AHHH! This was really great. Loved it. Like how she was just a nice girl, then wanted to become a naughty girl, just for the night..tee hee. Reminds me of that song "Good Gilr go bad" by Cobra Starship.
I like these lines here “I gave you my heart. The sex was your punishment for trying to be naughty.” :P
Oh by the way, you were my Secret Santa, I finished writing your story its called "Witchcraft" have a look-see whenever you get the chance. :)
Author's Response: Yes I saw you post it but I didn't want to read it until I finished mine, then we went away this weekend so I am just getting to it, read the frist chapter so far and I LOVE it. Hope the read more today.
Author's Response: :) thanks, I am so glad that you liked it.