springy" lolz
Author's Response: I just remembered the MSG concert when Justin had the fro and I remember thinking, man the guy has springs for hair it bounces a lot.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 22, 2011 08:48 pm (
Chapter 3)
Wow! I'm so glad they finally met each other. This was a really emotional chapter. I can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: Aww thank you. I'll update as soon as I can.
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 22, 2011 07:55 pm (
Chapter 3)
Lookin forward to reading more of this story! Hope you post more soon!
Author's Response: Glad you are liking it. I will update soon.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 18, 2011 09:07 pm (
Chapter 1)
Yay! I can't wait until Dana and JC meet. I can't wait to see her reaction when she sees that her dad is the JC Chasez!
Author's Response: Oh I know, I am right there with you. I just find it funny that Dana is a fan of the boybands. Nsync especially. Thanks for the review.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 17, 2011 12:19 am (
Prologue)
All I can say is that I can't wait until this meeting happens! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Me too I want to know if Maddi is gonna faint or punch jc. Thanks for the review.
