WOW! Well I hope you know Zee, I really do. OMG! She was tempting him, all JC wanted was a hug from her, and she was just teasing him, ahem..but since you described the curly haired JC, and he's looking like that.. ;)
These lines here: I saw that beastly Lion awaken in his eyes. "Don't give away information you don't want used against you," JC warned.
Thats right, unleash the beast.. *grins*
I'm so happy you updated. :D And I hope your thanksgiving went well..this was a great read, anything that involves JC and his naughtiness is like wonderful.
Author's Response: Yes! How the tables have turned, right? We usually don't see Zahra as the one who is seducing and enticing JC into doing things, it's almost always the other way around. But...things are changing between them and they themselves are in the process of changing. You never know what could happen! Thank you, my thanksgiving was great and I hope yours was as well. Thanks for the review. :]
Wow... well, that escalated quickly! haha
They should do it again so they can finally be together! If JC threatens me like that, I'll probably jump him. lol Nice update!
Author's Response: Lol! I know, it's obvious, now more than it ever has been, that JC wants a relationship with Zahra and even though she admits she wants the same through her actions, she's still in a very confused area. Thanks for your review. :]
I'm happy to see you updated. I missed this story.
I really hope that Zee is prepared to lose JC and/or Justin over the choices she is making. To quote a song that these two wrote together. "When you play with fire you get burned." Jumping back-n-forth between JC and Justin is like playing with fire, doing it all behind JC's back...will most likely get her burned. The fact that she doesn't want anyone to know should make her stop and ask herself why that is. lol
Great update!
Author's Response:
I think Zahra knows that her actions aren't great, but the way she thinks of what she is doing, is very unconventional. In general, the situation at hand is very complicated: she has feelings for two people that happen to be close friends and also close friends with each other. That's never a territory you want to step in. But how does she make it work with one, if she doesn't know how deeply she feels for the other? It's tricky.
But thank you so much for your review. I WISH I knew who you were, you seem like someone whom it'd be great to toss ideas back and forth with.
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YAY! :D I love that Zee and Justin are sharing the heart-to heart convo and Zee is revealing the feelings to him, even if she is talking about JC. I also liked the fact when she came home and her older brother had a friend, hmm..I wonder who's the friend, careful Zee, don't fall for him next.. ;)
I'm glad you updated though, looking forward to the next one.. :)
Author's Response:
Yes, they needed it. As I've always said, communication is so important for the relationship between JC, Justin, and Zahra. And I don't think Zahra will be barking up that tree....lol.
Thanks for the review! :]
Author's Response:
Really? Wow....thank you, that's such a lovely comment. I truly appreciate it.
Thanks for your review. :]
Hmm..what did Chris wanted to say??
Bur OMG! I LOVE THE BEACH SCENE! Ok, I'm sorry for shouting, it was really..HAWT and naughty.. That whole section of JC and Zahra doing more than just "talkin" totally makes up for it. GUH! I mean, JC, at the beach, at night?? Looking like that?? Heck yes..I'll be like, "Come here you, lay it on me."
Ok, let me stop..lolz
Now, on to Justin, looks like he wants to be intimate with her, but it looks like he and Zahra don't have that extra "oomph" that she and JC have...hmm. And I find it interesting that she wanted to give JC some "space" between them, but the passionate love-making totally makes up for that "space" ;)
Thank you for updating, and yay! You are on a break..for now. So update when you can.. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I mean even in imagination, I don't think anyone would turn "Bahamas JC" away....lol.
It does seem that he wants something with her and maybe you're onto something in there not being that extra "oomph", but Zahra seems to know what she's doing. Me as a writer and you as a reader just have to trust in her decision and see where it takes her.
Thanks for the review, just a week and a half left before I'm have that much needed break!
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YOU FINALLY UPDATED! AHH! OMG! I"M SO HAPPY! lolz Ok, ok, *breathes* these lines here, *drools* *swoons* "I leaned against the door frame, breathing heavily, catching my breath while I heard Cel's amused cackle. Jerk. I gave her the finger, finally laying my eyes on JC. Big mistake. Big damn mistake. He was wearing a white, long-sleeved striped shirt with the sleeves turned up, white long pants, small rip across the knee area, and flip flops. The scruff on his face, his damp, curly hair... Have mercy. JC looked fucking amazing.
"Holy sh...," I said.
Holy Shiznet is right....GUH.. Another great moment was when the guys were singing at the aquarium, SO EPIC! *watches on youtube*
This was a great piece, and yes it has been a while, at first I was like "wait, what story is this?? Then I was like "OH! YAY!"n *dances*
You are making me want him now..lolz
Thanks for the update. :D Hope all is well..
Author's Response: I know! It's been so long and I'd just gotten so stuck. I missed it, and thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it.
Author's Response: I'm working on it, I've got REAL bad block right now. I'm trying to get back into my groove. It's coming soon. Thanks for asking though. :]
How do I know he won't cheat on me? I don't. How does he know I won't cheat on him? He doesn't. JC loves me, I know this. I love him.....
Intersting how she didn't say or think that JC knows she loves him. Hmmm? She never seems to really want him unless he is, in her eyes, unavailable to her. If he would glance at another girl right now, she'd want to be with him and be pissed that he wasn't available for her. lol JC hasn't always done the right thing when it comes to her but it's hard to do the right thing with someone when that someone has no idea what they want the right thing to even be.
Great update, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: That's an interesting take on things. Zahra isn't realizing that she's accused JC of not knowing what he wants, all the while, she has NO clue what she wants. It seems she doesn't fully understand how JC truly feels about her, nor her about him, because she feels that because they started out on an uneven keel, it will continue to be that way.
Woo hoo Bahamas! Man.if you described JC like THAT? Wow..things may happen there b/tween me and him. Was it the Atlantis look cause if it was then *swoon* :P
And Zahra doesn't who she wants does she? HA! This is good, thanks for the update. Love it!
Author's Response:
Yes, it definitely is the Atlantis look JC is rocking. I think it's one of his best looks. Curly hair, that tropical breeze, a tan, and some scruff?
Yum.
Author's Response: Aww, I know, I know...lol. Thanks for reviewing. :]
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