Comments For WitchCraft
Bastet_Baby (Signed) on Jan 05, 2012 06:15 pm (Chapter 3)
So I am a slow reader - but this is good so far. :)
Author's Response: Its okay, I'm glad you are enjoying it though. :)
Author's Response: Its okay, I'm glad you are enjoying it though. :)
Bastet_Baby (Signed) on Jan 04, 2012 04:08 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: Yeah I wanna go to Chris's house too, we should all go and have a BBQ.. lolz
1 chapter down - it's great so far. Can I go to Chris's house too?
Author's Response: Yeah I wanna go to Chris's house too, we should all go and have a BBQ.. lolz
Whit1210 (Signed) on Dec 24, 2011 07:24 pm (Chapter 6)
Very different plot, but I liked it. Love how you tied in Chris' fear of heights - very clever!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.. :)
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 01:10 am (Chapter 6)
I gotta say, this story was pretty creative and I liked that the main character was Chris. Okay, hazelcream pomegranate pepper potion?! haha Chris, why did you even ask? Wow. LOL And her parents are there now! That's sweet. LOL At the 'Teabag' nickname. Okay, just a little piece of my opinion. Work on the your uses of the quotation marks and other punctuation marks. I noticed some grammatical errors here and there. Cute friendship they developed. It was good!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you read, reviewed, and liked the story. :D My Secret Santa Bastet_Baby hasn't read it yet, so this is what she wanted as her prompt, hopefully she'll read it soon. Anyway, thanks for your advice, yeah I sometimes forget the quotation marks and stuff..lolz but overall, I'm glad you enjoyed it, this was something different, and it was fun to write about. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you read, reviewed, and liked the story. :D My Secret Santa Bastet_Baby hasn't read it yet, so this is what she wanted as her prompt, hopefully she'll read it soon. Anyway, thanks for your advice, yeah I sometimes forget the quotation marks and stuff..lolz but overall, I'm glad you enjoyed it, this was something different, and it was fun to write about. :)
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 01:03 am (Chapter 5)
I like how you wrote the last paragraph of this chapter :)) My gosh, Chris practically tortured the guy with his little riddles and questions. hehe Nice!
Author's Response: Yes he did! Chris tortured him with riddles..HA!
Author's Response: Yes he did! Chris tortured him with riddles..HA!
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 01:00 am (Chapter 4)
Author's Response: Yeah thats a nice song.. ;)
What the hell is Chris gonna do? LOL Bowling balls? Pans? Pots? Not to mention he's a prankster. -next chap-
Oh, and I really like that you used Just Wanna Be With You :D My fave song off the debut album!
Author's Response: Yeah thats a nice song.. ;)
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 12:55 am (Chapter 3)
Never heard this song but I think I should go look it up :D Ugh, Chris is awesome. I wanna meeet him soo badlyy. LOL I'm interested to see where this thing is going between Chris & Serenity.
Author's Response: You have never heard of that song?? I'll send you the link via Twitter..
Author's Response: You have never heard of that song?? I'll send you the link via Twitter..
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 12:51 am (Chapter 2)
LOL I laughed at the Sara Lee part! :P Serenity, Chris. She didn't know who *NSYNC was? :O At least Chris showed her everything :)) haha I'd love if he'd go back and do that just for himself. -sigh- Okay, this is good. Just keep your watch on where you're putting the quotation marks and such. -next chap-
Author's Response: Yep Sara Lee! lolz Had to add some humor in there.. and thanks for the advice. :)
Author's Response: Yep Sara Lee! lolz Had to add some humor in there.. and thanks for the advice. :)
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 12:45 am (Chapter 1)
A safe place? Then yea, go to his house :)) LOL I wanna go to Chris' house tooo... But ahem.. Moving onto the next chapter :P This is interesting! And it's a Chris story. Nice change!
Author's Response: Yes it is! :D Im sure his house its so fun! lolz
Author's Response: Yes it is! :D Im sure his house its so fun! lolz
