Comments For Our Time
ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jan 01, 2012 10:17 pm (Chapter 3)

awww this was SO sweet :) Exactly what a Christmas story should be!

Merry Christmas/Happy New Year, dear! <3



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  And Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well!!


Whit1210 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 10:14 pm (Chapter 1)
Dad JC is truly adorable!  I can totally picture that man falling asleep mid-train building - great story and love the ending!

Author's Response: He is adorable...thank you so much!


Megan (Anonymous) on Dec 21, 2011 02:04 am (Chapter 3)
Awww :) I love Daddy JC stories and on top of that its a Christmas story too. Loved it, great job :)

Author's Response: Daddy JC is the best and add Christmas and wow.  Thanks so much!


Meg (Anonymous) on Dec 20, 2011 12:32 am (Chapter 3)
So sweet!! I loved it!

Author's Response: Awww... thank you!!


creativechaos (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 09:42 pm (Chapter 1)
AWWW! DaddyJC is always so great, I love him! I didn't expect the "surprise" at the end, my face looked like Cole's when he saw his new train set LOL! You did such a great job with this!

Author's Response: Awww...thank you so much - it was a surprise for everyone!


theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 07:52 pm (Chapter 3)

*squeals* I LOVED this. I like how Cole like all his new toys and the train he liked, and I also like the "regifting" of JC and Jenny, these lines here"JC laughter was so loud; it started the neighbor’s dog barking. LMAO!

And I also laughed when JC asked Cole that he was gonna have a brother or a sister, and Cole was like "I don't want one." Tee hee...soo cute. But he thought for about it and I guess he's gonna be excited.

Secret Santa is so fun..Nicely done. :D



Author's Response: Secret Santa is fun.  It's a great idea!  Thank you so much!!


theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 07:38 pm (Chapter 2)

I actually bought a train set for my brother this year, now all I have to do is assemble it, great.. LOL

These lines here "JC was a proud man and very much a perfectionist when it came to himself. If he put his mind toward something, he wouldn’t quit until he had accomplished his goal.." That is very true.

Now I'm glad that nothing serious happened to Cole, now he's fast asleep dreaming of Christmas morning.

And lastly these lines here: His arm curled around her back while his free hand locked with her hand and rested against the beat of his heart. Almost in unison, they sighed as they relaxed in their lover’s arms and fell asleep.  :)

*reads next chapter*



Author's Response: Hopefully, you won't have as much trouble as JC did, but I looked for the hardest looking toy to put together too.  Good luck assembling!


theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 07:20 pm (Chapter 1)
Absolutely, I love bath time.”

With a twinkle in her eye, Jenny laughed, “You just like to play with the boats.”

“It’s not all about the boats,” JC said quietly as his cheeks reddened.

LOL! Love Daddy JC fics, ok I like that he was eating the cookie dough, hahaha, and the way he was eating it..but now I wanna know what was that loud crash.. *reads next chapter*



Author's Response: Who wouldn't love bath time? LOL


musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 06:34 pm (Chapter 3)
Aww I love it. Hehe JC sleeping under the table, so cute.

Author's Response: He can sleep anywhere - lol!  Thanks!


MissM (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 05:31 pm (Chapter 3)
Adorable, heart warming story! Good job! 

Author's Response: Pure fluff - I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for all that you do!!


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 04:26 pm (Chapter 3)
Awwwww I loved this story!! I smiled throughout this entire chapter. Okay, loved thepart at the beginning when Cole jumped on JC when he woke up. I loved that image. And Jenny is pregnant! I loved their little gift exchanges :)) And i laughed out loud when Cole said that he didn't want a little brother or sister. haha aww But JC's all happy. He's a daddy and a husband and that's all I needed! I loved my present so thank you so so so much for writing it for me! ^_^ I enjoyed it! Merry early Christmas to you too! :)) Thanks so much!

Author's Response: I loved writing it - the prompts you wanted had most of the story writing itself!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 04:18 pm (Chapter 2)
My goodness, the kid pulled down the tree on himself! But I loved it for some reason when JC said, Cole, what hurts? Very father like and I love love love that! LOL at JC taking hours to put that train set together and then falling asleep with the screwdriver. aww I loved it when I got that picture in my head. *onto the next one*

Author's Response: He would make a great father.  I seearched for the hottest toys of the season and came across a really cool train table that looked hard to put together so...it made the story!


ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 04:15 pm (Chapter 1)
This was really cute! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 19, 2011 04:11 pm (Chapter 1)

You're my Santa! I literally squealed when I saw this posted! Awesome!

He has a son! ^_^ I'm all happy. LOL This is really cute so far! But that scream... *reads next chap*



Author's Response: Haha - I had to add some drama!!!  I was so happy to write it!




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