Comments For Newlywed Series Introduces: Breathe Heavy
Bobbilynn (Signed) on May 09, 2007 12:03 am (Track 6: Chop Me Up)
I wanna know what the text read! Awesome chapter - update soon, please!
Author's Response: So do I! Ha ha ha, I'm just kidding. You'll find out soon enough. No need to fret. ( Lol ) rnrnThanx for the review sugar! :)
Author's Response: So do I! Ha ha ha, I'm just kidding. You'll find out soon enough. No need to fret. ( Lol ) rnrnThanx for the review sugar! :)
rev0586 (Signed) on May 08, 2007 06:52 pm (Track 6: Chop Me Up)
oh that F*cker lol good job girl but he made me mad lol DRAMA ;) i hope she gets revenge
Author's Response: Ha ha ha ha. Drama indeed!! But no worries, she definately has something up her sleeve, I assure you.rnrnThanx for the review sugar!! :)
Author's Response: Ha ha ha ha. Drama indeed!! But no worries, she definately has something up her sleeve, I assure you.rnrnThanx for the review sugar!! :)
flor (Signed) on May 04, 2007 08:58 am (Track 5: Pre Awards Night/ Justin Reveals ( Interlude ))
Author's Response: His reasons may have been strange but all together sweet I guess. I'm happy to know that you enjoyed the chapter!! An update is on the way real soon!!rnrnThanx for the review sugar! :)
This chapter was amazing...finally we can understand why justin cheated on her...i loved the way he talked about her with trace, his reason were sweet in a VERY weird way..also loved the way you portrait trace...
update soon
Author's Response: His reasons may have been strange but all together sweet I guess. I'm happy to know that you enjoyed the chapter!! An update is on the way real soon!!rnrnThanx for the review sugar! :)
rev0586 (Signed) on May 03, 2007 11:20 pm (Track 5: Pre Awards Night/ Justin Reveals ( Interlude ))
Thanks for updating im sooo addicted to this story lol, wow now i finnaly noe why he cheated in the first place but "Why Cameron?" lol keep up the good work
Author's Response: That's what I'm here for. To satisfy your fan fic addicts! Lol. Glad you liked it. Took me awhile to actually finish it but seems like everything turned out pretty good from what you people are letting me know. :)rnrnThanx for the review sugar!! :)
Author's Response: That's what I'm here for. To satisfy your fan fic addicts! Lol. Glad you liked it. Took me awhile to actually finish it but seems like everything turned out pretty good from what you people are letting me know. :)rnrnThanx for the review sugar!! :)
Bobbilynn (Signed) on May 03, 2007 11:00 pm (Track 5: Pre Awards Night/ Justin Reveals ( Interlude ))
Loved it! Though Justin seems like he was doing it for her, he did a stupid, stupid thing, haha. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: It may have been stupid, but it was out of love. Luckily he's soo cute so he doesn't come off as scum with an excuse like that. Ha ha. Glad you loved it!!! And an update should be coming soon! I'm workin on it as we speak.! :)rnrnThanx for the review sugar! :) You people are awesome!!
Author's Response: It may have been stupid, but it was out of love. Luckily he's soo cute so he doesn't come off as scum with an excuse like that. Ha ha. Glad you loved it!!! And an update should be coming soon! I'm workin on it as we speak.! :)rnrnThanx for the review sugar! :) You people are awesome!!
milf15 (Signed) on May 01, 2007 04:36 pm (Track 1: I Run Away)
Author's Response: Wow, that's a lot of love! ( lol ). But, no I haven't posted any others because well, there aren't any others...yet. This is actually the first one of the series but on my page I do have a story titled'Mtv Cribs: Newlyweds Edition, I would say it's kinda part of the series but then again not really. Basically it just deals with the same characters. If you haven't read it you should check it out! But um.... as for Breathe Heavy, I'm really taking under consideration, creating a story that will follow through from the beginning. That idea is still pending. So on that note, I'm happy that you are really enjoying the story!rnrnAnd thanx for the review sugar! :)rnrnAll of the feedback has been soooooo great!
I love love love this story!!!! Is there a site where any of the other stories are posted of this series?
Author's Response: Wow, that's a lot of love! ( lol ). But, no I haven't posted any others because well, there aren't any others...yet. This is actually the first one of the series but on my page I do have a story titled'Mtv Cribs: Newlyweds Edition, I would say it's kinda part of the series but then again not really. Basically it just deals with the same characters. If you haven't read it you should check it out! But um.... as for Breathe Heavy, I'm really taking under consideration, creating a story that will follow through from the beginning. That idea is still pending. So on that note, I'm happy that you are really enjoying the story!rnrnAnd thanx for the review sugar! :)rnrnAll of the feedback has been soooooo great!
flor (Signed) on Apr 30, 2007 06:20 pm (Track 4: Hot Like Fire)
i absolutely love it...i started reading it today and i'm already hooked...can you upload the others parts of the story? i'd like to read it from the beggining
Author's Response: Hooked? That's a very good thing ( lol ) I'm glad that you are enjoying it!! But I'm sorry to have to inform you of this but,there are no other parts of the story. When I first began writing it I hadn't thought of creating a beggining story that led up to this one. I kind of just started writing it out of the blue and for some reason just kept on. So yeah, that's where that goes. But not all hope is lost! After reading your review I might take under consideration doing a short story, maybe 10 chapters that lead up to this one. I just have got to find the time first. So once again, I'm glad that the story has peaked your interest!rnrnAnd thanx for the review sugar! :)rnrnP.S. And if I do decide to move on with a beginning story ( which will be likely ) I will be sure to give you credit for me doing so!
Author's Response: Hooked? That's a very good thing ( lol ) I'm glad that you are enjoying it!! But I'm sorry to have to inform you of this but,there are no other parts of the story. When I first began writing it I hadn't thought of creating a beggining story that led up to this one. I kind of just started writing it out of the blue and for some reason just kept on. So yeah, that's where that goes. But not all hope is lost! After reading your review I might take under consideration doing a short story, maybe 10 chapters that lead up to this one. I just have got to find the time first. So once again, I'm glad that the story has peaked your interest!rnrnAnd thanx for the review sugar! :)rnrnP.S. And if I do decide to move on with a beginning story ( which will be likely ) I will be sure to give you credit for me doing so!
Bobbilynn (Signed) on Apr 30, 2007 01:33 am (Track 4: Hot Like Fire)
Author's Response: More on the way!! I'm glad that your likin it so much!!rnrnThanx for the review sugar. :)
Really love this story! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: More on the way!! I'm glad that your likin it so much!!rnrnThanx for the review sugar. :)
Vessy (Signed) on Apr 23, 2007 03:30 am (Track 3: Club ' Rave ' ( Interlude ))
cool story, can't wait for more chapters!
Author's Response: More chapters coming soon. I'm glad that you are enjoying it!rnrnThanx for the review sugar. :)
Author's Response: More chapters coming soon. I'm glad that you are enjoying it!rnrnThanx for the review sugar. :)
rev0586 (Signed) on Apr 22, 2007 11:56 pm (Track 1: I Run Away)
wow! that was to funny... great ch.
Author's Response: Happy to know that you enjoyed it!rnrnThanx for the review sugar. :)
Author's Response: Happy to know that you enjoyed it!rnrnThanx for the review sugar. :)
anormalheart (Signed) on Apr 22, 2007 05:01 pm (Track 1: I Run Away)
Whoa, I just got done reading the first chapter.. and that was hella deep. madd props to you.
Author's Response: Well, I try. lol.rnrnThanx for the review sugar.:)
Author's Response: Well, I try. lol.rnrnThanx for the review sugar.:)
jrtsnubianboricuaqueen (Signed) on Apr 22, 2007 12:03 am (Track 1: I Run Away)
As soon as I read this, I downloaded the song and played it over and over again. Love this story!!!! =]
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying it! I'm lovin the feedback.rnrnThanx for the review sugar.:)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying it! I'm lovin the feedback.rnrnThanx for the review sugar.:)
Mimik (Signed) on Apr 13, 2007 06:06 pm (Track 2: Dirty Woman)
hot!
Author's Response: Thanx for the review, sugar! :)
Author's Response: Thanx for the review, sugar! :)