PopDiva (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 12:47 am (
Chapter 14)
Too much fun! I love Lara's perverted mind and when JC says he broke her brain? LMAO! So, who is coming to the party?
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 09, 2011 07:34 pm (
Chapter 14)
OMG! This chapter had me laughing! Ok first off, when Lara and Chris were at the mall, and she embarassed Chris by singing a BSB song..and when they got home, Lance?? JC?? BASSEZ! LMAO!! And this line here,“Jesus, JC, you are the gayest straight man ever,” Chris said. LOL! Yeah JC likes to fix pretty little things.. Hahah! This was a great chapter, I loved it.. Happy bday Lara! lolz Thanks for updating..
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 07, 2011 07:21 pm (
Chapter 13)
Hahahaha! I love this! :D This line here "Joey, what are you doing here?” Chris asked. “I swear to God, you can smell free food a mile away.” Thats so true! LOL! I like how the guys are all gonna throw her a party, I'll help Lance with the decorations.. *raises hand* Good job on this chapter, thanks for the update..
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 02, 2011 09:11 pm (
Chapter 12)
HAHA! These lines had me laughing! “Duh, you’re a cat,” Lara said, and JC frowned. “Ha, I so knew it. JC, seriously. You’re a freaking cat. You move like a cat, groom yourself like a cat…”“Prowl like a cat,” Chris muttered, and Lara laughed out loud. LMAO!
And she had an interesting costume choice, and I also liked the part wher she was going berserk when she saw Lance making out with a brunette.. yeah Lance is hott..LOL! This was fun to read, I liked it. Thanks for updating.. :D
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 02, 2011 08:31 pm (
Chapter 11)
GUH! JC is such a WOW.. Tee hee..He was teasing again wasn't he?? This line here "If you ever change your mind.” :P
Ok..I think that is soo sweet that the guys helped her move in, except for Justin, cause you know..its Justin..LOL! I also like this line here “I’LL kiss him,” Chris said.“Don’t you dare,” JC growled. He wrapped his arms around Lara and leaned against her. “Mmm…comfy.” HA! And I also like when Joey says that he's the cheap labor.. LOL! This is good, *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 31, 2011 05:25 pm (
Chapter 10)
This line here "But JC’s…kinda like a firework. It’s all ooh and ahh and pretty…and then it fizzles and falls back to Earth.” Yep, yep yep..I agree on that, he's such a pretty sight to see.. :D LOL! And what was up with Justin, gosh he's so rude to Chris..lolz And ooh are Chris and Lara developing feelings for eachother??? Hmm... *wink wink, nudge nudge* ;) Haha..*reads next chapter*
Tink (Signed) on Aug 31, 2011 05:58 am (
Chapter 11)
i'm glad Lara and JC didn't get together, it has to be Chris!! Hope him and Justin sort things out too. Great chapter, looking forward to more
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 28, 2011 07:28 pm (
Chapter 9)
GASP Oh no..poor Chris, I KNOW that little smarty pants bitter tone comment..Ooooh I wonder what's gonna happen next, though I liked this line here "Mi sofa is tu sofa,” Lance said. “You know that" Hahaha..Lance, your so cute when your drunk.. :P
But WOW, I LOVE it when JC starts teasing Lara, oh yes..that was just wow..me likey..lolz Good job, and thanks for the update.. :D
Tink (Signed) on Aug 28, 2011 05:18 pm (
Chapter 9)
Ah poor Chris! Hope to read more soon
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 27, 2011 07:14 pm (
Chapter 8)
UGH!! CHRIS! Just TELL her how you feel...though would it feel right?? Cause you know, its Chris.. *thinks* Man..this is tough, he has that little "err* factor in him whenever Lara is with JC..awww.. :( These couple of lines here “Keeping my date warm for me, Chris?” JC said, walking up to them with a few more drinks. Lara took hers and greedily gulped at it.“Yes, JC, that’s what I’m doing.” Chris stepped away from her and melted into the crowd. I can totally see that LOOK on Chris's face when he did that.. *SIGH*
Oh wait..earlier in this chapter, Top Gun, volleyball scene, Slider..YES! :D *swoon* Ok Im done, great job on this..me like.. :)
Author's Response: Yes. Top Gun. Val Kilmer. Sweaty chest. Yes yes yes.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2011 09:07 pm (
Chapter 7)
“Fine. Because if you do break her heart, I will break your scrawny spine in two.” Chris sent two balls into the pockets with a snap. MY gosh Chris, must you be so rude?? LOL! *batseyelashes* and looks likes he's a bit jealous...dun dun dun.. Tee hee.. This is really good, I like Chris fanfics, lolz and thanks for the updates, :D and for the first time writing this, I gotta say its going great, nice job.. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback...I really appreciate it all! It's not my FIRST time writing it...I was hugely involved in the fandom back around 2000 to maybe 2005 or so. I haven't written since then...have about 100+ stories to my credit, though, slash AND het. I figured het was easiest to write, to edge back into things. :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2011 08:42 pm (
Chapter 6)
Ok this line here “See? It’s good Jayce isn’t here. He’d probably get you to order something gross, like goat eyeballs or something.” LMAO! Goat eyeballs, that is just too funny..and ooh JC asked Lara on a little party date..hmm.. ;) Must know what happens next so *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2011 08:18 pm (
Chapter 5)
Yes JC, I'll go with you.. ;) So happy that Lara found the perfect dress, and shopping with Lance could be fun..tee hee..would like to see how this goes, so off to read the next chapter.. :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2011 07:59 pm (
Chapter 4)
"You will be the next Marlon Brando, your gonna be poop stars" LMAO..love that "On the Line" skit..yeah Chris should give a shot at acting, though I really like some of his music that he came out with..so he's pretty good at both.. :) Oh and Im sure we would love to attend one of Lance's parties..OMG! I wanna go and party all night long..WOOT! Ok..I like the part where Chris and JC were arguing on what they should eat, and I also like when Lara and JC were shopping at the supermarket..oh to shop with JC ;) This is getting good, me likey this..lolz *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2011 07:34 pm (
Chapter 3)
I literally laughed out loud at this line here "JC doesn’t HAVE an ass,” Chris pointed out. “Trust me.” Lara laughed out loud. “Not that I know…I mean, years of dressing rooms…shut up.” LMAO! Ok love the friendship and bickering b/tween Lara and Chris, and I wouldve liked to see Lara's reaction when she saw Lance come up..haha..this is good, *reads next chapter*
