theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2011 07:51 pm (
Chapter 20)
AHHHHH! *goes back into hiding with JC who's under the blanket. :P
Ooooh so was it a dream? WOW, that was SO intense, and just vivid, it totally felt like I was watching a scary movie, I liked it, it was a pretty good Halloween story, had me on the edge of my seat. lolz
These lines here had me laughing, cause I can totally see Justin doing that "When he saw that there weren't any hanging on the hangers he picked up a red shirt off the ground and sniffed it. He grabbed a spray can off of his dresser and held the shit at arms length before spraying it all over. He smelled it again and smiled before pulling it on over his head. LOL!
Above all, great job on this! Thumbs up, and thanks for all the updates. :D
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2011 07:40 pm (
Chapter 19)
This is SO frightening. I like the fact that you put Eli's POV there..I would like to read the next chapter, oh yes I would. *scurries*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2011 07:31 pm (
Chapter 18)
OH MY FREAKIN! This chapter had me speechless. AHHH! Run Joey RUN! *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2011 07:20 pm (
Chapter 17)
*sobs* Poor Joey..this is terrible, simply terrible. Oh the things fanfics do to people.. *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2011 07:14 pm (
Chapter 16)
Really JC? Really?? *smacks forehead* Smart move you made there, but now the room is gonna be on fire.. I wanna know how this goes *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 08:01 pm (
Chapter 15)
WHAT?! That is all I'm saying in this chapter..oh wait, this line here had me laughing “I really don't believe that JC has to balls to get us out of here. He doesn't even have the balls to ask a girl out.” HA! This is great, but scary, this story is having me on the edge of my seat. :D Thanks for all the updates.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 07:53 pm (
Chapter 14)
OH NO! Justin?? He's a vampire, this is a nightmare, a terrible nighmare. *scurries to next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 07:49 pm (
Chapter 13)
*screams* I knew it! That Joseph freak! And his little servant too..oh noes!
Ok on a lighter note, I laughed at these couple of lines here "
“Why me?” Jace asked. “Why is it always me? I didn't want to come in the first place but you dragged me here. And then you stuffed me in your trunk. Oh, and let's not forget, you practically shoved me down the stairs because you think I'm going crazy. Well, who's the crazy one now?”
“Still you,” Trace said
LMAO! This is so good, *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 07:32 pm (
Chapter 12)
*gasp* They took Lance? Those goons! LOL Ooh! *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2011 03:42 pm (
Chapter 11)
See? I told you Chris, poor Chris, it takes alot for him to cry. And who is that spooky voice?? *dun dun dun. Oh and Im glad that Justin is there with Chris as well.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2011 03:33 pm (
Chapter 10)
LOL! What JC said. But thank you Trace for explaining it to him. *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2011 03:11 pm (
Chapter 9)
JC talking angrily to himself, saying that no ones listens to him was cute. Angry JC is cute. :P
Alright Lance, I like that little line here:
“What if the only reason we haven't found anyone here was because they were kept here for their own protection?”
We are getting somewhere, I wanna know whats behind the mystery of RavenCrest. :D Loving the updates. great job.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2011 02:58 pm (
Chapter 8)
Oh noes! *frantic* lolz JC is completely panicking right now, I wanna know what happens next cause this story is getting better and better in every chapter. :D
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2011 02:43 pm (
Chapter 7)
What the heck?? What do you mean Joseph?! So you are telling me that there is no guy here by the name of Chris? O_O AHH! I hope Lance finds him and figures everything out..this is good. *reads next chapter*
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2011 02:30 pm (
Chapter 6)
CHRIS! Hurry Justin get to him, you too JC. *reads next chapter*
