grishy (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2011 11:49 am (
Chapter 5)
It was sad, but really sweet and made me smile a couple of times.
kb4jc (Signed) on Sep 06, 2011 09:07 pm (
Chapter 5)
great story....tears are in my eyes...it was soooo good
Mizuagi (Signed) on Sep 01, 2011 05:30 am (
Chapter 5)
This was very good. Different from other stuff I've read before. The whole "flashback" stuff was what got me hooked and on the first chapter wanting to know what she had. I don't even know what else to say, I just really enjoyed it. :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 07:21 pm (
Chapter 5)
YAY! He's gonna ask her out, way to go JC I'm so proud of you, come here, let me give u a hug..lolz That was good story, I like this line here "Your kid is hanging with guys more 7 times his age who still act like four year olds." I agree on that, hahah.. and it was funny that Justin was staring at the wedding photo while JC was playing the song..lolz Typical...and that was a good heart to heart talk that Justin and JC had as well..I liked that.. :)
grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 05:13 pm (
Chapter 1)
Good introduction...sad and sweet at the same time
sonadora (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 05:07 pm (
Chapter 5)
Nice story! I actually had to chuckle a bit at the part where his dream/flashback was cut off by Ian just when Jess was about to say what was wrong with her on the first chapter. Sounds very much like something I would do if I were writing a similar scene. lol. Anyway. I couldn't blame him for missing Jess that much especially since they've been together for that long. And I also feel for him regarding the unsuccessful surgery. It's very painful getting your hopes up only to find out that your chance for a better life ended up speeding up the way to that unwanted road. Geez, I'm getting talkative, aren't I? So I'll stop here now. Haha. It's nice that he's trying to move on though. Good job. :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 01:01 pm (
Chapter 4)
Yeah JC, just do it, I know its hard for you to let go of Jess, but I think she would want you to move on, and THAT is one of the worse news ever, what the doctor said to JC, that the kidney surgery failed, *tear..that is oh so sad.
But on a lighter note, Ms. Ginger had the hots for JC, oh wait..Ms. Granger, HA! And this line here had me laughing "-"She's more than pretty, I'll tell you that," Chris mumbled. "I'd like to rip her" LMAO! Thats Chris to ya..lolz Good job on this chapter..I like it. :)
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 12:46 pm (
Chapter 3)
Man why am I being so emotional today? I think I need another box of Kleenex tissues..lolz...but yayy they found a donor, but what happened?? I must read the next chapter to find out..
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 12:34 pm (
Chapter 2)
*tear :( No JC, don't blame yourself, it's not your fault that she had to go, she had an illness. This line here "That hole in my heart is one that's never going to be healed," :( This is good, its a bit sad though..but I wanna read the next chapter.. *grins*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 12:12 pm (
Chapter 1)
*grabs Kleenex tissues* What happened to Jess?? :( This is just soo sad. And the little boy sounds so cute. Aww..I like Daddy JC stories.. :) This is good, *reads next chapter*
fastmelodic (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 04:39 am (
Chapter 4)
Hmm... Well, it was definitely worth reading! I love it!
More soon...?
fastmelodic (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 04:34 am (
Chapter 3)
Oh, the anxiety! Ughhh!
Chapter four!
fastmelodic (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 04:30 am (
Chapter 2)
Onto chapter 3!!
God, I love it! ^__^
fastmelodic (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 04:23 am (
Chapter 1)
Ohmygod! I love the first chapter! -goes to read chapter 2-
