*cries* I'm out of Kleenex tissues. *tear
This was some chapter, the way JC "spoke" to her was so sad, all the words were just *sigh* saying that it'll be hard for him when Ian gets older, and he brings a girl home, wow..that would be something, lolz I can just imagine JC saying "Ian? Why are here so late?" LOL and I also like how Ian is so smart, the poem he wrote.. :( and JC was amazed, but then he said that his teacher helped him, lolz then he had a short attention span and went to play with the pigeon. :P
Nice job and thanks for the updates. :)
Wow when Ian gets his way, he gets it. Now, I like the flashback when JC was trying to build a swing..lolz and he said that he didn't need help..hahaha. I liked that bonding time they all had. :)
Then when Ian was making something special for Jess, and JC was helping him..and now he has to take him to that place..hmm.
Nice job though, thanks for the update. :)
*sobs* The speech b/tween Ian and JC, and Ian breaking down on not having a mommy was so sad. *grabs Kleenex tissues* But they are gonna work together on a "Mothers day" card.. so thats real thoughtful.. :)
And lolz the flashback with JC and the needle..enough said. tee hee. Nice job. Thanks for the updates.
Author's Response: The answers to how Jess died are in the first story of the series Stuck In A Flashback. It's called Best I Can. Hopefully you'll enjoy that story as much as you're enjoying this one. :)) Thanks for the read/review and if you do check out Best I Can, I hope you enjoy! I'll be posting more soon!
WOW! This was GREAT! Ooh Ooh! Ok let me pick out my favorite pieces. First off, there's a kid in my brother's kindy class and his name his Ian. AWW! :D Second, daddy JC is CUTENESS. And third I like these lines here, I find it sweet...lolz
JC frowned. "I gave it to Joey."
Lance nodded. "And Joey gave it to me and I gave it to Justin who gave it to Chris. We all know each other's codes for our houses."
JC rolled his eyes.
Above all, the part where JC was explaining about Suzanne, and it felt that he was middle school was just so hilarious. :D I like this story, would like to find out how this goes. :) Nice job.
love the chapter....i like this so far...can't wait to read more
