Comments For Supremacy System
AngelEyes81 (Signed) on Sep 06, 2013 09:15 pm (Chapter 26: Moving Day)
Can't wait for more... :)


AngelEyes81 (Signed) on Sep 06, 2013 08:41 pm (Chapter 23: The Morning After)
Can't wait to see what happens from this night... ;)


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 08, 2013 05:42 pm (Chapter 20: Joint Venture)
Wait are you extending the story? I thought they were already sold and JC and lexie had hooked up? Eep

Author's Response: I am re-writing it a little and deleted some chapters.  I suggest re-reading it from at least chapter 11. The new version will  be going well into their life with isadora.  In this version Lexi and jc have not hooked up... Yet!  and there will be a happy ending. :)  


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Feb 08, 2012 08:37 pm (Chapter 19: Sold)

OOohh what does Jade have planned for them for this evening?? Hmmm.. a "date?" Yeah sure..grrrr.

Thanks for the update though..



Author's Response: Yeah well Jade's plans tend to not go well.  :) this time it's gonna be good.


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Feb 01, 2012 08:22 pm (Chapter 18: Friendly Gestures)

Yea tomorrow is another day..

I hope that one day Lexi or whoever tells Jade off about how she feels about everything..

Okay chapter, thanks for the update..



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 24, 2012 07:56 pm (Chapter 17: Assumptions)

Awww.. :( Looks like Chris and Isadora really want to continue their relationship, but its hard for them..

Nice job though.



Author's Response: Thanks, I am trying to update as much as I can  I have written parts here and there that need to be connected.  Chris and Isadora's relationship is about it get complicated - it's like an employee having a realtionship with their boss, while it can sometimes work out there are risks.


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2012 09:34 pm (Chapter 16: Intentions)

Jade slipped some drugs on Chris...or was it?? Hmm..

I like that Lexi told the guys what was going on with Chris though, and what Jade wanted to do to him if he didn't please Isadora..

Nice job, and thanks for the updates. :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2012 09:26 pm (Chapter 15: Date Night)
*dun dun dun* Isadora and Chris are getting to know eachother, I like the fact that he's into more food then intimacy, but Jade has something more evil up her sleeve I can tell..I despise her..


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2012 09:01 pm (Chapter 14: Any Way Out)

Poor Justin.. :( I hope Jade gets attacked by a wolf, or did she control the wolves too..

Though the fact that people are getting their refunds back because the guys aren't performing well is good, maybe she'll lose her head when she has no more money left, that'll be a sight to see.

*reads next chapter*



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2012 08:49 pm (Chapter 13: Seeds)

OMG! THAT FREAKIN WOMAN JADE! Oh I'm sorry, was I yelling?? lolz OOOh! She's such a manipulative control dominatrix freak..

I hope the tests don't work well..hmph. Good job though. :D



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2012 08:38 pm (Chapter 12: Plans and Promises)

Oh wow..

Ok..um Isadora liks Chris, but the way Jade was treating all of them is totally uncalled for.

Now, I like that JC and Lexsi had the time to talk to eachother, and express his feelings toward her..

*reads next chapter*



Megan (Anonymous) on Jan 15, 2012 03:26 pm (Chapter 14: Any Way Out)
Wow...can't believe that Justin did that to himself! Jade actually showed a little tiny bit of human by letting Justin have the night off! Let's just hope now that everything with Isadora goes well!


creativechaos (Signed) on Jan 14, 2012 12:21 am (Chapter 14: Any Way Out)

She just gets more evil by the second. First the idea to sell their sperm to women, now what she did to Justin. I hope she gets hers in the end.

I can't wait until Isadora arrives to save the day!



Author's Response: Oh trust me Jade will get hers...  I am so looking froawrd to writing that part :)


Megan (Anonymous) on Jan 10, 2012 02:22 am (Chapter 13: Seeds)
Ooooohhhhh what an evil bitch, can't believe that Jade would be that evil to try and make the guys into studs. Let's just hope that when the guys 'results' come back she wont get too pissed and Isadora gets there in time. Good update!


Megan (Anonymous) on Jan 05, 2012 04:21 pm (Chapter 12: Plans and Promises)
:) aww so glad that Lexi and JC got a chance to speak and let some of their emotions out. And I hope that Isa can work faster and get the boys and Lexi out of that horrible place. Then maybe Isa can find some happiness with Chris too! Good update :)




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