Pool party with the guys! Oh so fun..
This line here: "Uh oh." Justin screamed like a little girl as she chased him around the pool. LOL I can so see him doing that..
And YES it has a VERY long time, glad you were able to update this, cause I really forgot about this story..tee hee. Its a good thing I remembered though as I was reading it.. :)
Author's Response: Yeah... I had a lot of ideas in my mind for this story and I didn't want to stop, but life sometimes gets in the way... Finishing college, baby #2 and all ;) There's lots more to come I promise.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you like it... I know it's been a long whle, but I'm back now and working on the next chapter :)
Chris continued, “there are actually two moles. We didn’t say anything before, because we weren’t sure. But now were pretty positive.”
I laughed at that, maybe it was the way Chris said two moles cause he explains stuff so well.. LOL
And ooh Tiffani and Maria, jealous of Maddy's relationship with JC, and probably Justin as well..haha.
Nice job though, thanks for the update.. :)
JC sat up too quickly in the bed and wound up falling on his ass on the floor. Madison let out a little giggle. LOL! *happy sigh* to wake up with that man in your arms, is pure heaven.
And I like this line here, yes well said: And if some fans have a hard time dealing with the fact that I’m not single, well than I guess they weren’t really fans in the first place… I true fan would want me to be happy,” JC emphatically added.
True fan here.. :)
I also like that the girls of Allure had random conversations and Lauren thought that JC and Maddy already done IT, hence, these lines here: "Well if it was me I would have jumped on that right away… Why waste time… Damn with the way he moves… He’s got to be good in bed.”
But I agree with Maddy and JC's relationship, they should take it slow, despite their careers. Nice job and thanks for the update.
Author's Response: I know, in my head I picture Joey as this fun-loving and silly guy... Lots more to come trust me! :D
Author's Response: I love Madonna's older stuff... It's so fun to dance to I couldn't resist!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying it :D
Awww..Kodak moments! :) That was really sweet, I would LOVE to have JC in my arms like that, just hug him and GUH! And the girls took a pic of them..lolz
This was a comforting, warm and fuzzy chapter, I liked it..Thanks for the updates..
P.S. I don't know if I told you this before, lolz but I have some stories of my own, maybe whenever you get the chance, you can read some of them..thankies.. :)
How DARE they call themselves fans? Hmph..those aren't fans, those are rats with wings..LOL Thank you Jeff for taking them out. Poor Madison though, that feels terrible, verbally assaulted like that.. :(
Now, that was a nice performance by "Allure" though, they were doing well, until the meet and greet.
And JC's gonna tell Johnny about him and Maddy going public..yeah! :D
Good chapter..nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your wonderful feedback... It's nice to know I have someone that's really liking my story... This is my last semester in college and so things are crazy busy in my life right now, and I can't update as often as I'd like... But it's a great stress relief...
Its good, Ok, what are Tiffany and Maria planning to do?? Now they are getting jealous, hmm..I like how Chris and Lance were eavesdropping on them.
Now at least Johnny is giving JC and Maddy "the okay" but they MUST follow the guidelines.
And I laughed at what Chris said about JC "Never took you for the Jealous-Possessive type C! Let me know if you need to talk… I took some classes about this stuff. It’s not healthy to keep it all bottled up inside… Just let it out man!” Chris chuckled at his own wittiness. “Boy am I good!” LOL
Lastly I like this part "Madison sprawled out on JC, nuzzled her face into his chest absorbing the smell that was uniquely him, while he lightly ran a hand up and down her arm." Then they kissed deeply, but lightly.. *happy sigh* How beautiful, man I WANT him..LOL
Nice job though, fanfics are so fun. :D
Gabriel sounds HOT, ahem..ok, but yeah JC is even hotter when he's angry..lolz
I laughed at these lines here "
“Care to tell me what’s going on?” Johnny looked at Justin first.
“Why do you gotta look at me first man?” Justin choked out. “Look at Chris… He’s over there looking all smug!” Chris’ face immediately turned impassive when Johnny looked at him.
And when JC broke Chris's piggy bank and Chris was throwing a fit? HA! So JC, are you heading into the terrible twos again?? LOL There was this one time in an interview, that JC broke Chris's lava lamp once..lolz
And I like how JC soften a bit when Madison told him that nothing was going on b/tween her and Gabriel, aww. :) I'm glad you updated.
WOO! Dry humping... :P With JC is not at all half bad..*giggles*
I laughed at these lines here "And I’m sure Chris’ lips don’t taste half as good as yours,” he whispered against her lips receiving a smile in response.
“Hey I resent that!” Chris yelled at him. “I’ll have you know I use cherry chapstick and my lips taste wonderful,” he gave the pair a perfunctory nod.
“Chris, first off I don’t honestly care what your lips taste like,”
LMAO! :D
Anyway, I like that they all had karaoke night, singing along to the 90s songs, oh so fun, while JC and Madison went for a little "fun" ;)
Nice job, I liked this chapter and thanks for the update.
Oohh...yep the girls know somethings up b/tween Maddy and a certain someone.. Uh huh.. ;) I like how she and JC were texting eachother back and forth, and no one knew anything.. tee hee..I like it so far, thanks for the update.