ahahaha Lance was an exotic looking bug or something. :P I laughed there. Nice storyline. I like that it was Chris' care for the guys that made him overcome the forces of the three witches. IF YOU KILLED JC i was gonna be so mad. haha but i'm not :P I can just picture all five of them somewhere with a bowl of popcorn in a dark room watching a scary halloween movie. :)) I love that image. And the ending when Chris answered the door after the guys woke him up and stuff freaked me out! Eh... Margaret. Creepy. But a good Halloween read! Nice work! :))

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D NOoo, I cant do that to him, I like happy endings..lolz and I wanted Chris to save them all, because he's always so quick witted and has good ideas. He's super Chris..lolz I'm glad you liked it. :)