Well, I would like to say I didn't see that one coming but...lol And, what hot blooded JC fan wouldn't have killed to be in her shoes in this chapter?
I'm also having a bit of a awww and snicker moment because a little JC or Zahra running around will be or maybe I should say would be so awesome...I mean, finally someone that would at least have a reason to act like a child when they don't get their way. HA! Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Everybody saw it coming, even Zahra. She knew it. Yes, I definitely agree, it was a fun chapter to write. JC, a jacuzzi tub....even I'M having hot-flashes thinking about it...lol.
Mini JC and Zahra...lol. It would be awesome, because yes, now there would be another person to act like a child along with them. Who knows what can happen, though. Thanks, and thanks for reviewing. :]
QUE??? Pero como va ser chica! Sorry I went Spanish on you..HA! Ok um, WHAT?? What is this woman? She?? JC?? WOWWW..Dangnabbit where do I start? Ooooh love the CFTC, yes hot guys especially if its *NSYNC guys.. JC, curls, Knights Tshirt(did you know that when I was in HS, Knights was the mascot? :P) Alrighty, these words here:
Let this be a lesson: Wrap. It. Up. No matter what age you are, teenager, adult, we all turn into imbeciles when we're horny.
Regardless, what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas.
True, true...but that hasnt happen to me..yet. I think my brain will go to the drain if you describe JC like THAT, the tub scene?? Oh my goodness! HOT! This is soo great and just wow..thanks for the update.. :D I love fanfics..lolz
Author's Response: ESPANOL'D ME!?!??! Hahaha, it's cool. Everyone knows that only that type of foolishness happens in the world of JC and Zahra....lol. They can't control themselves, they think with their body parts and emotions until something stupid happens. HENCE, this chapter. JC and the tub, it was hard trying to write it myself....lol. Thanks for the review. :]
Author's Response:
Really? Well, thanks for finally leaving me a review, I appreciate it. And thanks for volunteering to be a Beta for me, but someone already volunteered for me and I said yes. Again, thanks for wanting to help me out.
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Author's Response: LOL! Haha...thanks, I'm working on it. :]
Let the games begin all right..WOO! I love this. OOOh! I love how Zee and JC had a bit of trouble sleeping together in the same bed, but they had feelings and couldn't do anything, I respect that, but that would be difficult..lolz I like these lines here:
"Alright Zee, then I'll respect your wishes. I'll do whatever you want me to," JC agreed.
"You will? Whatever I want?" I asked.
He nodded. "Anything."
"Hold me..."
*SIGH* May you hold me now JC? Seriously..*dreamy grin*
Now, let me step off of my JC cloud for a bit, I wanna go on those inflatable chair thingies, soo much fun..haha Chris, "He's 30" LOL! I love you too Chris..no matter how old you are.. What a great update, :D Loved this.
Author's Response:
They have feelings, yes, that they're having trouble controlling because, of course, they haven't really addressed their true emotions toward one another. They're both very stubborn, and that's what you get with your Aquarius and your Leo....lol. What's great about their dynamic, I think, at least, is that they're still willing to be there for one another, even if things aren't going well between them. JC's a big sweetheart, what can you say? Lol. I love writing the bits about Chris, but I totally love how fun he is. :]
Thank you, and thanks reviewing.
"Then let me frolic with you." JC! You little FREAK you, let me have a little talk with you, like now! LOL! Alrighty, these two lovebirds at LEAST are communicating with eachother, I love the fact that Justin booked them the same room, HA! :D And sharing just ONE bus with *NSYNC, in Vegas, wouldn't be so bad at all..I would LOVE it..and since this story takes place in CFTC era, where JC had the curls with the blonde highlights..OMG! HOTNESS!
Above all, Im loving this a whole lot. Great job, thanks for updating.. :D
Author's Response:
Communication is JC and Zahra's BIGGEST problem. They do not know how to communicate with one another, and when they do, even if it's an argument, at LEAST they're getting it out in the open.
My favorite era was from laround late 2001 to 2003 when JC was rocking the curly hair. I am a total sucker for curly hair. And during that Atlantis show, when Justin AND JC were curly...I was in hot man heaven...lol.
Thanks for the review. :]
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Author's Response: LOL! Oh wow, I'm shocked! There's no faith in JC....BUT, then again...how many times have they tried to stop their situation and it's NEVER been successful? Communication is key in ANY relationship, whether romantic or platonic, it's just their both so stubborn to realize it. You gotta give them a point each for trying, though. Thanks for your review. :]
Well, isn't that quite the question? lol Now we are finally getting somewhere...okay, it's JC and Zahra so one step forward actually means ten steps backwards.
I can't wait to see how JC answers that one and I also can't wait to see how Zahra interprets what he says, because lord knows neither of them actually ever hears what the other is really saying to them.
I still want them to get together though. lol
Author's Response:
It definitely is quite the question...lol. And yes, it's pretty obvious that with these two, any step in the RIGHT direction means back-tracking.
Thanks for your review. :]
WOW! The kitchen scene where JC and Zee was getting a bit heated huh?? HUH?? Ok let me stop.. *giggles* I really love when the guys are described as the Scooby Doo gang, and LOL! Lance as Fred. Too funny. I liked this line here "Chris is a basket case, he doesn't count," I answered. LMAO! :D
Hmm..can Zee really let JC go?? AHHH! This is great, love this. Thanks for updating.. :)
Author's Response: Things are always heated between those two dorks...lol. I loved that reference, too. It cracked me up when I thought about it, because they can DEFINITELY be the Scooby Gang....hehe. That's another big question, can she really let him go, because that's one of her greatest issues. Thanks for reviewing. :]
YAY! A sequel! *GASP* JC still loves Zee, and Zee still loves JC, hmmm...but OOH! The dinner with her and Chris Montez..tee hee..she liked that kiss he gave her?? Ooohh but what about JC, who was sad when he called her, saying that he still misses her..and Emmanuelle is just a frd huh?? Sure JC, sure.. ;) This is good, thanks for updating..
Author's Response:
Of course a sequel! I'd already been writing it for some time now, and I wanted to do something else before posting it, but I couldn't put my focus onto that story, because I'd so badly wanted to post this one. And....everyone knows the story of JC and Emmanuelle....we all know that she's not "just a friend"....lol. Thanks for your review! :]
I am so excited to see this newest sage begin in our favorite trios lives. Reading this chapter I still see such childishness in Zahra. She immediately went on the defensive upon seeing JC because he wasn't doing what she thought he should be doing when she came to tell him about her realization of her true feelings. Something she realized only after sleeping with his best friend. Imagine if she was a guy and came to that conclusion in the same way, then ask yourself whether or not he wouuld get slapped. So, being pissed at JC seems a bit hypicritical at best in this situation. Whether he knows they slept together or not is irrelevant because she does know and instead of saying oops, my bad she is all asshole! lol
And, it also seems a bit short-sighted to decide that JC is making a friend wtih Emmanuelle to make her jealous yet, she is now kissing Chris, and can she be so sure her reasons aren't the same.
Basically, it's hard to say that someone is running away from you when you have really never stood there long enough to see them run. That can be said of both Zahra and JC.
Yes, had a lot to say! Hope it all made sense. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I don't even know what to say...just...
=D
Thanks for your review. :)
