Aww, while I'm glad you completed this story, I'm sad that I don't have another chapter/work of yours to look forward to. I always loved how closesly you stuck to the real timeline and paid attention to details such as the clothing.
You know, you're leaving a gap between this story and Los Tres Amigos...
Author's Response: Lol. There are quite a lot of gaps. As a beloved Timberlake would say... "You never know..."
Its over?? :(
Oh man! This was such a GREAT story, now I remembered some stuff! Zee grew up with JC and Justin and have to many obstacles together, it saddens me that she didn't stay with JC, because he actually loved her, despite all the complications.
These lines here: Who knows, maybe one day the perfect guy'll just land right on my doorstep.
Maybe.
I wonder if...well.. ;)
I wish JC would show up on my doorstep..tee hee.
But one can dream huh?? lolz
Above all, this was a great read, like I said. It was a bit of a wild ride while it lasted.. :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for being such a loyal reader through everything. I really appreciated your comments.
Ok, I REALLY had to refresh my memory for this, its been AWHILE!
I got confused with the chapters, cause I think one was posted first before the other but I did have the chance to read it.
These lines here: "You're supposed to live. Go get married and have children. Be happy. That's what you have to do," I answered.
"Zahra...whatever I did, I'm sorry." He whispered, "But please don't leave me."
My heart broke.
"I'm not leaving you. You're leaving me...and it's better for you. I promise it will be," I assured
AWW!
And the convo with Justin was bittersweet, so I'm gonna have to read the other chapter to find out..
Author's Response: Sorry? Lol. I didn't want to do too much seeing as how I went back and forth using a real timeline. It was better to just spare myself with a decent ending, as it's been coming for a few chapters, and give the characters a decent ending. As this is the only time Zahra's ever meant her words...lol.
Author's Response:
I know it's been a good while. I looked at the day I published this and I myself was even shocked that it took me so long.
Thanks for your reviews. :]
Author's Response:
She's a piece of work, isn't she? Lol.
Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. :]
Damn, the ending got me. I just want 'em to be back together, man, though I do like hers and Justin's friendship. Can they please just get over themselves?
Please update again soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was actually pretty tough writing the latest chapter, and now looking back at it, I wish I could have developed it further.
Anyway, I plan to update very soon, and thanks for the review. :]
WHAT?! YOU DIDN'T! OMG! THE SUSPENSE!
I felt so bad for JC now, when he just started spilling his heart out and everything..OMG! These lines here: "I don't get why people leave me. Why don't they want me? It's like I've never been good enough. I mean, my birth mom didn't keep me, right? How great could I have been?" JC continued. *tear :(
Now on to Justin, he's gonna go release his single and is gonna have a huge ego and forget everyone Zee, go back to JC, I know you love JC. *tosses pillow on floor*
This was a GREAT chapter, thank you for updating.. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking around! :]
Awww poor JC
This is so perfect! I hope you update more often.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I appreciate it. :]
Author's Response: Thanks! :]
Ohhh *tear..he LOVES her, but Zee doesn't think that she can return that same love to him! Aww...
But anyway..these lines here yes.. "Let's go upstairs," he whispered. And just like that, I was in heat. How the fuck does he DO that?
"Josh don't do that to me..."
"You don't understand, Zee....you're not seeing what I am ," he said.
Yesh JC, you have ways.. ;)
Ahem..and Justin wants to record some stuff on his own..hmm.. :(
However, I'm happy you updated! :D This is a good chapter! Yay for Valentines Day challenge..lolz
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review.
:]
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it. :]
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, you don't know how much reading that means to me. I don't feel like an amazing writer, being complimented as such is really awesome.
Thanks for your compliment. :]
Author's Response: Lol, I can see that she's very much so making you shake your head in shame, lol. I don't guarantee she'll be upset with JC, this time around the actions were solely on her...but with that girl, you never know. Zahra is definitely one of those people who have to make all the mistakes she can in order for her to really get it. WHEN she will get it....is the mystery. Thanks for the review. :]
