Comments For One of the Boys
mollyanna5 (Signed) on Nov 02, 2012 06:53 pm (Chapter 25)
Very cute story, I enjoyed reading it :)



PopDiva (Signed) on May 12, 2012 01:47 am (Chapter 25)
I finally had the chance to come back and finish reading this story and I loved it!  It was great and I love how everything came together in the end :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 23, 2011 08:38 pm (Chapter 25)

Aww YAY! Ok let me backtrack a little bit. I laughed at these lines here "“Where’s my favorite girl?” JC called as he came down the hall. “Oh, there you are!” He kissed Chris's cheek. LMAO! :D

And I'm glad that the show that Chris did went well, WOOT!

Lastly, these couple of lines here "Nope. He’s not looking for one of the boys.” Lara kissed Chris again. “He’s got me.” That was real sweet and thoughtful AWWS! *happy dance*

Wonderful job on this, I enjoyed it. :) Hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving..




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 28, 2011 04:44 pm (Chapter 24)

hahahahah..this is just so great! Chris got the part of Andrew, congrats! *hugs* But to backtrack, when Chris was mad at her, I like these couple of lines here "Excuse me?” Chris sat up and glared at her. “I haven’t worked a real job? OH, that’s right…singing and dancing until my knees are pieces of cracked hardened calcium, not having a real life because I’m stuck on a tour bus for months. That’s right. THAT’S not work.” Love Chris and his sarcastic comments. lolz

And I really like the part where Justin was doing the choreography, oh what fun! At least Lara and Chris aren't mad at eachother now, so that's good. This was a fun chapter to read I liked it. :) Thanks for the update..




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 21, 2011 09:06 pm (Chapter 23)

LMAO! Chris is sooo funny! Doing the Forest Gump lines..HA! Im sure the audition went well, lolz the Tshirt he was wearing..

I liked how they were exchanging gifts with eachother, and lolz these lines here "Um, you don’t live here,” Chris said when Lance opened Lara’s door. “I’m fairly certain of that. Unless, you know, pigs are now flying, hell has frozen over, Justin’s gained fifty pounds overnight, and you’re now straight.” LOL!

This is a nice chapter..thanks for updating.. :)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 08, 2011 02:48 pm (Chapter 22)

Well I like this chapter, I dont think its lame..lolz Aww Kitty! Tee hee..the name its Poofu..HA! Woot..Chris came to see Lara, and she was being feeling sad and lonely, until he arrived. This was a nice chapter.. thanks for the update.. :P




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2011 07:31 pm (Chapter 21)

This chapter had me laughing, these lines here “Those are cute. Are they for your nieces?” Chris said as he looked over Lara’s shoulder. “No.” She held up the pink sparkly barrettes and gave them a good look. “They’re for JC.” “JC? LMAO! :D

I like how Chris and Lara are shopping together for Christmas, soo cute. And lolz Lance talking to Lara “Who says there was hot monkey sex?” Lara said. “It could have been slow, steamy sex.

”It’s Chris. It was hot fast monkey sex,” Lance said, trying to keep a straight face. HAHA!

Such a good chapter, love it. Thanks for the update.. ;)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 30, 2011 08:20 pm (Chapter 20)

THIS line here "JC was sexy and skinny and flexible and had incredible rhythm" Oh but of course... ;) I love that fact.

Now, lets get back to Chris, aww he was nervous at first to be with her, don't feel bad Chris, Lara doesn't regret anything, she loves you, and you love her. :) I like this, nice job..thanks for updating..




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 29, 2011 07:49 pm (Chapter 19)

THEY KISSED! Chris and Lara kissed, and they both proclaimed their love for eachother..*lets out a happy sigh* :) Ok, um..I like this line here "She felt like Andie walking into the Prom in “Pretty in Pink.” She smiled at the thought." Like I said before, love that movie.. :D

Anywho, love that Justin and Chris arent mad at eachother, so yay! And I also find these lines funny.. “You’re not bored,” Lance repeated. “You’re nervous because Lara’s going to be here and you don’ t know what to do.” “That’s so wrong, Bass. You have no clue,” Chris retorted. “Mind-reading freak,” he muttered into his beer bottle. Lance and JC laughed. LMAO! :D

Above all, I liked the end of this chapter, Chris and Lara are gonna have a little fun tonight, tee hee.. *wink wink, nudge nudge* And I love the fact that JC usually carries a condom in his wallet.. woo hoo! Thats good to know.. :P Awesome job, and thanks for updating..




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 23, 2011 08:53 pm (Chapter 18)

Go for it Chris! Go audition.. I like this line here "It was Lance’s turn to laugh. “Chris, everything you do is one big performance. We rarely see the real you. This is something I think that you’d be perfect for…and it’s perfect for you.  I agree.. :)

And I liked that JC and Lance brought Lara for lunch, that was nice.. thanks for updating, nice job.




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 15, 2011 07:21 pm (Chapter 17)
Oh man! This is NOT how Lara and Chris were supposed to spend Thanksgiving.. :( Im sad. The gifts that he sent her, were supposed to at least soften her a bit, I know what Chris said was wrong, but you know..This is good though, :) Thanks for updating..



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 14, 2011 07:37 pm (Chapter 16)
AHHH! Did you hear that Chris?? Lara LOVES you, and she didn't go any further with JC that night, you only assumed that they were doing that..but no they didnt.. :) Im happy. Now go tell Lara how you feel about her and apologize.. This was a pretty good chapter, I liked it. Thanks for updating.. :D



megzor (Signed) on Sep 13, 2011 08:57 pm (Chapter 15)
i love this story... and i have to admit.. i love her and jc.. and i love chris being jealous.. i think thats my favorite part of the story... i'm hoping you keep the her and jc thing going more.

Author's Response: Well, unfortunately, it won't end up that way...but I have some other JC het I can post here :)



theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 06:51 pm (Chapter 15)

Oh my gosh! WOO! Ok wait um..Lara got some pretty awesome bday gifts, I laughed at this line here“You get them for things like birthdays and Christmas. You open them, ooh and ahh, and say thank.” you   and Lance kissed her?? *GASP* That was like her dream to kiss him, wow. And I also like this line here  Gotta hand it to you, JC, sex is definitely the best birthday gift ever.” Well if its with JC, of course, hey JC, my bday is in two months, maybe we can work something out. LOL! But ooh the argument that Lara and Chris had, :( Chris just tell her how you feel..don't be like that.

Great job on this! :D Thanks for updating!




Tink (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 08:27 am (Chapter 15)
Another great chapter, glad she finally knows how Chris feels. Hope they work it all out soon, can't wait to read more





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