musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2013 06:34 pm (
Chapter 9)
What a witch and an immature brat heather is. I'd beat her to a pulp if I were JC. what the heck is her psychotic problem? Please I beg of you update soon. I want to see heather get a nice big slap in the face. :D
Author's Response: Haha - JC will find out what is going on soon, I'm sure. Thanks so much!
Megan (Anonymous) on Feb 05, 2012 10:57 pm (
Chapter 8)
Wow....just wow. Thats all I have to say about Heather's meddling. Seriously wtf? bitch. Ok, done ranting lol. Update soon please :)
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Feb 05, 2012 07:37 pm (
Chapter 8)
Ohhh Heather, that is low. You think jc's going to forgive you? I would slap that girl silly for even thinking of doing something so juvenile. Good chapter im addicted.
theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 05, 2012 12:38 pm (
Chapter 8)
She has gone cuckoo for cocoa puffs! LOL She changed the digits so that way Liz and JC won't be able to contact eachother?? Hmph! That freak..what is up with her?? Jealousy?? Angst?? Issues??Perhaps?? Hmm...overprotective little sibling..lolz
Good chapter....I liked it. :D Thanks for the updates..
theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 05, 2012 12:30 pm (
Chapter 7)
Mmm..JC shirt off?? *eyes roam his body* works for me.. :P
Now, the way JC drove to the overlook park was something, I liked how Liz tried to relax him a bit..
*reads next chapter*
champ (Signed) on Jan 25, 2012 10:38 pm (
Chapter 6)
keep them coming
Author's Response: Just posted 2 updates today! Thanks so much!
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Jan 25, 2012 12:54 am (
Chapter 6)
Oh man i would not want to be in a dark ally alone with heather. However shes just trying to protect jc, which i would do as well. I love it. Keep going.
Author's Response: Or alone in an empty house - check out the update I just posted...Thanks!
Megan (Anonymous) on Jan 24, 2012 01:42 am (
Chapter 6)
Well damn Heather sure makes a bad mean person. Poor Liz for having to experience that the first time she meets JC family. Bravo to JC for standing up for Liz though :). Hope things don't get to crazy with Heather and Liz. Good update!
Author's Response: Yeah, I was debating who to use for the bad person and Heather just seemed to fit that role in the story. Thanks so much!
TheFairLady (Signed) on Jan 23, 2012 07:10 pm (
Chapter 1)
Ooh. I think it was a good choice to make Heather upset! Of course it is a weird situation. Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! A brainstrom just hit - there's gonna be more trouble before it gets better.
theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 23, 2012 07:02 pm (
Chapter 6)
Ok what is wrong with JC's sister?? Hmph, Liz needs to be treated with respect, she doesn't even know her to throw a fit.. OOoooh! This is good, thanks for the updates. :)
Author's Response: It's going to get a lot worse before it gets better.......
theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 23, 2012 06:55 pm (
Chapter 5)
JC! You tease you! Oh yea payback is right, just watch mister..*takes blanket from JC* Just keep your jazz fingers to yourself, until we arrive at our destination... ;)
*reads next chapter*
Author's Response: Payback could be very interesting, I'm sure! LOL
kb4jc (Signed) on Jan 17, 2012 10:53 am (
Chapter 4)
ugh...you left me wanting more....good writing...can't wait to read more love the story
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just posted 2 new chapters...enjoy!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 15, 2012 06:52 pm (
Chapter 4)
LMAO! The maid! Man, in the heat of the moment with JC and that maid comes in..how embarassing. Her reaction must've been priceless,
Now that she's gone, time to resume action.. ;) Nicely done..thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Yeah, that would be super embarassing. Thanks!
Megan (Anonymous) on Jan 15, 2012 04:08 pm (
Chapter 4)
Haha that would definitely kill some of the mood to have someone walk in on you while having sex. Great little chapter :)
Author's Response: Lol - thank you!!
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Jan 15, 2012 02:41 pm (
Chapter 4)
LOL I actually laughed when I read this chapter. I thought that would be a bit embarrassing if someone walked in while I was having sex. Talk about mood killer.
Author's Response: Definite mood killer!
